Just wow me. The winner gets all the points, no second or third place. One winner. I don't care what kind of poem it is, but I do have some helpful suggestions:
1. Go ahead and swear, but make sure it fits
2. Don't give me some cliche, rhyming regurgitated nightmare
3. Don't be dirty, I don't want your pornographic thoughts where my eyes can see them
Good luck
1. Go ahead and swear, but make sure it fits
2. Don't give me some cliche, rhyming regurgitated nightmare
3. Don't be dirty, I don't want your pornographic thoughts where my eyes can see them
Good luck
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 12
- Rewards: Gold: 1482, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: Hey everyone! I changed my mind about the points, I simply could not make a decision about the winner! Every poem I read was excellent!
Congrats to the winners!!
Thanks again!
KP
Contest Winners
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by morgana raven 32 lines, 53 comments, on Jan 23 11:27 AM. In Personal, Sad, Thoughts
Silver trophy winner
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Folding a thousand times over,
Little shards of sunlightby Mushroom Samurai 6 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 3 10:51 PM 2008. In Weird, Spiritual, Abstract
Bronze trophy winner
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Your words will fall from their dramatic suspension.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [15]
1 - 15 of 15
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Patch-work mind
Patches of regretsby michichoeret 12 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 9 2:47 AM• Commented on by judge. -
a lava lamp
and fibre optic U.F.O.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
the rain contemplates its sick drop in nothing,
i am painting a picture with words spluttering on my tears,by LaCkOfCoLoUr 63 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 9 3:52 AM. In Contest• Commented on by judge. -
Yesterday i had a dream
a dream that i was aloneby Xxnightmare21xx 26 lines, 23 comments, on Oct 7 6:57 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Help, come save me,
Says that small voice inside,by starving-to-survive 40 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 26 2:43 PM 2008. In Abuse, child abuse, torture, ritual abuse, dark, pain, sad, desperation• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
What you go through;
Longing• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
To have and to hold
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Big blue eyes,and a happy smile / and a heart of gold, although he was only four months old / How we miss him , how we cried when we had tby Storm-Goddess 25 lines, 25 comments, on Feb 19 12:52 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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if you want us to look at your poetry then why is everyone sumbittig what I think is where own work? I'm confused. Too early in the morning for this.
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Thank you so much for the splendid Gold Cup and the points.
Thanks for hosting.
Harrisham Minhas
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