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Like Passing Traffic...they had to go!!!

Has someone close to you ever passed away???
...
Has one or both of your parents walked out on you???
...
Have you expirenced loss of any sort???

Write about you loss...
are you angry???
...sad??
...happy???
...i don't care.
Tell me how you feel.

any type of poetry is fine...i do love rhyme so keep that in mind.

Rules:
Nothing over 20 lines...
No erotica...

The title is the prompt.

15 entries only.

make me cry...
make me blush...
make my blood rush...
Write from your heart.
--meggen xx <3

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on February 5
Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
Final notes:
Thank you very much for all you entries. It was so hard to decide, they were all so amazing. (: I think the winners were all unique and they all touched my heart.
I'm sorry for your losses..i hope your hearts heal in time. --MeggenEllen xx

Contest Winners

Ambigious Memories

by xxRainbowDawnxx 39 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 14 6:05 AM 2008
Silver trophy winner

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~ Dancing on Insanity ~

A shove so great to break you -
Falling, flailing into nonbeing;

by Paloszoo 23 lines, 17 comments, on Dec 18 1:44 PM 2008
Bronze trophy winner

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Conversational

Its your stupid fault that you're gone
You know that right?

by Guapia 22 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 18 3:26 PM
Honorable mention

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I'm sorry

I'm sorry I
pushed you away.

by Lionheart 37 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 2 7:50 PM 2008
Honorable mention

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You Could Have Stayed.

I felt your heart beat inside mine,
Your murmering for me.

by the-wake 29 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 4 6:35 AM. In Life

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Entries [9]

1 - 9 of 9

It's a wise child...

by Vera Rich 7 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 4 2:28 AM 2008

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melanie

by tonyher 28 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 6 9:49 PM

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My best friend whom i lost in feb. 02

MY FRIEND HAD A SON NAMED MATTHEW, AND THE REST OF THE WRITE HAPPENED JUST LIKE IT SAYS.

by Poetdontknowit 5 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 2 6:39 PM 2006. In Sad

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Up In Heaven

Their up in heaven, looking down.
No pain and worries are around.

by Little Fawn 16 lines, 11 comments, on Sep 4 10:13 AM 2008. In Spiritual, Love

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Goldmare
February 4
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I don't suppose it has to actually be something that has actually happened to you, eh? If fiction is acceptable, I have a prewrite I could enter.