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Read his mind

Many times we see someone daydreaming,

worrying, grieving, planning, thinking of what

 to do or should have done...

 

Prompt...Use your imagination and tell me what this man is thinking...

 

 

rules...

 

20-40 lines

free verse or rhyme

no crazy letters

anything goes...if erotic, label

 

have fun...

 

20 entries only...who is first?

 

 

 

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on March 1
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    Great entries...I had to re-read several times, there were so many that were best...a hard decision...hope all will enter my future contest...wish I had more trophies...thanks to all...

Contest Winners

  1. Engulfed
    Peace hides from me in this sanctuary,
    ferns cloak the portraits I have feared,
    by penman 40 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 12 8:43 AM. In Other
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Got That Out of My Head
    What I go through to entertain my parents…
    “Here, Billy, sit here so we can take another adoring photo of you…”
    by wbiro 31 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 24 2:06 PM. In Humor, Guy Thoughts
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Drinking's Downer
    Okay, so I'm a little potted right now--
    Like these bloomin' ferns around me should be.
    by MassMan 29 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 24 10:48 AM. In Angst, Life, Thoughts, Hangover
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Vision
    VISION

    What do we do...when all is DONE?
    by randygoku 49 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 24 10:23 PM. In vision, sight, faith, thiking, knowledge, heaven
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. What lays beneath
    The bills are due, The sun is out
    My job sucks, these trees are a beautiful evergreen.
    by PiratexxLove 25 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 11 8:13 PM. In Thoughts, Society
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Unfamiliar Territory
    Sitting here I look back on my life,
    wondering why I was so naive.
    by Jeremy0826 24 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 12 4:07 AM. In Contest, Hope, Life, Love, Thoughts, Sad
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. In Too Deep
    by Viyanna Rosemarie 18 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 11 9:04 PM. In Contest, Life, Love, Sad, Thoughts, Pain, Other
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. Error: Unable to find finalist item 5048364, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  9. Nothing
    What is behind men's eyes?
    Pandora's Box, to be opened at all cost?
    by hitthispuppy 60 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 24 6:26 AM. In Contest, Humor, Life
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  10. "I just came back from a war."
    by LoneFairrie 24 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 24 10:15 AM
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  11. Your Window
    Starring through to somewhere
    What lay beyond your pane
    by LadyElbereth 20 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 25 1:12 AM. In Contest, Thoughts, Life, Love, Truth, Personal, Pain
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  12. Regretful
    Contemplating the pain.
    by Captivated Lioness 18 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 11 9:57 PM. In Life, Sad, Pain, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [17]

1 - 17 of 17
  • Desert Demise
    I opened my eyes to a bright glaring sun,
    lying flat on my back in the sand,
    by Juzjon 44 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 11 8:41 PM
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The Perfect Crime.
    by Black Narcissus 58 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 12 9:39 AM. In Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Choosing Not To
    You must have read about them in the papers,
    All those people who say they died, and came back.
    by Spyders Mate 7 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 12 11:15 AM. In Contest
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Picture
    The sun is beating down on me,
    I hope that soon I will be free.
    by cjgreene 4 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 24 1:42 PM
    • Commented on by judge.
  • jumbles of thoughts by the one with the penis.
    The on and off button of our relationship, jammed at off.
    Because my stupid emotions decided to clog up like a toilet,
    by HereComesTheSun 11 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 24 8:00 PM
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments


  • Mariana gold member
    February 11
    Edit | Reply
    WOW! That is such a gorgeous background


  • DesolatELifE
    February 24
    Edit | Reply
    I think that guy is thinking something along the lines of 'Oh, give me a break, I just sat down!', but I haven't the thoughts to turn that into something worth reading today.


  • penman gold member
    March 1
    Edit | Reply
    Thank you for the honor of the gold. Congratulations to all the winners.