On the 21st of January, 2008, I tried to jump off a bridge.
I realise I am 6 days overdue, but still.
Now, I am 'better', or getting there, at least.
However, I'm starting to remember some familiar feelings, nothing half as extreme, I'm not going to go slit my wrists or anything.
I'm starting to feel numb, starting to lack interest.
And I fear I've scared away my muse.
So, I want something to inspire me, something excellent, something so thick with imagery and descriptions and metaphors that I reach out to the screen and grasp it.
You have three prompts:
1. The image/s
a.
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=410252419&albumID=1081603&imageID=11951832
b.
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=410252419&albumID=1081603&imageID=12182162
c.
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=410252419&albumID=1081603&imageID=11951818
2. Love, or lack of it.
3. Anything else.
And there's rules:
No sticky caps,
nothing under 10 lines,
no bad writing.
and no pedestrian rhyme, if you do it, do it well.
I'd like to promise to comment on every single entry, but realistically, I might not.
If I have nothing to say about your piece, then I won't.
I realise I am 6 days overdue, but still.
Now, I am 'better', or getting there, at least.
However, I'm starting to remember some familiar feelings, nothing half as extreme, I'm not going to go slit my wrists or anything.
I'm starting to feel numb, starting to lack interest.
And I fear I've scared away my muse.
So, I want something to inspire me, something excellent, something so thick with imagery and descriptions and metaphors that I reach out to the screen and grasp it.
You have three prompts:
1. The image/s
a.
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=410252419&albumID=1081603&imageID=11951832
b.
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=410252419&albumID=1081603&imageID=12182162
c.
http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=410252419&albumID=1081603&imageID=11951818
2. Love, or lack of it.
3. Anything else.
And there's rules:
No sticky caps,
nothing under 10 lines,
no bad writing.
and no pedestrian rhyme, if you do it, do it well.
I'd like to promise to comment on every single entry, but realistically, I might not.
If I have nothing to say about your piece, then I won't.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 17
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: I was certainly inspired,
and I wish I could've given about 16 golds out.
Thank you.
x.
Contest Winners
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“Cover her face; mine eyes dazzle: she died young”
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I am ripped taffeta in hues of maroon; I am silk-woven betrayals and cut out paper hearts bleeding of imperfection.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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in your mouth
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To force myself to stand
To continue this pilgrimageby Sara the Stray 109 lines, on Nov 13 11:11 PM 2007. In Loss, Death, Memory, Innocence, Nature, Society, End of the World, Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Its such a nightmare....why does love hurt so bad !by Anu-Nataraj 35 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 14 1:08 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Mascara running down her face, she waits an eternity,
a lady in waiting, for her lover to return.
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Flames of destructioin.
Burning and destroying.by Horrific Hollis 5 lines, 15 comments, on Oct 22 6:45 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A man once so loved a woman
he dreamt of her night and day• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Kneel down.
Lift your frown.by TheQueenOfPoetry 23 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 27 2:54 PM. In Spiritual, Inspirational, Contest, Hope• Viewed by judge. -
Not until someone you love
dies in your armsby Sadijara 133 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 27 2:59 PM• Viewed by judge. -
I'm fighting with this bottle,
seems like it's winning.by harleychick 16 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 6 2:59 PM 2008. In Life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I love you too much
You can't love me enough• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Please hold me closer and promise me this,"
She asked of him through dying lips.by AlittleWrong 44 lines, 65 comments, on Nov 24 6:58 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
To Mommy:
Just barely a babyby AlittleWrong 73 lines, 36 comments, on Jan 16 12:10 AM. In Contest, Dark, Life, Pain, Sad, Angst, My own style, Children, Teen issues• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by the evil angel 12 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 27 7:38 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The sunset lay on the moon
over the dark green hillby Lanasaur 17 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 19 7:51 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Are you sure you should read this?
It has side-effects.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
pour down your cheek
he fried your cheddar cheese flavored heartby jayyniecakes. 16 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 27 3:12 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Was this how it had been the times before?
Is this destined to be my final line?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
silence seduces my soul
teases till its secrets surfaceby ApollosMuse 25 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 8 5:55 AM• Viewed by judge. -
For a brief moment I touched Eternity,
saw fairies make love beneath toadstools,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I've tried and tried all my life
to make people proud of meby starving4perfection 21 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 31 3:10 PM. In Sad, Suicide, Depression, Upset, Hurt• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
And I wonder softly to the wind:
“Will we all become like leaves and drift from trees,by Candy Morphine 24 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 6 12:25 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Why do I sit in this room and scream for God to just take?
Just take this life from me and end this fucking misery.by As the days go by 17 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 11 11:34 AM• Commented on by judge. -
'Color me Shutter-Tone Deaf'by SeaWithYourHeart 16 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 11 3:15 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Damnednforgotten 50 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 19 3:21 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Come here
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Acrostic.
Picture credit-me this is dad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Comments
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Dont let the beast steal your muse! Hang in there...things will get better. Ive attempted MANY times so I know what you're going through. Be safe and God bless.
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You TRIED to jump off a bridge? How can you TRY without jumping? Was the wall too high? Did you get run over before jumping? Did a cat hiss at you and make you jump to the other side? Was it more of an optical illusion and/or a dream and the bridge was not really a bridge - sort of more like the edge of a bunk-bed? Did you pass out? Are you scared of heights? Was there a bouncy castle at the end of the fall or are you just a really good swimmer?
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Thank you sooo much for the shiny things babe! I'm so happy I got gold

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You're welcome

They deserved it, tbh.
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