ok so I wrote a song a few weeks ago and im working on a guitar part for it, not goin so well. now i wanna read yours, if you have a way that i can hear it, like on youtube or something, you can put it in your AN, if not then ill base it off reading it. you might also want to put whether its suppose to be sad, slow, fast, w/e just so i can be sure to get the flow right, not sure if flow is the right word, but you get my drift. uhh, if you wanna read the song im workin on it's called Without A Doubt, let me know how to make it better if you do check it out please, thanks!
RULES:
NoNe OF tHIs
No cussing if not necessary
No erotica, keep it pg-13
Don't enter a song if you've put it in one of my other contests
Have fun!
RULES:
NoNe OF tHIs
No cussing if not necessary
No erotica, keep it pg-13
Don't enter a song if you've put it in one of my other contests
Have fun!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 23
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100
- Final notes: WOW, this was REALLY hard to judge, there were so many great entries and i had a great time reading them and trying to figure out how i imagine they would sound. hope everyone had fun, this is definitly the biggest contest i've ever had, 99 entries! sorry it took so long to judge, but i'm about to stop with my ramblings, so i just wanna say great job and thanks for entering
Contest Winners
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All the times before
you said that you were leavingby davidwright 39 lines, 15 comments, on Sep 2 3:12 PM 2008. In A sad country lament• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Honey, you know how messed up you are,
I could tell when I looked in your eyes and saw a raging war,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by Fritz O skennick 27 lines, 20 comments, on Nov 24 3:29 PM 2007. In Lyrics, Dark, Sad, Video., Mental Illness.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by Fritz O skennick 30 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 26 5:22 PM 2007. In Escape, Paranoia., Delusions Lyrics, Schizophrenia.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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1.The Waiting shadows creep
In this room I sit in death• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
You left me here with nothing to my name,
All your words were just part of your game.by ciarrai-manning 14 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 10 11:45 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Now I'm covered in glitter, but I'm not shining bright enough to see,
You don't even give me a glance, as you walk on top of me...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [71]
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She never knew
he was undercoverby bluecollarlove 61 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 28 5:06 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Gasping for breath, I scream for release.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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They should put us in an old glass case
My silly eyes and your smilin' face.by writebrain 21 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 13 1:01 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I tripped over my words
And fell into view.by writebrain 20 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 26 1:11 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It is my way of escaping the reality of life
by writebrain 31 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 7 10:52 AM. In My own style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Electricity charged the stage, I saw red
Staring up with her shy gaze• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
impaired by my own decision / for everything went wrong with situations / but you inspired me to go to the other direction / that leads me• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Fritz O skennick 24 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 26 5:06 PM 2007. In Dark, Suicidal, Schizophrenia. Lyrics, Depression
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by Fritz O skennick 17 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 26 6:17 PM 2007. In Pain, Betrayal., Lyrics, Depression• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Fritz O skennick 24 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 26 7:23 PM 2007. In Lost in thought, Introspective., Lyrics• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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We used to be like Jack and Rose.
"You jump - I jump" - a stupid oath.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Dream away Neptune
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by Fritz O skennick 23 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 26 5:31 PM 2007. In Personal, Life, Lost in thought, Lyrics• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Wind whips the robes of the raven black priest
As he waves from the grave through asphalt sleetby Maninblack 34 lines, 15 comments, on Jul 22 5:22 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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by LotusRyda 37 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 23 11:57 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Everywhere I turned, there you were
The sight of you gave me a high.by SaraMaria 38 lines, 24 comments, on Feb 11 7:07 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Give me something to hold.
Give me something to see.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I loved you, even though you were not worthy
I wanted you, even though I found you wantingby SaraMaria 18 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 3 9:36 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I wait by the phone now
but your voice is inside of me.by Stonecreek 53 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 6 12:41 PM 2006. In Lyrics• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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(Verse 1)
Goodbye, Goodbye• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I'll tell ya little story bout my bestest bud
He's a rock• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Sunshine...
a little ray of hope• Commented on by judge. -
There's just somethin about train tracks
their tracks they never end• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Say what you will of gold and silver
You know, they killed herby whitemd 22 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 4 10:37 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Blankscreen2222 62 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 16 6:46 PM 2008. In This is what I would do for love, Yeah I know...I can't write lyrics, Love, Emo• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Heaven’s tears through streetlight streaming.
People rushing, heads down, dreaming• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Verse1: " For all that lives must die ". Oh blessed apparition, this most vivid obscurity, cursed by angelic plague, scream thy killers name. My veins flood with caustic vengeance, vendetta scarred across my chest it drives t• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She paces her room, watches the clock tick
She goes to the mirror to check her lipstickby Death by Murder 39 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 20 8:37 AM• Commented on by judge. -
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The sun fell behind the horizon
and dusk over-swept my world• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
another older write i decided to put back on here• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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its cold
its darkby speakno3vil 25 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 18 6:28 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'm sitting here,
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Would you like to be
the mayor of cundletownby Hungry Joe 84 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 25 9:20 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Together forever
in our heartsby kel dog 32 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 5 7:11 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Thanks a bundle for the gold trop
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Best Wishes -Emmjay -
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np, i had fun reading em
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