Write from your own soul, give me what you feel , desire, crave want
make me feel it, see it and want it, as badly as you.
No limit , but don't write me a book I bore quickly.
I love imagery.
I am not big on cutting poems, but if that's what you are feeling give it to me!
Make me understand why and don't be simple saying it takes the heart break away!
I am not big on suicide poems, unless they are written in raw, if you feel that way then ok, give me it, help me to understand why, make me feel your sadness and pain.
If you are in love then make me feel that Love!
If you are a christian then let me see the love of God Pour from your eyes into my heart.
Write anything, This will be judged on how your write makes me feel...
make me feel it, see it and want it, as badly as you.
No limit , but don't write me a book I bore quickly.
I love imagery.
I am not big on cutting poems, but if that's what you are feeling give it to me!
Make me understand why and don't be simple saying it takes the heart break away!
I am not big on suicide poems, unless they are written in raw, if you feel that way then ok, give me it, help me to understand why, make me feel your sadness and pain.
If you are in love then make me feel that Love!
If you are a christian then let me see the love of God Pour from your eyes into my heart.
Write anything, This will be judged on how your write makes me feel...
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 23
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 7 people
- Final notes: First thank you all for the entries and the beautiful writes, I was having a hard time deciding between a few of these so I asked mysticalryne to help me with the judging, when in doubt call upon a friend So thank you Mystical.
Each poem was worthy of reading and a few were worth of good trophies, however atlast I had to make a decision based on what I wanted in the contest and you all did follow those gide lines so then had to resort to my true love of poetry and go with the imagery in them and then of course to make sure It was fair I called for help so thank you all and congrats in my eyes you are all golden it takes courage to write and put our hearts out there. Tl next time
Contest Winners
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I was a crippled outcast from the whitewashed temples,
preserved by those who say love and light in their false piety,• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
There have been times that I instantly felt alone,
shackled, chained, clinging onto little Faith known.• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
Your memories
Cut into me• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4980197, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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The darkness has consumed my soul
Now I must show it to the worldby CookieMonsterMaster 19 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 22 6:55 PM. In Thoughts, Dark, Pain, Personal, Teenage thinking, Sadness, Self
Honorable mention
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I look deep in your eyes
you told me to be truthful• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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I will Judge, Thanks for the entries I am still waiting for one to be completed, good luck everyone I will be reading them all again and commenting. -
oh darn you might have liked my poem
The darkness that follows the light-
Winds sigh vehements of displeasure,
Abating candles of grief mournfuly.
The light that wandered from the sun to the moon
Now wanes into darkness deplorably.
Barefoot through the balding snow,
Where wintry darkness veils over the trees and the grass
And nothingness stretches through miles of cold,
As I long for an end to this Baltic wasteland.
All the tragedies from the far sides of the world,
In God's forsaken land, where pain and death
Took life, and held it with an icy hand.
And as the Shofar horn sounds through the silhouette,
Revelating the heavens and it's existance,
I looked up in my plight,
To skies torn asunder,
To see burnt, barren fields, and I laughed. -
aaah I'm too late to enter
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I am trying to judge now
I will read all of these over again and hope to judge shortly, you al did not make this easy for me ! LOL -
Thank you for the honor of the gold. Congratulations to all the winners.
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Thank You!!
Thank You for the HM and points for I am Honored also Appreciative
Congratulations to all who placed
Another Wonderful contest and Welcome Back!!
Thank You for Hosting Sweet Soul!
Also Thank You for helping Judge Mystical
Many blessings to You
Best wishes in all You do
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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