hey all, the title says all. i want your pain, your own personal pain.
something that really happened to you, or someone close to you.
i want you to make me feel it. walk me through your experience, make me feel like it's happening to me... its nice to know i'm not the only one with terrible experiences.
you can write about heartache, cutting, the way depression feels, rape, suicide, abuse, an accidental death. if you check out my poetry it will give you an idea of the kind of stuff i prefer and what i can connect to on a persnal level which give you a beter chance in my contests.
i've allowed you 2 entries, please use one for a fresh write, i prefer new write to prewrites.
if you've enter a whole bunch of contests with your poem then please dont enter here i hate having to skroll down 20 contest titles to comment on your poem.
if you've won a bunch of trophys on your one poem dont enter it b-cuz it won't win, i like to give others who havn't won a chance, one or two trophies is fine, but not alot.
um that about it, i dont care how you type it as long as it's in english!
thnx guys! have fun
something that really happened to you, or someone close to you.
i want you to make me feel it. walk me through your experience, make me feel like it's happening to me... its nice to know i'm not the only one with terrible experiences.
you can write about heartache, cutting, the way depression feels, rape, suicide, abuse, an accidental death. if you check out my poetry it will give you an idea of the kind of stuff i prefer and what i can connect to on a persnal level which give you a beter chance in my contests.
i've allowed you 2 entries, please use one for a fresh write, i prefer new write to prewrites.
if you've enter a whole bunch of contests with your poem then please dont enter here i hate having to skroll down 20 contest titles to comment on your poem.
if you've won a bunch of trophys on your one poem dont enter it b-cuz it won't win, i like to give others who havn't won a chance, one or two trophies is fine, but not alot.
um that about it, i dont care how you type it as long as it's in english!
thnx guys! have fun
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 16
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 100, Bronze: 70, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: wow, i had some truly great write in this contest, thank you so much for takeing the time to enter, i'm really sorry i couldn't comment all and the finalist were realy tough to choose, you should really sheck out the finalists
thanx everyone!
Contest Winners
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You see the girl that used to be so damn happy
A little girl that grew up to abuse and self harmby XxTwiceDisturbedXx 26 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 24 7:03 AM. In Abuse, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Sadness, Depression
Gold trophy winner
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I cannot recall the day
when my head stopped looking forward,by Shadow Keeper 60 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 28 8:29 PM. In Personal, Life, Pain, Sad, Dark, Depression, Emo
Honorable mention
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Silver trophy winner
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Loneliness fills my soul tonight Trying to convince myself that I'm alrightby ley527 8 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 7 9:49 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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That proud anticipation frenzied my nerves,
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How dare you swagger in my life, upset my perfect world. How dare you be the one for me, and belong to another girlby AlittleWrong 326 lines, 63 comments, on Oct 29 10:44 PM 2008. In Love, Pain, The Other Woman, Cheating, Personal, Angst, Lost love, Angry• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I scream,
A sound that shatters the heart,by Kittywaver 29 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 23 3:06 PM• Commented on by judge. -
I am sad today
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As I let time pass
me by slowly,by PoeticMadnesss 31 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 19 4:09 PM. In abuse angst dark pain sad suicide hanging suffocation• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i raid for a blade
it lays around there unboundby RazorBlade94 1 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 21 6:56 PM. In Self-Injury• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm like a wounded animal,
trying to make it through the day.by Dead-dreams 21 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 25 12:54 PM• Commented on by judge. -
I walked into the bathroom
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The hand he lays apon her
While we screamed in utter painby ListeningToSilence 28 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 24 5:41 PM• Commented on by judge. -
Your hands are on me again
And the doors completely closed now.by Painful-Tears 48 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 26 6:05 PM. In Thoughts, Life, Sad, Dark, Personal, Sexual Abuse, Loss• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Friendship comes at a price,
Secrets cannot always be said,by Kittywaver 29 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 23 2:51 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
its dark , i'm scared
life is nothing but a blurby vintage 22 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 23 4:19 PM• Commented on by judge. -
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Disappointment leaks and drains from the tiny impossible cracks in my mistakes; my life
Feelings of the wrong emotion rush from others int• Commented on by judge. -
i started to cry and said please dont,
