I am beginning to feel really bad with grief after three years of feeling none....I am finding it hard to sleep and crying for no reason. I'm feeling alone right now and want to hear other people's pain!
My dad (step) was a beautiful man with such a lovely life ahead and it was all ruined by drugs and gambling. He gave up...
I am excepting anything!! No rules!!
although I do prefer fresh writes I am allowing prewrites until I've had enough of pre-writes!
Make me cry more.....I need to get it all out and don't want to focus on my pain anymore
Points and trophies will go up on entries
goodluck xxx
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 8
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: This is one of the hardest contests that I have run and OMG I could have changed the order a million times apart from the gold remaining where it was because it made me cry and it deserves a gold....I loved the silver because there was soo much honesty in this and the DP was amazing!! The bronze was really from the heart and so sad-- people do not realise what it is to lose a child even when it is unborn it is difficult :-(
A lot of fab other writes that deserved more and only got the HM's are in no particular orders...thankyou soo much for all of your entries xxx
Contest Winners
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in the house yelling for dad, nothing
but silence hit me, my yell echoingby MichaelSavage 39 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 27 12:13 PM. In Angst, Contemporary, Contest, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad
Gold trophy winner
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by Walking Oxymoron 117 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 26 11:35 PM. In Personal, Society, Thoughts, Contest, Adult, Life, Dirty Pretty
Silver trophy winner
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A bloody street...what happened here...???
by J Macabre 27 lines, 11 comments, on Feb 26 10:56 PM. In Horror, Love, Personal, Dark, Spiritual, My own style, Anger, Dedication
Honorable mention
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I.
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As I lie there broken now
Battered on the wooden floorby ForeverKimberley 22 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 9 5:42 AM. In Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Spiritual, Thoughts, My own style, Death, Lost in thought• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Bronze trophy winner
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I'm in the brink of death and life,
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I gave you every part of me,
all I had to give,by kdom 17 lines, 22 comments, on Feb 23 9:37 PM. In Pain, Sad, Thoughts, disappointment, Dark, Depression, Lost love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I feel the horror of the sunset,
burden the footsteps,by Gay-Militant 30 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 26 11:20 AM• Commented on by judge. -
Sadly, there goes another one.
Yet another friends life that's done.• Commented on by judge. -
at 00:00 am you said "i love you" to me,
at 11:00 am you said "i cant sorry" to me,by ajocean 29 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 5 4:25 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I woke up in your bed
(quietly suffering)by sidaul 25 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 27 3:41 AM• Commented on by judge. -
I'm not scared of you anymore,
I'll let you hurt me,by SilentTearsOnceMore 23 lines, 12 comments, on Feb 21 7:29 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I walk into the obscurity of tomorrow
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She weeps at her
grave. Her bestby Englandgirl2008 24 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 26 7:11 PM• Commented on by judge. -
I tried for perfection
I found it don't existby soulsearchfor1 13 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 10 7:55 PM• Viewed by judge.
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Sorry to hear, sweetie. I will be back to write for you, if my muse ever returns. Sigh.
Much love to you.
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Thankyou x hope your muse will bring you back x
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You
you have shattered any kind of stability in my life
you decieve me as you draw me close only to tear me apart
you tell me you love me as i am pulled away,
but when i draw close you cut me deep
i can feel the life draining from me as i think,
why must you play with me so?
you told me i was more than a toy,
yet you are telling me you only want my body
why must you always destroy anything near to you?
i gave you my everything, only to watch it dissapear
you have forever scarred me,
and i will never forgive myself, even though its your fault
as the floor is covered with the red river of life,
i think back to the one memory i can still enjoy,
because that memory is the only one
that doesnt end in my suffering
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Great words, deep add it in huni x x
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Um, you're excepting anything?
So what can we write about then? If everything is excepted?? You won't get any entries!
I suggest you accept everything instead, it leaves us with a lot more scope. -
Thanks, and congrats to the other winners.
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Thanks for the Gold. Congrats to the other winners.
Michael
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