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Erotic Multi Round Contest (2 of 5)

Invite only! from this contest
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2436011

angelli803
Bruce
Boosiarbooger
onesugar
Drag Aine
sunoir
Idle Mind Wondering
Dragon Blue
Kristin103161


Welcome back for another round. The first round was marred by inadvertent mistakes by the judge. I hope they are out of my system.

The second round is even tougher. This round I want your favorite fantasy, realized or not, come to life. And I want you to experience it. Only one catch!

I do not want a first person narrative. Omniscient or third person narrative only. I want you 'done' in the most imaginative way possible. Interesting background, detailed with extensive use of the five senses. (exotic locales, interesting characters, favorite fantasy and significant details)

Pamper yourself, make it fun and write with brilliance!

Rules!

1. Third person or omniscient narrative.
2. Write 'I'm too sexy' in your AN's
3. Have fun!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on March 14
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    Hi guys!

    The quality in this round is the best I have ever seen. Judging this was a painful process in a good way.

    Passion Wakes while Venice sleeps-Gold
    clean up on your typos and spacing and you have a professional polished piece. The story was beautifully done!

    All yours-Silver
    Honey makes me wet between my thighs. You do naughty better than anyone. My only suggestions more visual imagery and use of the five senses. Tone it down and make it less raw. Eroticize and sensualize this BDSM moment to its purest pleasure.

    I love what it did to my imagination. Nice work Michelle.

    Bondage Bunny-Bronze
    This piece was hilarious and fun. If you had reached its potential it would've gotten you the gold. I envy you for this wondefrul and funny take on the BD scene.

    HM Conan
    I loved this fantasy piece. I felt bad not being able to give it a trophy. It worked wonders on my 'erectice dysfunction' problem.

    HM Paris in the Fall
    Another beautiful piece, in most contests this would be a gold. It was a 'hot in the moment piece' But everybody shined here.

Contest Winners

  1. Passion wakes while Venice Sleeps Adult
    by Draig aine 29 lines, 23 comments, on Mar 5 1:22 AM. In Adult, Contest, Erotica, Love, Personal, Background, Sensual
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. ~ All Yours! ~
    by onesugar 53 lines, 17 comments, on Jan 2 3:55 PM. In Adult, Erotica, Kinky
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Bondage Bunny
    by sunoir 20 lines, 24 comments, on Mar 6 9:17 PM. In Adult, Erotica, Fantasy, Nature, just plain insane
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Conan's Greatest Adventure - Adult
    by Bruce 36 lines, 14 comments, on Mar 5 12:27 PM. In Adult, Contest, Erotica, Fantasy
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Paris in the fall.......
    It was autumn, the colors looked like splashes on the hillside
    The warmth of the sun warmed her bare shoulders through the glass
    by Kristin103161 66 lines, 17 comments, on Mar 3 11:14 PM
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • onesugar gold member
    February 27
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    LMAO! I am too sexy


  • sunoir
    February 27
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    *LOL* now I have to go look up 3rd person narrative cause the only thing that comes to mind when I read that is Ménage à trois *LOL*...making me work!!


  • Starrchild777 gold member
    February 27
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    Sweet sleeping sips!

    I sure wish I had gotten my internet service back earlier so I could have gotten into this one. Hope you all have fun. PS>- If you have a drop-out, can I replace them? Some of my exotic stuff is in my list "Disgrace of my Face"

    ~Starr~


    • Dark Otter
      March 6
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      I had to think hard about that!

      These poets all survived the first round with me. The total score for 5 rounds determines the winners. You would have to write for both the first and second round and accept that you wouldn't be troophy eligible in the first round. If still interested you can IM me.

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