Make me cry, make my heart hurt, show me your pain

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on February 9
• Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 500, Bronze: 400, Honorable mention: 5 people
• Final notes:
  Wow, well i deffinatly think i am all cried out. Thank you so much to everyone who took the time to enter this contest. Trhere were some incredible writes and it was a very difficult desision of who to give trophies to but i am satisfied at my top three!
  I would love for everyone who entered to read the gold siver and bronze winners, they are some of the most amazing writes i have ever read.
  Thanks again, and remember if any of you ever need to talk i am here for you...No one needs to suffer alone.
  Take care. x

Contest Winners

1. Sadly Ever After

   When I was writing this piece, I was openly crying by the seventh stanza

   by BluesMan 78 lines, 55 comments, on Nov 23 8:51 AM 2007. In Contest, Sad, Dark, Hope, Death
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
2. I Saved Me

   Feet frozen in place,
   Nailed to the floor.

   by Nicada 43 lines, 99 comments, on Jun 7 12:52 PM 2008. In Abuse, Personal, Sad, Pain, Noguest
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
3. each story has an ending.

   & I don’t think you know what you’ve been missing by not knowing me
   & maybe if you gave it a try you’ll find that you’ve been missing quit

   by etoile 44 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 16 9:01 PM 2008
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
4. I don't want to talk about you

   Your name has not crossed my lips
   since the day you moved away.

   by Emerald-Eyes 45 lines, 13 comments, on Sep 15 1:50 PM 2008
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
5. Jesus Raped Me

   by DemonChild 33 lines, 70 comments, on Jun 3 5:29 PM 2007. In Abuse, Angst, Dark, Pain, Religion, Adult
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
6. Please let me die

   I run to my room and lock the door.
   I just can't take the pain anymore.

   by Shelby K 28 lines, 20 comments, on Feb 8 12:09 PM. In Thoughts, Emo, Depressed, Teenage thinking
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
7. Home Life

   I hear them screaming;
   I hear them fighting.

   by schick0493 23 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 5 8:43 PM
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
8. Daddy Had Issues

   I tried to pull away
   tried to fight today

   by fairytalelovestory 17 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 23 12:48 AM. In Angst, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Dark
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
9. Hey, Mama

   by High-on-Death 32 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 18 2:58 PM 2008. In Family, Personal, Sad

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [42]

• Created Pain

  Looking at the floor
  as you throw words at me,

  by SilentTearsOnceMore 20 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 8 8:35 AM. In Sad, abuse, life, self, depressed, sadness, pain, hurt, cutting

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Bye.

  A silent death is the way to go,
  without goodbyes or any fuss,

  by SilentTearsOnceMore 13 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 7 4:35 AM. In Death, sad, depressed, life

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Feeling Alive.

  I love the feeling of cold glass
  as it slides up and down my arm,

  by SilentTearsOnceMore 14 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 5 1:33 AM. In Sad, pain, death, suicide, cutting, life, self, sadness, depressed

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• A Splintered Heart

  She slapped me on the face,
  Stabbed me where it deeply hurt.

  by Ebbing.X.Discreetly 36 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 17 8:05 AM 2008. In Contest, Sad, Pain, Thoughts, Life, Love

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The Devoid Site

  She limped on silvery ponds,
  She drained her crispy feet,

  by Ebbing.X.Discreetly 27 lines, 13 comments, on Sep 18 3:49 PM 2008. In Hope, Life, Dark, Thoughts, Sad, Pain, Angst, Nature, Contemporary, Contest

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Her Identical Numbing Nights

  The night ensnares the light-draped globe,
  And meticulously traipses along, probing,

  by Ebbing.X.Discreetly 43 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 30 5:14 PM 2008. In Angst, Dark, Personal, Pain, Thoughts, Life, Sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• My Baby!

