MY FIRST CONTEST 
Okay... What i want from you is a poem about something that has caused you pain in some way. It can be anything. I want to feel your sorrow through your words.
prewritten poems are allowed up to two. If you want to enter a third poem it has to be a new one.
I look forward to reading all the entires and I will try to comment on each one
Okay... What i want from you is a poem about something that has caused you pain in some way. It can be anything. I want to feel your sorrow through your words.prewritten poems are allowed up to two. If you want to enter a third poem it has to be a new one.
I look forward to reading all the entires and I will try to comment on each one
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 29
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Thanks for entering and congrats
Contest Winners
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It's dark, cold, she shivers and little bits of hope rays peek
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A poem inspired by my severly depressed friend.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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You are poison in my eyes, skeleton full of lies
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by the evil angel 15 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 13 11:25 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Awakened by a deathly noise
Sitting in the nightby ListeningToSilence 27 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 16 2:08 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
A web of insecurity of the finest threading,
Lines my soul like the despair that I’m constantly shedding.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [146]
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Dear Lord above,
my Saviorby trekkergirl 73 lines, 30 comments, on Nov 29 12:19 PM 2008. In contest prayer, abuse, pain, personal, spiritual, thoughts, life, angst• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I am still here.
Tho you tried your best.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Tomorrow she will hide the scars
The poet at a loss of words to describe her love, the painful memories he evoked
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the door slams
you come back drunkby XxobsessedwithyouxX 24 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 6 8:06 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When I get the chance to tell her, When I get the chance to sayby Sorrowful Lament 39 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 1 12:17 AM 2008. In love life her other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A sheet of paper,
Half filled, laying upon a deserted desk.by Sorrowful Lament 41 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 1 12:26 AM 2008. In environment global warming al gore purged abortion• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
always there
on me• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
you know, i used to be a dreamer,
before you let me down.by youhadme-athello. 28 lines, 13 comments, on Jan 9 12:25 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
father, i hope you're proud
that's all i ever really wanted, you know?by youhadme-athello. 7 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 21 12:34 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Leave me to die!
My plea, my cry• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i wanna rip the flesh from you bones
take you apart with my bare hands and see what makes you work• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The store is having a sale!
Death! half off!by Chemicals 53 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 7 2:09 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Helplessly Struggling, no one around to care
No one around to help or listen, scream? I wouldn't dareby Chemicals 13 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 7 1:56 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Listening to your laugh
as you watch me cut myself,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
poem about being sexually abuse by my grandpaby Ronda loves elvis 31 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 4 9:45 AM 2007. In Personal, Abuse, Pain, My life, Depression• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You cut carefully
Around that pretty head of hisby G-y-p-o 23 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 3 10:31 AM• Commented on by judge. -
by Abstract Image 44 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 20 3:53 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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the cup of tea is standing still,
on the coffee table,by Lanasaur 28 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 21 3:09 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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First time
for everythingby dabpunx 27 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 29 5:43 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
All of my miserable life, I've only felt pain...
Pushing me to madness, I'm going insane...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My Feet-Aching
My Legs-Breaking• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Im stuck underground, all I hear is my heavy breath
I've been trapped down here ever since my death• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A touch of your hand
used to break my mindby Koromone 23 lines, 22 comments, on Jan 9 1:55 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Beneath each folded fabric
laid a bruised soul• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A dark shadow clouds my future I can seeby lunagirl15 30 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 1 8:29 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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/ Here I hang upon a thread, / Voices swirling in my head, / Thinking of the things she said, / Wallowing in pure denial. / / Oh so hby Rakerman1 20 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 27 8:02 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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don't try to fix me..
I'm already broken..by Coloured Skies 22 lines, 18 comments, on Aug 13 12:08 PM 2008. In Pain, Sad, Dark, Anger, Emo, Suicide, Teenage thinking, My life, Hate, Depression• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You hurt me again.
You said you wouldn't do it no more.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I am hurt Can't you see
You did this to meby XxTrappedInMusicxX 16 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 15 3:47 PM 2006. In Abuse• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
evermore
nevermoreby serenity silvermoon 27 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 19 8:28 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
beaten by chains
tortured by painby serenity silvermoon 22 lines, 23 comments, on Jan 8 7:02 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
(2) i used almost all the words the title kinda sucksby serenity silvermoon 28 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 3 8:47 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I stand infront of the thousands and thousands of footsteps I've taken. The sand I walk over. Is the covenant empty shores. Of lonelinessesby LonelyWolf Tasagka 11 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 3 3:17 PM. In Dark, Fantasy, Death, Loss, Longing, Life, Spiritual.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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This was written about JTS, but it'll be taken off after I print at school.by KateMadness 97 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 11 9:17 PM 2008. In Freewrite, Pain, Love, Hate, Thoughts, Dedication• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Dedicated to my band son, Kyle. Rby KateMadness 28 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 22 6:31 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Love, Thoughts, Freewrite, Dedication• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Wrote something in charcoal on a wooden
wall to remind myself that I wasn't comingby Jasmine Rayne 31 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 30 6:37 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Rain; a temptation like sunsets
on early horizons-- take me awayby Jasmine Rayne 30 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 3 7:02 PM• Viewed by judge. -
Forever in a dream, but not out of reach.
She's gently floating up stream.by turpins shell 24 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 9 3:37 PM 2005. In Hope• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A slender foot, then leg, steps into the shower;
smooth, slightly tan, with a tattoo on her left ankle.by RebelAngel 20 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 26 10:23 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
How could you say
The things that you didby sweetieforever 11 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 21 8:10 AM. In Life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
To Mommy:
Just barely a babyby AlittleWrong 74 lines, 12 comments, on Jan 18 3:10 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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