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Lost Afraid Is The Child Within Needing Unconditional Love Talk To Me

I know many young people and older people have so much to say and no one will listen . I will listen I dont judge and I am here to help in any way I can . You tell me in your oen words what is haunting you what has made you feel so alone Im here I will talk with you for how ever long it takes and you will know my love is open and true .
We all have secrets that are eating us alive unless we share them with someone and often we hold them inside us and in doing so it makes us feel worse everyday .Let them out reach out and I will help as best I can TALK TO ME I WONT LEAVE YOU ALONE ANY LONGER

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on February 18
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 75, Bronze: 50
  • Final notes:
    Gold Draw near,my Dear...All this and
    more
    Silver Masked, Guisedn Facade

    Bronze The Giant In My Life

    To all the contestants you have sent me some of the most awesome writes and always know you are never alone message me I will answer all messages every afternoon .Im here for you I love all and will ewmbrace you with a true and honest love

Contest Winners

  1. Draw near, my Dear ... All this and more
    Draw near, my dear, and take my hand,
    we’ll travel to true wonderland,
    by Jonathan ROBIN 71 lines, 72 comments, on Jan 20 8:50 AM 2007. In Hope, Love
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Masked, Guised, Facade
    A poem inspired by my severly depressed friend.
    by poet360 49 lines, 65 comments, on Feb 2 6:17 PM. In Sad
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. The Giant in my life
    I was a child so very small
    my mind a slate on which to write
    by sleepinglion 43 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 8 5:41 AM. In Abuse
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • sleepinglion
    February 6
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    The Giant in my life

    I was a child so very small
    my mind a slate on which to write
    but one thing towered over all
    there lived a Giant in my life

    His sudden anger was a fright
    too scared to run- too feared to stay
    I lay and trembled in the night
    in case the giant came my way

    The Giants wife, she gave me life
    and sheltered me from many storms
    I watched her suffer so much strife
    she kept me safe, she kept me warm

    But often storms were full of fury
    my savior then was no use to me
    for she was damaged more than I
    from Giant fists she had to fly


    My Giant used his words of pain
    his angry voice on me would rain
    until he made me feel so small
    I don't know how I grew at all

    The child in me has come to know
    that it is safe for me to grow
    though on my mind he cast a blight
    the Giants almost out of sight

    A candle held up close you'd see
    a twig become a mighty tree
    thats how the Giant came to be
    the angry child who fathered me