and If I ask you to write Slogans?
for example;
Jiye jiye jiye bhutoo!
Naray Naray Naray Bhutoo!
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Urdu
Kal bhi bhutto Zinda tha
Aaj bhi Bhutto ZInda hai
Tum kitnai Bhutto marogay
her ghar sai Bhutto niklayga
English
yesterday, Bhutto was Alive
Today he is also Alive
how many bhutto you will kill?
A Bhutto will come from every house
(every mother will give birth to one bhutto)
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Got it?
I want Slogans, Words filled with FIRE.
to burn everything!!!!
to Burn Alive!!!!
Aag Lagti hai, tu Lagnay do!!
If Fire is set, then let it Set
Jo Jalta hai, usay Jalnay do!!
One who is burning, let him burn!!!
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one of my Urdu Verse
Logo ne us say sekhi he ajab rasme wafa
Jo jalta he,usay jalta he chor detay hn
people have learnt a unique Custom from Thee
one who burns, they let them burn alive
Khilari lakh mahir hn khel-e dunya mai
Qismat k sitam umeedain tor detay hn
a player, thousand times champion of world's game
Fate's cruelty breaks the hopes of that player
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You can pick The theme from below. ( made sure, you are feeling, as you are standing in front of THOSE KILLERS AND MOTHER TRAITORS who is behaving below EARTH LEVEL of HUMANITY.
1. What ever happening in Ghaza!
2. Stand by with the People of Kashmir!
3. Stand with the People of Iraq!
4. Stand with the People of Palestine!
5. Child Slavery
6. Africans Scared People
7. Speak Against the Government
8. Speak Against those Soldiers who feel to BRAVERY TO KILL CHILDREN
9. Have a long March or a Rally, What will be written in your Banner? If you are speaking for the Rights of Ghazaian, kashmiris, Iraqis, Palestine.
10. Speak Ill of Mr Duffer BUSH. Who has sunk the AMERICA same as TITANIC ship.
America is 75% Finished, just because Mr Bush FELT BRAVE AND PROUD to kill millions of Children and Women, in whole over the World.
I want Slogans, I want Burning Words, I want Killing Stanzas, I want Something as HOT AS RED BURNING COAL.
Go on, then
Rule:
1. Comment in the Comment box of Contest, DISCUSS THE CONTEST as COMMENTS.
2. Comment at least 3 pieces of Contest and write in the Author Box of Your Stanzas, that you read these three pieces of contest.
3. Each Line of Stanzas should contain 9 or more than 9 syllables.
4. Mention the Choice in your Author Box, for what you are writing.
5. Tell How you Feel, when you hear in news about the Killings of Innocence.
P.S
you have a little work of 4 lines, so I put other things to write
and Yes, If any piece I won't like, I will Simply DELETE the Stanzas,
come up with new one, I won't mind. Five Pieces per Poet.
for example;
Jiye jiye jiye bhutoo!
Naray Naray Naray Bhutoo!
...
Urdu
Kal bhi bhutto Zinda tha
Aaj bhi Bhutto ZInda hai
Tum kitnai Bhutto marogay
her ghar sai Bhutto niklayga
English
yesterday, Bhutto was Alive
Today he is also Alive
how many bhutto you will kill?
A Bhutto will come from every house
(every mother will give birth to one bhutto)
................
Got it?
I want Slogans, Words filled with FIRE.
to burn everything!!!!
to Burn Alive!!!!
Aag Lagti hai, tu Lagnay do!!
If Fire is set, then let it Set
Jo Jalta hai, usay Jalnay do!!
One who is burning, let him burn!!!
........................
one of my Urdu Verse
Logo ne us say sekhi he ajab rasme wafa
Jo jalta he,usay jalta he chor detay hn
people have learnt a unique Custom from Thee
one who burns, they let them burn alive
Khilari lakh mahir hn khel-e dunya mai
Qismat k sitam umeedain tor detay hn
a player, thousand times champion of world's game
Fate's cruelty breaks the hopes of that player
..............
You can pick The theme from below. ( made sure, you are feeling, as you are standing in front of THOSE KILLERS AND MOTHER TRAITORS who is behaving below EARTH LEVEL of HUMANITY.
