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Pen Brilliance in just 8 lines

I will add overall points up to 2500, if I feel the entries deserve big points.

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Prompt : http://allpoetry.com/poem/5020889

it's very simple. click the above link... You will be navigated to a page where you will find a poem titled 'Frozen Paradise'...

1. Give a read
2. Be inspired
3. Pen your version (however you interpret, most welcome)
4. 8 lines to 20 lines
5. give a brief note about your interpretation in Author Notes

What I Expect?

1. Images, smilies, metaphors and vivid description
2. Poetic tone
3. Oringinality/creativity
4. Good flow

ALL the BEST!

Get set, GO.... pen brilliance....

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Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on March 3
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 220, Bronze: 130, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    Hello Poets,
    Thanks for entering the contest. Each entry is beautiful in a way. I loved them all. I thank Dr. Vee for helping me judge this contest successfully. Wanted to award trophy to each entry, but I am allowed with only 8 entries. I wish you all the best. Do enter my next contest.

    Check for your scores. Congrats winners.

    Results

    The Seduction of Evil – 47.6
    Flash of Eden – 46.4
    Nudist Ascended – 45.9
    Mighty Warrior Spirit – 44.5
    Dance Blind – 44.3
    Mad Guy++++ -43.8
    Wanderer – 43.2
    Decision – 42.3
    Original Sin - 42.2
    Broken Treasure Healed – 41.6

    Love and regards
    Kiddy
    (Dr. V – Silent Judge)

Contest Winners

  1. The Seduction of Evil
    Be ever aware... deceptive marketing, it hasn't really changed much.
    by WordsDoMatter 20 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 28 6:52 AM. In deception, evil, trap, seduction
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Flash Of Eden
    It isn't apple, round and blushing sin, as summer,
    through strength of element exchanging seed for dirt,
    by kaibab 23 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 28 8:45 AM
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Nudist Ascended
    Like a leaf in the cosmic wind
    under clouds that hold no rain
    by BluesMan 19 lines, 17 comments, on Oct 8 10:44 AM 2008. In Contest, Spiritual, Love, Life, Lessons
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Mighty Warrior Spirit
    He comes on the breath of the wind.
    A whisper through the trees.
    by skye01 11 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 28 6:26 AM. In Thoughts, Personal, Life, Inspirational
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Dance Blind
    It's easy to dance
    When the moon makes the stones shine
    by chael 10 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 27 11:29 PM
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. A Mad Guy +++++++++?
    A guy
    unable to buy peace
    by Purush 8 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 28 5:29 AM
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. Wanderer (revised)
    Wanderer, journeying along life’s passage
    Compromised, dragging disdained baggage
    by Lilian of Tilburg 27 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 25 1:15 PM. In Society
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • blackfang4318
    February 27
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    I dont get this


    • Kiddy
      February 27
      Edit | Reply
      All you need to do is follow the above given link (prompt), find a poem, interpret the same, write a poem. am I clear?


  • positive anarchy
    March 1
    Edit | Reply
    wow...what a way to get people to comment on your poems...wow...I am...flabbergasted...

    good luck anywho

    somehow this contest isn't for me
    ~Hippie


  • kaibab silver member
    March 3
    Edit | Reply
    Thanks so much for the inspiration...congrats to the winners...Rich