What I want:
I want poems about anything thats ever really hurt you. Family, friends, loves...anything you've ever had to deal with that has hurt you, make ME feel it.
What I don't want:
Poetry that is suicidal, religious, erotic or political...
AS YOU CAN SEE prewrites are open, IF you want to enter a prewrite YOU MUST ALSO enter a fresh write.
I WILL dq if you enter only a prewrite.
Rules:
Any pictures used, give credit where credit is due.
Spell check.
Absolutly NonE Of ThIs CrAp.
Write whatever style you want, it is your work not mine.
Any length, as long as if its epic I am going to WANT to finish reading it.
If you enter a prewrite, you must ALSO enter a fresh write.
I reserve the right to close this for whatever reason, and DQ any entries I have reason to dq.
Points and rewards will go up with entries and quality.
You are more likely to win if I can really feel what you are trying to say, don't tell me about it, make me feel it. Good luck and I look forward to reading the entries.
http://www.antithesiscommon.com/Issue2/tn/200_Licudine_Broken_Heart.jpg Picture credit.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 23
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: This was hard for me to judge, sorry I coulnd't comment on everyones. The list of winners is because throughout reading the poetry those poems stuck in my mind for seperate reasons, the use of words and form the expression all counted toward it. There were a lot of other poems that were good, and some that... shouldnt have been entered, but thats how contests roll not every poem will be what you want. Either way grats to all the winners thanks to everyone for entering and there will be another new contest coming soon.
Contest Winners
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The day we kissed I swore to myself
That we would stay like this forever,• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 5114711, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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I thought that there were sparks here,
within the darkness of my heart,• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
My words fall upon def ears
as your screams echo in mine• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Entries [29]
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just silly thoughtsby michichoeret 35 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 5 8:24 AM. In Thoughts• Viewed by judge.
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It's the same old story
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I feel all alone at this time
I am wishing to get my pain out in this little rhyme• Commented on by judge. -
I know what I did was
wrong,by HatedLoveDieingRose 25 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 5 9:23 AM• Commented on by judge. -
We were close friends.
Best friends to beby Englandgirl2008 19 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 5 9:36 AM• Commented on by judge. -
I feel lost and so alone, cause you'r not hereby skittles loves you 22 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 8 9:40 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Cerulean Sunrise 12 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 5 12:50 PM. In Contest• Viewed by judge.
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A broken emotional slumber
A morphine to the painby Night Terrors 24 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 6 4:03 PM. In Pain• Viewed by judge. -
You don’t see what this does to me
penetrating my mind with liesby Pretty Girl 22 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 7 9:06 PM. In Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Teenage thinking, Teen issues, Depressed• Viewed by judge. -
Everyone ignores me when I’m trying to say
I just wanna wish all of this pain awayby adolescente 66 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 6 5:59 PM. In Angst, Contest, Life, Pain, Sad, Frustration• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i wipe the tears from my face,
as i convince myself it will be okay.by liascookin 20 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 24 6:13 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
the numbness is completely overwhelming
i don't know when it became so realby adolescente 12 lines, on Mar 12 4:51 PM• Viewed by judge.
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Comments
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May we enter two fresh writes?
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Yeah sure if you would like to ^_^
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Coolio. Thanks you.
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Sooo I kind of swore in mine...and you know me and swearing not really my cup of tea on my poetry....let me know if you want me to remove it...
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umm... i am not finished with my fresh write.. and i ask you not to dq me yet ..
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I will be back tomorrow with my other poem I am writing it on paper first easier to scratch out you know lol
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umm i took the same experience for the fresh write but wrote it differently