1. What ever happening in Ghaza!
2. Stand by with the People of Kashmir!
3. Stand with the People of Iraq!
4. Stand with the People of Palestine!
5. Child Slavery
6. Africans Scared People
7. Speak Against the Government
8. Speak Against those Soldiers who feel to BRAVERY TO KILL CHILDREN
9. Have a long March or a Rally, What will be written in your Banner? If you are speaking for the Rights of Ghazaian, kashmiris, Iraqis, Palestine.
10. Speak Ill of Mr Duffer BUSH. Who has sunk the AMERICA same as TITANIC ship.
America is 75% Finished, just because Mr Bush FELT BRAVE AND PROUD to kill millions of Children and Women, in whole over the World.
I want Slogans, I want Burning Words, I want Killing Stanzas, I want Something as HOT AS RED BURNING COAL.
Go on, then
Rule:
1. Comment in the Comment box of Contest, DISCUSS THE CONTEST as COMMENTS.
2. Comment at least 3 pieces of Contest and write in the Author Box of Your Stanzas, that you read these three pieces of contest.
3. Each Line of Stanzas should contain 9 or more than 9 syllables.
4. Mention the Choice in your Author Box, for what you are writing.
5. Tell How you Feel, when you hear in news about the Killings of Innocence.
P.S
you have a little work of 4 lines, so I put other things to write
and Yes, If any piece I won't like, I will Simply DELETE the Stanzas,
come up with new one, I won't mind. Five Pieces per Poet.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 23
- Rewards: Gold: 444, Silver: 333, Bronze: 222, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Thanks a Bunch of Roses of 12 Colors to all those Who Entered in this Contest
It was my 5th Contest
And All the Greats
I really Loved Each and Every Entry
Wished I could give 5 Golds
It was Brilliant to Read tht Still There are People who are with HUMAN but not with the Ill Manners of Governments
I condemn Even My Own Government to Kill the Human
Thanks Every One!!!
I'm Gonna start my 6th Contest
~~~~~SPEAK AGAINST THE GOVERNMENTS~~~~~
by
The Poet Of Hearts And Beautiful Words
Contest Winners
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In the heart of the earth so far away
Far from our safe home we love• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
'Tis of thee, a country of glutony and greed
rapaciousness with dominance• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 5082661, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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We give you all we have.
You drain our positbilities.• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
When the rain falls on our backs and we work until insane,
When the slaver keeps us chained to workbenches inhumane,• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Bronze trophy winner
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this is for a contestby headintheclouds 3 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 3 4:37 PM. In Society• Commented on by judge.
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check the Contest again, I was in hurry, I had to go
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Oh, Ok. I see it is finished now. One thing though, you cannot require others to read or comment on other contest pieces, I have been through this with contests of mine.
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Let me try then
my actual meaning of this contest is that people must read the burnt words
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you are in a very fragile glass house throwing very big rocks at my country. I think you really must let my poem stand as the truth about India and your adopted country though it certainly makes you look hypocritical .
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i will have to think upon this my friend...i feel hurt and sorry for all who suffer but anger is an emotion i fight against...hate can only cause inner pain and never accomplish anything...you can kill with kindness and murder with shame and that is what i try to do...what goes on in our world is awful, so much pain and suffering and loss of innocent lives but just adding more hate and anger isnt going to fix it
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for you it's anger, for me it's a way to bring INQILAAB (REVOLUTION)
it's about my people, who are sleeping in their poor selfish profits
I want a Fire through which i can burn all those who leave the way of JUSTICE
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sounds interesting dear.. slogans ha.. i like ur urdu verse yaar.. it awesome
i dont know whether i be entering or not but 13 days is long time .. lets see
anyways best of luck for your contest. -
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hmm, i dont actually agree with some of these choices. I mean when you say stand with the people its very one sided... yes people, children men women all are suffereing in those places, but war effects both sides. Everyone gets hurt in the everyone gets destroyed everyone loses something. Both sides gethurt. So i dont appreciate only having those choices ot stand with. everyone has rights not just those places. I understand you want ot give those choices, but I feel that more open choices coould have been given so im afriad Ican't take part in this, best of luck with it.
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i luv the ideas presented in this contest
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I would enter but I don't have time to write something heartfelt for this contest- pkus your rules are way to complex for a person who just got back from a hard day of working with completely insane people all day.
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