Topics:
Cutting and Addiction to Pain
Suicide and Attempting
Or Both.
Don't give me bullshit.
No novels.
No dirty pretty.
Spell good.
Limit the happiness.
I want fresh or AWESOME pre-writes.
Don't just choose a random of your poems that possibly suit the criteria, only enter it if it is AWESOME.
I will be DQing the bullshit.
Thank you all.
Go hence forth and WRITE.
Dani.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 1
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 4 people
- Final notes: Thank you all for wonderful entries. It was just what I asked for. Congrats to the winners. Read them.
Contest Winners
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this was the result of a dream i had as are most of the things i write about• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Webmd said that twenty Aspirin was enough
To kill a one hundred and twenty pound woman• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Sometimes (at night) the street seems much longer
And things not noticed (in the day) become more apparent• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
First he carves her name
All over his skin• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
suicidal thoughts run thru my head
my blood bleeds bright redby w.o.n.d.e.r.w.a.l.l 26 lines, 14 comments, on Nov 13 11:54 PM 2008. In suicide, depression, pain
Honorable mention
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [47]
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by lillypilly 44 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 19 8:52 PM 2008. In adult, dirty pretty, emo, thoughts, Adult, weird• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I lay in ruin; Pain claims my being;
Eternity mocks me, cruel and demeaning.by heavenbird 25 lines, 24 comments, on Jan 9 4:19 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The kitchen knife becomes inviting, as Chelsea's life is not worth fighting.
The scars run up and down her wrist, as life crumbles she hides a bloody fist.by heavenbird 30 lines, 17 comments, on Dec 1 12:16 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Stolen kitchenware screams undaunted;
Promises broken and then forgotten.by heavenbird 22 lines, 20 comments, on Dec 1 3:52 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
nothing lasts forever.
by heavenbird 63 lines, 25 comments, on Jan 31 12:41 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Wake me up inside,
by heavenbird 42 lines, 15 comments, on Dec 1 12:17 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When the loneliness creeps,
Like a blackby wafi 19 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 31 4:53 AM• Commented on by judge. -
Your kind words and grandest love,
affection so pure and true;by arnica karuna 48 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 3 10:17 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Let me end my painful life, / I can go to the Arizona Desert. / And put my hand in a venomous rattlesnake’s nest. / His fang will bite my hand with deadly venom, / which will ensure the end of my painful life. / &n• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I ran from him as quickly as I could
hiding from the world
by Dangerousparable 9 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 31 7:22 AM• Commented on by judge. -
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They say I'm messed up
Something's broken deep inside,by Wolfpoet 57 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 31 9:37 AM• Commented on by judge. -
A Walking Gun Point
(( Emotional Twisted Words ))by theredcatjazzoflove 69 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 31 10:25 AM. In Life, Def Poetry, Spoken Word, Neo Soul, Contest, Angst, Society, Dark• Commented on by judge. -
spiking coils inward
furious frustration tumbling aroundby intoothandclaw 49 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 4 3:12 AM 2008. In Abuse, Pain, Anger, Depression, Personal, Thoughts, Freewrite, Free verse• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
screaming black firecrackers
dancing under the empty skyby intoothandclaw 17 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 15 8:29 PM. In Personal, Life, Thoughts, Abstract, Freewrite, Free verse• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i have to end this war
the war that rages in my mindby w.o.n.d.e.r.w.a.l.l 19 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 13 11:41 PM 2008. In suicide, pain, sad, depression• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Fritz O skennick 30 lines, 24 comments, on Mar 18 8:07 PM 2008. In Pain, Self harm., Dark, Schizophrenia., Depression• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The darkness building up inside,
My mind and flesh are numb.by Fritz O skennick 32 lines, 15 comments, on Oct 8 3:07 PM 2007. In Personal, Dark, Pain, Self harm, schizophrenia• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Fritz O skennick 24 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 26 5:06 PM 2007. In Dark, Suicidal, Schizophrenia. Lyrics, Depression
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The darkness calls when I’m alone,
To tempt me with its lure.by Fritz O skennick 28 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 8 4:34 PM 2007. In Self-harm, Schizophrenia, Lyrics• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It's a song. Lyrical poetry is the best kind! And again, I'm NOT suicidal. NOT.by the evil angel 38 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 8 8:52 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I was one.
Depending on me.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i hate my life,
i wish i wasnt born,by kirstyjonas 18 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 1 12:03 PM• Commented on by judge. -
The velvety stars, shining upon me,
Now dwindling, dimming with perplexity.by Ebbing.X.Discreetly 30 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 31 8:52 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Everyday i think more and more,
whats the point in living?by starving4perfection 27 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 19 1:09 PM. In Death, Sad, Depression, Dark, Pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i open my eyes
the rooms to bright• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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All I think...
All I see...
All I want...• Commented on by judge. -
I have came to open my eyes, straining past the blindness of the lights from my bathroom
my pupils have not dilated enough to see clear.by completely mad 32 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 6 1:11 PM• Commented on by judge. -
If only I had listened to your decaying lungs
they must have been stretched to their limitsby jayyniecakes. 27 lines, 11 comments, on Feb 2 11:25 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Keep me safe as I sleep
stay beside me as I weep.by xXBloodyravenXx 15 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 19 4:59 PM. In cutting• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Crying in the room
in the dark. She doesn'tby AngelsKissesJenna 40 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 8 12:22 AM• Commented on by judge.
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Is prose okay, or should I spew poetry instead?
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either as long as its not rediculously long. i will bore.
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Allrighty, bookmarked
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Hi there,
Thank you so much for your kind & thoughtful words & also for the Gold shiny...
Both are very much appreciated... 
Take care,
Fritz..........
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Thank you Dani;
you give me motivation to keep writing.
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