Abuse is wrong. and the abused should never be blamed.
make me cry.
make me cry.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 19
- Rewards: Gold: 625, Silver: 250, Bronze: 100
- Final notes: Every Poem was good. the winners deserve a hug. and applause. well for writing wonderfully sad and tortured poems. ty for entering and gracing me with wonderful poems, about such a horrible topic.
Contest Winners
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One lonely child walked heavens path,
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If only things were different,
and I was normal.by lowercase prelude 32 lines, 21 comments, on Jul 15 1:02 PM 2008. In Sad, Abuse, Pain
Silver trophy winner
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I felt the roughness of your hands,
where I didn't want them to be.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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She sits in the darkness, not daring to speak / For he might hear her, know shes not asleep. / If hes not in the mood he will let her be, 'stop shaking' she whispers, angry at the sounds of her own breath. / Please notby nonplus 9 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 12 8:39 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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In the soft crisp air
you can hear the whispers• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
so you want to know what it's like
living in a house of pain and fear• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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She was only 8.
He took advantage• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
They didn't have to say it but I knew
These boys in the leafhouse• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
and still...
I love you.
by Beautiful-N-Broken 23 lines, 18 comments, on Oct 23 3:43 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
the blood is dripping down
my knees are in the dirtby S a r a h 4 5 42 lines, on Mar 4 10:50 PM• Viewed by judge. [remove] -
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I am forever eleven years old sitting
in the living room my brother holding• Viewed by judge. [remove] -
Beaten and fallen, unable to stand
I cry out for you and reach for your hand• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
When I was three or four, daddy came through my bedroom door, very late at night.
He whispered sweetly, in my ear, of his great love, andby gray2020 beard 17 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 15 1:00 AM• Viewed by judge. [remove] -
He said,
"I've been working out my dysfunctions on this canvas"by FightOffYourDemons 23 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 11 3:47 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by FleetingImage 54 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 13 10:50 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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So bite my fair fingers
They pluck only the stringsby Emmyb 30 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 2 10:51 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
May be triggering, contains some detail of abuse• Viewed by judge.
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I pray to myself every day,
Just trying to make it through the pain.by PorcelainSoul 47 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 6 1:03 AM. In Children, Innocence, Abuse, Humanity, Society, Inspirational, Message to the world• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Inside the darkness is where he waits,
alluring all innocence into a black hole.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i stare out the window and contemplate
my broken soul, my body that bore the bruisesby ApollosMuse 40 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 4 4:40 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by FightOffYourDemons 38 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 17 11:42 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Legendary 24 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 24 1:48 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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thank you for the silver trophy
i am honored
congrats to the other winners -
Thank you for awarding my entry with the Gold trophy - I am so glad you like my sad tale!
Congrats to all the other winners


