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Seeping Tears, bleeding Fears

Abuse is wrong. and the abused should never be blamed.

make me cry.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on March 19
  • Rewards: Gold: 625, Silver: 250, Bronze: 100
  • Final notes:
    Every Poem was good. the winners deserve a hug. and applause. well for writing wonderfully sad and tortured poems. ty for entering and gracing me with wonderful poems, about such a horrible topic.

Contest Winners

  1. One lonely child walked heavens path,
    but was soon confronted, by the dark.
    by Timespell 22 lines, 97 comments, on Jan 17 8:18 PM 2008. In Contest, Dark
    Gold trophy winner
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  2. If only things were different,
    and I was normal.
    by lowercase prelude 32 lines, 21 comments, on Jul 15 1:02 PM 2008. In Sad, Abuse, Pain
    Silver trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. They delivered me out of profound darkness,
    With the kissing promise of saving light.
    by Paloszoo 52 lines, 33 comments, on Sep 5 5:46 PM 2008. In Sad, Pain, Angst, Depression, Sadness, My life
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. by Viyanna Rosemarie 18 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 21 3:08 PM. In Abuse, Contest, Dark, Sad, Pain, Life
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. I felt the roughness of your hands,
    where I didn't want them to be.
    by Sharitti 33 lines, 18 comments, on May 15 11:28 PM 2008. In Sad
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. by lowercase prelude 26 lines, 28 comments, on Jan 14 11:46 PM. In Life, Dark, Pain, Society, Abuse
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. Daddy's little girl was such a princess
    She was so beautiful and loving
    by Isolatedsouls17 66 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 10 5:48 PM 2008. In Family, Self, Teen issues, Hate, Anger, Abuse, Emo, Life, Sad, Dark, Pain, Society
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. You were only five years old,
    and grew up in a world of hatred.
    by Jeremy0826 100 lines, 37 comments, on Feb 1 10:11 PM. In Hope, Life, Thoughts, Sad, Dark, Abuse, Society
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. She sits in the darkness, not daring to speak / For he might hear her, know shes not asleep. / If hes not in the mood he will let her be, 'stop shaking' she whispers, angry at the sounds of her own breath. / Please not
    by nonplus 9 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 12 8:39 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  10. In the soft crisp air
    you can hear the whispers
    by lovingpoet 15 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 3 7:34 AM. In Abuse, Life, Sad
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  11. so you want to know what it's like
    living in a house of pain and fear
    by Tears of Roses 20 lines, 17 comments, on Oct 16 9:37 PM 2008. In Abuse, Personal, Pain
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  12. Abuse is wrong, but sometimes the hurt runs deaper that just the abuse!
    by Shakes-spear 44 lines, 21 comments, on Dec 8 11:48 PM 2005. In Love, Dark, Hope, Life, Thoughts, Society
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  13. Sometimes we all
    play hide and seek
    by Shakes-spear 31 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 3 4:55 PM 2007. In Abuse, Childrens, Hope, Life, Sad, Personal, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  14. by Ceridwens Soul 27 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 3 7:38 AM. In Contemporary, Dark, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  15. by DinkyDiver 61 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 26 7:22 PM. In Contest, Abuse, Adult, Angst, Dark, Personal, Pain
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  16. She was only 8.
    He took advantage
    by AngelsKissesJenna 21 lines, 15 comments, on Feb 27 9:50 AM. In Contest, Pain, Personal, Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  17. The eyes in the shadows
    by DinkyDiver 16 lines, 9 comments, on Aug 25 5:50 PM 2008. In Abuse, Pain, Personal, Sad, Dark, Life
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  18. They didn't have to say it but I knew
    These boys in the leafhouse
    by Judith Chandler 28 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 25 6:19 PM 2007. In Abuse, Contest
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  19. Vaguely recalling the scent Old Spice leaves
    And aching, down… down there for the touch he left,
    by Viyanna Rosemarie 31 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 3 1:04 PM. In Angst, Abuse, Life, Pain, Personal, Dark, Contest
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  20. the blood is dripping down
    my knees are in the dirt
    by S a r a h 4 5 42 lines, on Mar 4 10:50 PM
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  21. by WednesdayJade 45 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 9 9:20 PM. In Personal, Pain, Abuse, Adult, Noguest
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  22. by WednesdayJade 54 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 3 10:07 PM. In Personal, Sad, Pain, Abuse, Rape, Evil, Noguest
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  23. To just glace you will see the smiling mask on my face.
    But look into my eyes and you see pain in its place.
    by HellsBrokenAngel 29 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 8 1:41 AM. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Society, Sadness, Abuse
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  24. I am forever eleven years old sitting
    in the living room my brother holding
    by Swan song 38 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 13 12:44 AM. In Abuse
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  25. every tear drop an unseen word
    allways seen but never heard
    by sorrowfulemo 13 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 13 9:31 PM. In sad, life, emo, pain, sorrow
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  26. Beaten and fallen, unable to stand
    I cry out for you and reach for your hand
    by Lady Darkana 25 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 14 2:21 PM. In abuse, pain, sad, life
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  27. When I was three or four, daddy came through my bedroom door, very late at night.
    He whispered sweetly, in my ear, of his great love, and
    by graybeard 17 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 15 1:00 AM
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  28. I’m stuck; trapped in this box of nostalgic moonlight
    Wallowing in the debris of my shattered dreams.
    by -JuLz- 23 lines, 29 comments, on Jul 14 10:09 AM 2006. In Sad, Personal, Dark
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  29. Her broken body was on the floor
    The thing that was her beauty is no more
    by Andiness 15 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 9 7:11 PM 2008. In Pain, Other, Dark, Pettirosso, Sad, Death, Music, Frozen, Life, Personal, My life
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  30. I am alone. I am only six years old.
    I live in a box on the side of the road.
    by HeartBr8ker 42 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 16 12:52 PM. In Life, Pain, Sad, Society, Thoughts, Weird
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  31. He said,
    "I've been working out my dysfunctions on this canvas"
    by FightOffYourDemons 23 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 11 3:47 AM 2008
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  32. A poem about my own mother and her "love" for me
    by Babesface 38 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 16 2:51 PM. In Abuse, Fear, Pain, Sad
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  33. Come here, child, I've got a surprise
    Tonight I won't black both of your eyes
    by Andiness 11 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 19 2:30 PM 2008. In Abuse, Other, Pain, Dark, Sad, Society, Life, pettirosso, Hurt, Goth, Suffering
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  34. by lowercase prelude 17 lines, 26 comments, on Mar 10 8:23 PM. In Contest, Dark, Life, Pain, Society, Abuse
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • thank you for the silver trophy
    i am honored

    congrats to the other winners


  • Timespell
    March 19
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    Thank you for awarding my entry with the Gold trophy - I am so glad you like my sad tale!

    Congrats to all the other winners