well the name of the contest explains what i want!
poems of coarse are always welcome, but feel free to post lyrics too.
recently 2 of my friends commited suicide, so i'm in the mood for something sad.
It doesn't have to be suicide it can be a ''normal'' death, or you can write something emo or about abuse.
oh i'd like it if i got some fresh writes, i'm allowing 2 per person
so feel free to write something new!
thanx guys, good luck!
poems of coarse are always welcome, but feel free to post lyrics too.
recently 2 of my friends commited suicide, so i'm in the mood for something sad.
It doesn't have to be suicide it can be a ''normal'' death, or you can write something emo or about abuse.
oh i'd like it if i got some fresh writes, i'm allowing 2 per person
so feel free to write something new!
thanx guys, good luck!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 13
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: this was realy hard for me to judge
i've had alot goin one latley
and i want to apoligize for takeing so long to finally judge
i'm also sorry i didn't comment everyones
thanx guys
Contest Winners
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It's a song. Lyrical poetry is the best kind! And again, I'm NOT suicidal. NOT.by the evil angel 38 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 8 8:52 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [59]
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Silence of the room overpowering the mind,
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Tell me how does it feel?
Watching me fall,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It's sad. but please read it.. i really want some feedback• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The End.
I took from life what life gave to me.
All to the darkness, nothing to the sun...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
the scars you've created
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The person you
love the mostby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 42 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 18 3:54 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My last wish,
was to keep our last kiss,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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his promise/ her ring,
now rests-eternally.by Antebellum 41 lines, 10 comments, on Dec 16 9:11 PM 2008. In Pain, Other, Love, Sad, random thoughts, Noguest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Lying bloody on the floor,
Broken bones and shattered glass.by Winged Unicorn 19 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 14 6:31 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The rains pounding on the cold cement floor
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How did she get here ?
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And life's not there when you see it
Wasted in a box made of woodby DannyMonsoon 29 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 17 8:08 PM. In Personal, Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Life, Suicide, Friendship, Sadness, Dedication• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Tears keep falling as I spiral down.
My world tumbles out of control.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
shine dark down in abyssby Apocalyptic Scarves 28 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 14 12:11 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by FleetingImage 39 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 6 11:58 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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i'm selfish and cruel.by skies painted red 5 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 29 8:25 PM• Commented on by judge.
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You don't appreciate,
You just don't know,by Dylan-Moran 15 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 30 6:39 AM• Commented on by judge. -
My heart's last breath has been
written on this paper. Tonight, becomes• Viewed by judge. -
You leave this life / Quietly and fast / Like the edge of a knife / That is softly cast / Life fades away / Unnoticed and meek / Like the eby Luciferschild 20 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 3 9:06 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by serenity silvermoon 12 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 11 10:08 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Sometimes, when you stare into the abyss
The abyss will stare back into your soul,by De-Throned 14 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 17 11:39 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by redbarchettadrive 4 lines, 20 comments, on Feb 9 1:59 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Ink falls on the paper,
Once again,by De-Throned 30 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 2 11:56 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
ok this is a poem about a guy i know and the term Despair is him...ask if you need to read the clear version of itby FleetingImage 32 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 12 10:44 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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He is gone to a bad place I cannot see him againby clara wilson-nelson 20 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 29 7:32 PM 2008. In loss of love by separation• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Even though I've said it before
This one was the hardest one yet• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The Stars of a night in Vietnam are crystallised in time forever
Memories echo with the sight of bloodshot comrades who have seen too muchby Writing0Freedom 47 lines, 44 comments, on Oct 25 8:24 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
~This Time it's Not Pretend
by redbarchettadrive 36 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 3 3:22 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
View from my Mom's Porch In Memory of Cora WoodruffCry not for me, I have not left.I've merely changed addresses.My love is here and will aby skye01 0 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 28 5:31 AM. In Personal, Spiritual, Sad, Love, Inspirational, Dedication, Family, Death, Loss• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The Human Race
I'm living in a world of darkness• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I feel so lost and upset
i dont know what to doby starving4perfection 44 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 29 7:50 PM. In Lost, Hurt, Sad, Depressed, Depression, suicide, giving up• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
High on acid,
let me bail on lifeby serenity silvermoon 22 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 25 10:54 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The evening settles in, as the arrows strike six-thirty on the clocktower. The unlenghtly and fast setting red orange glaze, falls beneath the line of black. I walk down south tartan avenue, smoking the last of my ciggarette;by LonelyWolf Tasagka 6 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 28 1:04 PM. In Short Story, Dark, Heartbreak, Suicide• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You made me cry
You made me bleed• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Walk the dark path through the cold night endlessby lunagirl15 39 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 16 12:19 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A heart that did not beat
Filled with so much love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Failure... / That's all I am. / My friends call me annoying, / So I failed to be a friend. / They say that I'm annoying, / Like I'm nothing• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Dead stars accumulate amongst the Heavens
the sky in it's forgotten stateby Devilish Temptation 35 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 8 11:42 AM• Viewed by judge. -
Painted porcelain lips contradicted the
Festering torment of your suffering.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My soul is infected / Insanity deep and slow / From poison collected / In my life, long ago / / A time of hell and fear / Long ago, was it fate? / Why did it reappear / This deadly contaminate. / / Ruthlby Luciferschild 23 lines, 9 comments, on May 1 11:41 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I'm sorry that you lost your friends that way!! I too have lost a few resently the same way and others too, I hope that my poem is what you are looking for in some way or another.. Thanks for letting me enter.. Sarah
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I hope...
That someone fitting under the stereotype of Emo isn't your assumption as to how you can get a poem that fits the stereo type too..
I know a lot of so-called "Emo" people, and only two can write decent poetry..
The others try, but they fail...
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when i said 'emo' i meant the stereotype emo poetry, you know the whole cutting thing
you dont have to be emo, but when i say emo i mean the stereotype
i'm not trying to be offensive or anything, i fit the stereotype, i just mean
i want the 'emo' poetry, does that make any sense?
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i'm sorry for your loss..i know how you feel i've lost one of my friends that way too. i probably will be entering
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