Picture IS NOT the prompt. I just thought it was cute!
I've seen these contests before and not many people enter them, so I hope you'll reconsider before you just up and exit.
All ya' gotta do is peruse a few of my poems and see if you can make them your own. Add your own special touch! I don't want a brand new poem. I want a rewritten poem. See my stuff here: http://allpoetry.com/Paloszoo
Rules:
1. Use the same title for your piece as mine, so I know what you're rewriting.
2. Spelling and grammar are your friends.
3. Enter as many times as you desire.
4. Comment on the poem you're rewriting.
Ok, that's not a rule, but I'd love it if you did.
5. IMPORTANT: Do NOT rewrite anything under 10 lines.
6. Have lots of fun.
BOOKMARK ME
but be sure to come back!!
I'll comment on all pieces as usual.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 5
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: I'm especially touched that you would all read my poems and rewrite them for me. They were all wonderful. The winnders really stood out for me, but that doesn't mean the rest of the pieces weren't noteworthy!!
Thank you to everyone who participated!! Kim
Contest Winners
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by Debbysmiles 17 lines, 11 comments, on Feb 20 9:24 PM. In Pain, Loss, Hopelessness, Hope
Gold trophy winner
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I will lay you down to give you more
your satin gown upon the floor• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 5075385, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Ahh, tranquil multihued river
The pollution makes me shiver;by Wandering Woodchuck 17 lines, 21 comments, on Feb 22 9:27 AM. In Nature, Society, Environment
Honorable mention
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"Walking amongst the unafflicted
souls of society"
undrunk is the thinking• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Entries [15]
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Rewrite of Paloszooby Broken-Rickie 10 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 19 4:35 PM. In CONTEST• Commented on by judge.
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Dirt covered hands,
messy in her solitude,• Commented on by judge. -
Tiles seriated from my life,
the collage of cerebral ceramic shards,• Commented on by judge. -
It’s so horribly wrong to be always right
Certain as silence, sure as sanity….and awake all night.by wastebound 39 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 21 2:21 PM. In dark• Commented on by judge. -
i hope everyone likes itby happy-lil-artemis 17 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 24 10:38 AM• Commented on by judge.
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Comments
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Ok, definitely doing this when my head hurts less and i feel more human. will bookmark this and come back soon. Really good contest

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sister dear, you know I would do anything you asked your wish is my command. though I will look to find a poem that best suits my style and a topic I can be passionate about
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Kim
Thank you so much for the gold.. I really enjoyed reading your work and doing the contest. God bless. Debby



