Are you feeling down? hurt? betrayed by someone you love?
I want to feel your pain... i want emotions...make me feel them
No rules really just u know no bashing, no WrITinG LiKe ThIs
and it would be nice if you'd comment on other peoples poems..
dont have to it'd just be a nice thing to do.
I'll add more points as i get them.
JUST HAVE FUN!
I want to feel your pain... i want emotions...make me feel them
No rules really just u know no bashing, no WrITinG LiKe ThIs
and it would be nice if you'd comment on other peoples poems..
dont have to it'd just be a nice thing to do.
I'll add more points as i get them.
JUST HAVE FUN!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 26
- Rewards: Gold: 800, Silver: 500, Bronze: 250, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: congrats to al
Contest Winners
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In all your saddness and despire,
Coated with a cold-hearted shell• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
It's a monster inside of me,
A beast that can't be tamed.• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
Darkness surrounds, black tears are shed,
the screaming resounds the words that I've said.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
One tear is for the memory of how it used to be
One tear is for the memory that no one got to see• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
A written message had been sent to her...
From the person she loved the most in the worldby rinzurajan 48 lines, 17 comments, on Jan 22 6:58 AM. In PAIN, PERSONAL, HOPE, FREE VERSE
Honorable mention
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by misshugglebugglez 58 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 31 9:16 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Lift her up to throw her down
Broken barbie, plastic smile• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
I have a dream
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Sometimes I wonder if you care for me at all.
You gave your answer when you chased me out the door.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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What happened to all the "I love you's"?
What happened to all the "good nights"?by JoeJEALOUSY 33 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 4 3:54 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Smokin Pall Malls
Feelin mighty smallby Cosmic Musketeer 24 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 30 2:26 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
so many words left unsaid
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She had no place to go
Trapped, Scared, all alone.by soccrchic6 12 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 21 11:47 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I can’t explain this to you,
you’d never understand.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
PART I
By: Ashley Kleebergby truetrue13 54 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 5 6:55 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
You told me that you loved me
As often as you could• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [157]
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Close your eyes, Tell me the truth, did you do it?
Did you steal my heart so that you could break it?by blood.stained.tears 19 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 31 2:40 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Scarlet Love, Scarlet Love.
Burning me with pain, your eyes tell me,• Commented on by judge. -
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Please don't look away from me,
tell me I'm wrong,by Gay-Militant 33 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 31 11:50 PM• Commented on by judge. -
I'll never forget that first day of May.
When I told you to pack up and get out of my way.by Irisheyes35 43 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 13 10:02 PM 2008. In Personal, Abuse, Message, My life, Hope, Goodbyes, Inspirational• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My brother wants to go
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I dreamed of you and I in a small house
with a picket fence surrounding a yard• Commented on by judge. -
There is only one way
that gets the anger outby Janice M Pickett 5 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 1 1:12 AM• Commented on by judge. -
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I wanted to feel like I had moved on,
like I had finally let you go.by LonelyLilly 22 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 1 12:19 AM• Commented on by judge. -
Desperate ambition aspires acceptance
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by Chaotic peaceofmind 28 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 1 12:51 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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but i keep thinking
about saying............good-bye
by addicted-flaw 28 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 20 2:50 PM. In Sad, Pain, My life, Suicide, Self, Depression, Weird• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'm tetering on the egde of the living
and the dead,by Brokentruth93 22 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 30 2:37 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
They appear to you
In bright red painted facesby chael 13 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 1 12:28 AM• Commented on by judge. -
I've lost so many times I almost feel I'm winning,
winning something.• Commented on by judge. -
I keep giving and get nothing in return. I keep giving with nowhere to turn. I have no choice. I have no voice. I Feel like i have no part,by CherokeeSiren 6 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 8 6:17 PM 2007. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Painful memories- the struggle to move beyond the flashbacks.by Writing0Freedom 68 lines, 11 comments, on Dec 28 1:53 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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'i can't do this anymore;'
[five words that would change everything,]by innocence jaded.xx 25 lines, 41 comments, on Dec 3 8:20 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by AutumnsFlame 21 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 12 9:06 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Whats this feeling inside? The tears I have cried. The remorse of some one who has died. I could of spent more time with him. At least I could of tried. But now I feel the pain, now I feel the acid rain melting my heart away.by Wearealldead 0 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 1 10:04 PM. In Love, Life, Dark, Sad, Pain, Other, Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You asked what was wrong and I forced a smile and said nothing. Then when you had walked away I whispered... everything• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A true story of a dear friend.by WordsDoMatter 41 lines, 43 comments, on Nov 25 7:42 AM 2008. In Sorrow, friendship, death, anguish, anorexia• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I don't know that girl.
I don't know what she's like.by tequillapixie 30 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 8 5:45 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
taking deep breaths as I smell you so close
you're the only person I don't feel worthy of speaking toby libel - 115 lines, 27 comments, on Feb 1 9:08 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
from the beginning
you scared me• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Time has smoothed away some scars but the worst remains the same• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Thinking about you on this day
Knowing nothing will ever be the same.• Commented on by judge. -
The strongest man I've ever met
Is one who doesn't know it yet.
With farm worked shoulders• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
raised in the dark; scared and alone
in the middle of a world where hatred is shown,by cycoboy92 14 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 22 2:55 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I stand for my family.
but who stands for me?by Natural Disaster 29 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 9 1:16 PM. In Thoughts, Personal, Family, Teen issues• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i want to hurt you.
i want to purposely conjure the wordsby tattered paige 11 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 4 1:27 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The world is so cold
And full of pain.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The person you
love the mostby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 42 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 18 3:54 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Maybe "For better or for worse", "in sickness and in health",
Didn't mean as much to you as it meant to me.by Sortingthroughlife 10 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 29 12:21 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Ravages of
Hollowed out• Commented on by judge.
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Yep, all of the above.
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Very busy contest!!
Good luck in the judging, I've entered myself in there = ]
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I just entered a poem and somehow I don't see it in here
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just entered 2 of my poems
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im very sorry i didnt comment on all or didnt even read them
ive been in hospital for my eating disorder and only come home once a week 4 5 hours which isnt enough time to read and comment on all of them
i didnt even get to judge it the system did
im sorry everyone...xx
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