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Write me a commercial

I have an idea for a really bad commercial to prevent people from smoking. I am writing it as a poem which I will post after the contest or during, whenever I finish it, but I would like you to write me a commercial in poetic form.

My poem, not too great, but whatever
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5109387

In your authors notes, explain what your commercial is about, just incase I do not understand.

I want nothing erotic
I would like it to make some sense
funny is a plus ^_^
Do not make it too long, short attention span

Nothing too bad, I want it ok for my daughter to read, she is 9

No foul language
No StIcKy CaPs
try and check other poets ideas so you dont copy
be nice and comment on at least 2 other poets

thank you and have fun

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on March 9
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you all for your entries, this was an interesting contest. I really enjoyed the entries and I hope you enjoyed reading all of them too. Take care and be well always

Contest Winners

  1. Fat Flush
    It's the new revolutionary diet pill!
    by Hope Angel 27 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 3 9:59 PM. In Humor, Contest
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Chocolate Bar
    Step right up!
    Come buy me...
    by islekine 20 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 5 12:00 AM
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Life Saver
    Swimming in a cherry sea
    I got a cramp in my leg
    by Sunshine Princess 6 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 3 3:14 PM
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Bathroom fun
    Please will you buy
    this product of ours
    by Spiritual Poet 14 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 4 11:19 AM. In Contest, Humor
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [6]

1 - 6 of 6
  • Gig-o-matic
    Euphoria’s utopia is just a remote control away,
    a single button’s power
    by penman 26 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 3 3:48 PM. In Other, Humor
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The Truth
    They say that every day,
    Smoking kills the equivalent of a small town.
    by Ryan79 18 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 9 3:49 PM. In Contest, Hope, Life, Society
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • Heroesrox
    March 3
    Edit | Reply
    Well, I smoke. Can i still enter?


    • Scyphon
      March 3
      Edit | Reply
      Yea, you can still enter
      It was just an odd idea I had at like 2 AM
      I had a lot in my mind
      sorry, nothing really against smokers