heres the story-
17 year old girl is about to throw away her life and committ suicide. she knows she has friends and family who love her but under the pressure from her dad and feelings of never being good enough/pretty enough she doesnt think she can take life anymore. she has the date picked out and her method of doing it.
what i want-
convince her to live
shes not looking for a reason to die, shes begging for one to live
rules: religion isnt much to her, shes not sure god is out there so a godlike poem probably will not help.
*i will add more points as soon as i can
**this is actually real....
17 year old girl is about to throw away her life and committ suicide. she knows she has friends and family who love her but under the pressure from her dad and feelings of never being good enough/pretty enough she doesnt think she can take life anymore. she has the date picked out and her method of doing it.
what i want-
convince her to live
shes not looking for a reason to die, shes begging for one to live
rules: religion isnt much to her, shes not sure god is out there so a godlike poem probably will not help.
*i will add more points as soon as i can
**this is actually real....
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 19
- Rewards: Gold: 615
- Final notes: thank you everyone who entered. it really ment a lot to me that you all cared to try and save someone you didnt know. for those of you who didnt know at all, this contest was ment to save me. i know its selfish but i was to the point where i didnt no where to go to get help. you all saved my life and i thank you so much for that. if any one of you ever needs anything, please dont hesitate to ask me. i owe you.
Contest Winners
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Entries [20]
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The world is always changing,
the world is always driftingby justlikelivin 22 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 9 4:51 PM. In Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Please take time
To read my little rhymeby lovingpoet 26 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 13 11:36 PM. In Spiritual• Commented on by judge. -
I believe Life Is A Miracle
Please don't let it slip away• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
If you need a reason
to get up out of bedby bluecollarlove 53 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 30 3:46 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Freed by Mercy 24 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 10 2:39 PM 2007. In Do not commit suicide• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Black JaPanther 6 lines, 22 comments, on Jan 27 8:31 AM 2008. In Fantasy, Fiction, Contest, Hope, Life, Love, Nature, Spiritual, Inspirational.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I always hated it when someone told me
some is suffering worse than you are.by Backporchphilosopher 101 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 13 5:04 PM. In Love, Contest, Hope, Society, Sadness, Depression, Message, Suicide, Humanity• Commented on by judge. -
Weeping willow tell me why you cry.
Why do your leaves hang low when your branches could caress the sky?by A-Solitary-Fantasy 24 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 21 6:27 PM 2008. In Hope• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I put my hand against the car window stained by the tears of the dark sky. Pressing my cheek to the glass, a wave of coolness washes over it. The car was winding up the twisted roads in the mountains of Kauai just minutes agoby Writing0Freedom 110 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 13 9:42 PM• Viewed by judge.
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There once was a girl from Missouri
a place where gravity did not existby thegoldenpath 60 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 16 6:27 PM• Commented on by judge.
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I'll enter this.
I've been there a couple times. Once wanted to suicide due to heartbreak and emptiness, the other time due to thinking I was no good and would never amount to anything. Now I'm thankful I didn't because so many of my issues have been solved... I've managed things I thought impossible and I'm happy. Thing is, you never know what will come around. -
i've been there a few times. still am some days. anyway, i'll see if i can pull something outta my quill that resembles poetry.
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