WHAT I WANT: a poem about a relationship that does not end happily ever after
- doesn't have to be death but a i mean come on that is the unhappiest ever after out there
- doesn't have to be about romeo and Juliet ~ though those about it will really make my star shine if you get my hind *hint hint cough cough*
- modern romeo and Juliet would be cool *hint hint*
Rules:
- everything goes
- i don't care about length but too long if im not into i kinda skim...
- label appropriately
- prewrites welcome
*if you would like a cheesy all positive feed back that is warm hearted and makes you feel special please but "Butterflies in your Author notes*
* if you want critiquing that may be harsh please put "caterpillar in your author notes*
- doesn't have to be death but a i mean come on that is the unhappiest ever after out there
- doesn't have to be about romeo and Juliet ~ though those about it will really make my star shine if you get my hind *hint hint cough cough*
- modern romeo and Juliet would be cool *hint hint*
Rules:
- everything goes
- i don't care about length but too long if im not into i kinda skim...
- label appropriately
- prewrites welcome
*if you would like a cheesy all positive feed back that is warm hearted and makes you feel special please but "Butterflies in your Author notes*
* if you want critiquing that may be harsh please put "caterpillar in your author notes*
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 13
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 150, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: thank you so much awesome write you guys overall great
Contest Winners
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nothing lasts forever.
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taking deep breaths as I smell you so close
you're the only person I don't feel worthy of speaking to• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Like so many others, it started with "hello".
A simple "nice to meet you", a smile for show.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
She can't live without
him because she has nothing else.• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
hypocrite hypocrite hypocrite hypocrite hypocrite!!!
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“It’s a lovely snow, isn’t it?”
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I promise and
take a spin.by laurel 11 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 13 6:55 PM 2008. In Friendship, Longing, Teenage thinking, Teen issues• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [31]
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by Irisheyes35 42 lines, 2 comments, on May 23 12:59 AM 2008. In Adult, life, pain, personal, and forbidden love.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You were the love of my life, you still are. You told me you loved me, we would never part.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She said she loved me
And I loved herby Cosmic Musketeer 42 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 6 6:54 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
So if you love me
Let me goby patty-92 9 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 22 7:18 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Burnt-Angel 28 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 30 11:45 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Jacob had it made, being the most
popular boy in school, and coming• Viewed by judge. -
I've met someone who has felt
the underside of roses.• Commented on by judge. -
I cried heart wrenching tears
Having watched you slip away,• Commented on by judge. -
My head tells me to walk away,
But what drives my heart begs me to stay.by Loveberry 47 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 28 10:57 AM. In Love, Contest, Pain, Personal, Hope, My own style, Lost in thought, Lost love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Every day she sits near the water
Her servants, the few allowed• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Looking at me with your swollen red eyes,
you lightly touch my hands and cry.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
How dare you swagger in my life, upset my perfect world. How dare you be the one for me, and belong to another girlby AlittleWrong 326 lines, 63 comments, on Oct 29 10:44 PM 2008. In Love, Pain, The Other Woman, Cheating, Personal, Angst, Lost love, Angry• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The person you
love the mostby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 42 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 18 3:54 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Through words of mouth
Made very clear to me• Viewed by judge. -
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bookmarking.
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bookmarked!
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Mine is the only one not viewed...
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butterflies and caterpillars (:
that's cute hehe and clever
how come you always leave me butterflies though my AN doesn't say it ?
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