but you just came close to my ear and said relaxby Amanda Lee 32 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 25 2:19 PM. In Pain• Commented on by judge. -
You see your daughter with tears in her eyes
you see your wife with a smirk on her face.by Loving randomness 26 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 4 8:05 AM. In Life, sad, Teenage thinking, Teen issues, Depressed, Family, Society• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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She wakes up from that long painful night,
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A poem from my earlier years... I had fallen within the depths of alcoholism when I wrote this, this poem hits very close to home.by rcrimocal 103 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 23 10:25 PM. In Dark, Personal, Society, Spiritual, Alcoholism, Sadness, Depression, Deception• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The flow of my blood
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your smiling through your pain,
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I agreed to meet you on the outskirts
of town, but i didn't think that iby Xxnightmare21xx 47 lines, 22 comments, on Dec 8 3:31 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She sits on down on
the floor. Holding the
razor the her awaitingby Englandgirl2008 38 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 14 1:23 AM. In Suicide, Dark, Sad, Death, Emo, Depressed, Depression• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Gloriouswings 80 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 25 10:20 PM. In Angst, personal, loss, Pain, Sad, family dysfunction, rage, forgiveness?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Its your stupid fault that you're gone
You know that right?by Guapia 22 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 18 3:26 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Cold nights in graveyards leave me
Screaming through clenched fists.by Trapped Under Glass 65 lines, 19 comments, on Nov 28 1:39 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Its holds me within a box...
[one.that.i.cant.escape.]by Maybe.I.Am.Broken. 25 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 25 8:42 PM• Commented on by judge. -
When you look at me,
It pierces my heart,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Tortured daily
Incessant obscure suggestionby Blueskywonder 21 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 1 8:54 AM. In Thoughts, Personal, Pain, tRUTH. iNSANITY.• Viewed by judge. -
Age is not an issue,
Wisdom does not belong here.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
you said you loved me more than the stars
but do you know where you areby HannahsDead 15 lines, 16 comments, on Aug 28 8:34 PM 2008. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
the temperature is fighting against my skin,
forcefully aged, i'm boiling within.by BrittlesSkittles 34 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 16 9:56 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Melancholy raindrops tasted only by loneliness [personified];
because if you stare at the sky long enough,by Madison Mary 20 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 1 1:07 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Fuck all the life
Out of me,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm sorry means nothing
When you just don't care.by DemonicChanel420 22 lines, 13 comments, on May 28 9:29 AM 2008. In Pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I echo the whispers you whisper...• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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People come, people go
It’s her life she’ll never knowby lil lette 50 lines, 11 comments, on Feb 23 12:51 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You meet the darkness every time you close your eyes. Even during the day you’ll be beneath blackened skies. You hallucinate images that slby Dark passenger 10 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 19 5:41 AM 2008. In War, Suicide, Sad, Pain, Dark, Death, Anger, Emo, Hate, Depressed, Nightmare• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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In dust she was placed
In a cheap shroud she was draped.by Nermin Nazim 82 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 18 8:57 AM 2008. In Angst, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Dedication, my own style and my own suffering• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
When i look in the mirror,
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by Maybe.I.Am.Broken. 70 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 3 5:27 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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If dreams were made to be cherished
Why do they still die?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Hi...
...based on your rules, it's really not appropriate for me to enter this piece, but I invite you to read it anyway, and especially to view/listen to it on YouTube.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2307093
GBU, MDJ. † -
Thank You...
...for taking a few minutes to read the tribute to my Mom, and especially for your kind comments; I really appreciate them. I know your time is precious, especially with all these contest entries to experience (*^_^*). That makes it even more special that you took the time to read my non-entry. God Bless You For It.
Sincerely,
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hey
it was no problem, i'm glad you wanted to share it with me!
as for time well i have alot of it so it was really no trouble
And it was a truly beautiful tribute...
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Wow. Thanks for the trophy =D
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you earned it! i loved your poem!
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