  Battered
  I stand here,

  by sweet innocence 25 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 4 12:36 PM. In Dark, Angst, Sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Burned

  by Dragonbabyx3 33 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 5 1:31 PM. In Angst, Dark, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• If only

  I never knew that that night would be our last_ if only had I known_ I never had the chance to say im sorry_ yet I know at each arguement w

  by kasickle 0 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 8 12:03 PM

  • Commented on by judge.
• Sorrow

  Every time I find hope
  I realize it's not meant for me

  by Perfect Asymmetry 21 lines, 10 comments, on Dec 19 3:19 PM 2008. In Personal, Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The Lost Battle

  So many illusions drowned in the river of tears I’ve cried
  I guess sorrow just never fades away

  by Perfect Asymmetry 28 lines, 19 comments, on Nov 29 3:52 PM 2008. In Life, Personal, Pain, Dark, Thoughts, Human Nature

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Ye theeno behen - bhay kay jeevan

  One withered hand, upon
  another. They walk

  by Cloudwalker 44 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 12 5:24 AM 2008. In Sad, Pain, Life, Corporate abuse

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• And we wait...

  I can feel my feet no more.
  And wings...

  by Cloudwalker 64 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 6 4:51 AM 2008. In Angst, Pain, Sad, Life, Dark, Animal rights, suffering

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• My life

  Have been holding on to this pain for so long now
  Must have lost myself in the mist somehow

  by Perfect Asymmetry 21 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 3 2:29 PM 2008. In Pain, Life, Dark, Personal

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Cruelty

  Have you seen those animals
  innocent, trapped and waiting?

  by Janice M Pickett 28 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 8 12:08 PM

  • Commented on by judge.
• Locked Behind These Walls!!

  Walls of stone have failed
  To guard my helpless soul,

  by sweet innocence 24 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 8 12:09 PM. In Pain, Angst, Personal, Sad, Other

  • Commented on by judge.
• I've Failed :'(

  I've tried and tried all my life
  to make people proud of me

  by starving4perfection 21 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 31 3:10 PM. In Sad, Suicide, Depression, Upset, Hurt

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• cant take it anymore

  Life
  I can’t take it anymore

  by Shelby K 17 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 14 6:14 PM. In thoughts, pain

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• pain

  I have a terrible
  Feeling inside

  by Shelby K 12 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 14 6:19 PM. In pain

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Remember.

  by Walking Oxymoron 36 lines, 16 comments, on Oct 9 4:53 PM 2008. In Pain, Angst, Personal, Sad, Contest, Love, Life

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Best Friend

  your hair is blond and your teeth are white
  I've known you for long and some times we fight

  by Crumbled-remains 16 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 2 10:15 PM. In Dark, Hate, Personal

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Gunshot

  Slowly I am speaking
  Into a dark abyss

  by Luciferschild 19 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 10 6:10 AM 2007

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Letter that has never been sent

  You are my pain and I am yours -
  We know it.

  by shiratikva 19 lines, 12 comments, on Dec 14 4:02 PM 2008. In Sad, Pain, Personal

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Apart from the heart

  In the heart, soul, mind and thoughts
  Used to be,

  by shiratikva 11 lines, 10 comments, on Feb 7 10:13 PM. In Spiritual, Thoughts, Love, Lyrics

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Your words where so empty,

  Your words where so empty, so flat,
  i deserve better than that,

  by Sacred Geometry 19 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 8 3:50 PM. In Love, Dark, Sad, Personal

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Desperation

  The jar is full,
  Drop by drop.

  by shiratikva 19 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 21 5:13 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Pobre Diabla.

  She.. is, dragging me down.
  Into another night of bad dreams

  by Dawliah 32 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 30 2:21 AM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Alone in the rift

  who said it had to be this way?
  who wrote the rules?

  by Sacred Geometry 38 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 10 5:43 PM. In Angst, Life, Love, Pain, Sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Nothing But A Sweet Lullaby

  She sings her sad song for all to hear While slowly down her cheek falls a tear

  by Browneyes666 37 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 2 11:35 PM 2007. In Personal, Spiritual

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Guilt

  As i watch in fascinated horror,
  Your actions sicken me to the bone,

  by Sacred Geometry 10 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 17 6:00 PM

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

Comments

• By me, right now

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• 
  Nicada
  February 9
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  Thanks so much for the honor of the silver! Congratulations to all winners! Blessings, Patty

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