I have only enough points for one trophy
but if I get more I will of course add more.
Any style as long as it is not prose
although I am partial to good rhyme.
Sad, happy, romantic
but give me some feeling.
I am allowing pre-writes
so make it good.
go through your stuff and
I mean it ...
let me have 3 of your best pre-writes.
I have to read this stuff ya know
Thanks to BluesMan for points toward this contest.
(they have no bearing on trophy winners )
but if I get more I will of course add more.
Any style as long as it is not prose
although I am partial to good rhyme.
Sad, happy, romantic
but give me some feeling.
I am allowing pre-writes
so make it good.
go through your stuff and
I mean it ...
let me have 3 of your best pre-writes.
I have to read this stuff ya know
Thanks to BluesMan for points toward this contest.
(they have no bearing on trophy winners
)Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 16
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: Congratulations. I judged according to rhyme that was easy for me to read, emotions I could feel and of course just the beauty of the way the words were used. Thank you for the entries and If I wasn't able to comment I'm sorry. A lot has happened in my life since I started the contest and I almost cancelled it...but knowing you all put hard work into your entries I did the best I could. Again, congratulations
- To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 4 awards but only 3 finalists.
Contest Winners
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I never got to say good-bye,
No memories of fond farewell,by Rakerman1 26 lines, 36 comments, on Jul 26 8:42 PM 2008. In Internet lover, Personal
Gold trophy winner
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Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [97]
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by Olivias Violin 83 lines, 14 comments, on Feb 10 6:32 PM. In Nature• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Transfixed beside you
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a lava lamp
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In his mind's eye
The Poet sees:by Lorenzo 35 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 29 1:11 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i'm scribed in scottish folklore
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by righteousme 62 lines, 16 comments, on Jan 9 2:23 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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scars run miles deep
beyond flesh and breastby righteousme 54 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 31 10:41 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Raging storms against one’s kin.
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empty soul
emotionless hole can't be filled• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Please hold me closer and promise me this,"
She asked of him through dying lips.by AlittleWrong 44 lines, 65 comments, on Nov 24 6:58 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
To Mommy:
Just barely a babyby AlittleWrong 74 lines, 12 comments, on Jan 18 3:10 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It's when my head is way too full
Of hating her for having you
And you as well, for your big piece of cakeby AlittleWrong 29 lines, 36 comments, on Oct 21 3:37 PM 2008. In Angst, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Lost in thought, My life, Sadness, Depressi• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There is always hope for everyone ,in the beginning of every day and the end of another as a new day overcomes the skies.
i think my besby Anu-Nataraj 24 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 26 3:31 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Scrawny hourglasses
Listlessly dance toby Luciferschild 15 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 12 1:44 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Like Howard Beale
I'm mad as hellby Luciferschild 31 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 25 12:20 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
An Angel was she dressed in elegant white• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Gravity pulls my mind away
Expanding into the cosmosby SaraMaria 27 lines, 10 comments, on Feb 12 4:05 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Walking through the misty night,by SaraMaria 22 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 27 7:08 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I lay in ruin; Pain claims my being;
Eternity mocks me, cruel and demeaning.by angela. 25 lines, 24 comments, on Jan 9 4:19 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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You've hurt me once and have yet again
All that you'd done is unforgivableby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 13 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 10 11:32 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She falls to
the ground andby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 59 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 4 2:18 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Torn between what you want and need hurts
You love someone deeply but let them goby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 6 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 10 11:29 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Well, I'm the rollin' stone,
used to being alone,by The Angel in Black 58 lines, 13 comments, on Jan 14 3:09 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My dearling, my darling,
My child, my loveby Dreaming.of.reality 19 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 10 8:52 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
We become sentient statuesby Gillian-Noelle 10 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 28 10:56 AM. In Contest, flowerbeds, abstract, love, leaving, metaphor• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I need no help,
Fine by myselfby Emotional-wreck 17 lines, 10 comments, on May 24 1:15 PM 2008. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by B Chandler 20 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 27 1:43 PM 2008. In Contemporary• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Dreaming.of.reality 22 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 8 11:42 AM. In Wolf• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I have this secret
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Wisps of my gentle breath• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Their mother had passed on many years before, thus Margarita
became the housemaid among other things. It was she who keptby spideracer 67 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 29 4:19 AM 2008. In War, Sad, Dark, Pain, Inspirational, Death• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by B Chandler 17 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 1 12:00 AM 2008. In Contemporary• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She moans and she nags
She’s thinking in black• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Slipping through the net of night
Go sleep spoken words uncapturedby Gillian-Noelle 4 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 27 7:17 AM. In Dreamy, sleep talking, nighttime, thoughts, fantasy• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hanging on clouds
and thunderclapsby new born 9 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 9 9:52 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It's more of a lyric song-poemby Moses.Reid 49 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 11 10:56 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It's more of a lyric song-poemby Moses.Reid 56 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 12 9:18 PM• Commented on by judge.
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It's more of a lyric song-poemby Moses.Reid 55 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 12 9:20 PM• Commented on by judge.
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The cracks in the world's epicentre,
the lost ship sent out to the sea.by xxRainbowDawnxx 35 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 19 2:47 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
In the big, crowded beach
There is one woman• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
That I will soar,
if I learn how to fly• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Life
slowing to catch upby Spock 28 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 2 8:21 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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From ever fragrant branches spread
the tyrian shades of lovers blooms• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'll hold my breathe till I turn blue
Cut my wrist and make them bleedby xXLifelessLindseyxX 21 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 28 9:55 AM 2008. In Sad, Dark, Pain, Emo, Suicide, Teen issues, Goodbyes, Depression, Contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The memories of you
Doesn't seem to be pure• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I sit forever alone in the dark
Hiding the pain that never seems to go away• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Whisper to me softly,
tell me I’ll be okay,by BloodyCrystalEmbers 35 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 6 5:51 PM 2006. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
If nature is the inkless scribe
who writes the poems in our heartsby Aedara-Wren 16 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 2 4:31 PM 2006. In Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My smooth voice only enters your ear
My touch will always make you burnby albinoblacksheep720 25 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 2 12:49 AM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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