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i'm all out of faith; [this is how i feel♥] quickiee.




ohkay, so i'm pretty upset right now.
-guys suck [well, the majority. no offense to anyone.]
-& emotions suck

 
i need you to write 20-40 words to create a poem about this;
girl [me] likes guy, guy likes girl, but guy has girlfriend,
guy shoves it in girl's face
girl gets upset
and ends up taking two steps backward every time. 

make it angry. make me cry. make me smile.
favorites, i would love if you would enter, especially. 

--imagery
--poetic devices
--extensive vocabulary

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use them !

reserve a spot; i'll be closing this tonight around 9ish [hopefully] 
up to three entries per person;

i need to feel better. ):

--->♥

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on February 16
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
  • Final notes:
    amazing entries. wow, it all really opened my eyes to A LOT. brilliant. (: congrats to everybody !

Contest Winners

  1. by broken-colours 7 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 20 6:11 PM
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. choke the artery that ensembles you so additively
    && stop giving me reality
    by faerie 10 lines, 12 comments, on Jan 20 5:45 PM
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. my cinnamon eyes follow the trail
    of hurt your words leave behind.
    by thegirlsafaultline. 18 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 20 5:45 PM
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. by AbidoodleCullen 5 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 20 5:07 PM
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. by broken-colours 6 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 20 5:25 PM
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. by amaranthine lover 16 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 20 7:48 PM. In Contest, noguest, Abstract, Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. by SmidyMilton 10 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 21 1:32 AM. In Love, Sad, Lost
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. by Ithica 11 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 23 2:16 PM. In Love, Personal, Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]

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  • broken-colours
    January 20
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    Aww. Babe. :/
    I'll try!


  • AbidoodleCullen
    January 20
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    Couldn't agree more!
    Good luck hun!

  • God... I know exactly how this feels but it's been so long ago. I'll come back and try to write something if I can muster up the memories enough to get something decent out of it.


  • faerie
    January 20
    Edit | Reply
    I'm wishing I hadn't entered,
    now that I'm reading everyone elses stuff.

    gah!


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    January 20
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    It really sucks when people treat others like a door mat

  • SmidyMilton
    January 21
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    Would you like to know what really sucks.. People who enter these contest and can not follow the rules.. I am not too sure what these illiterate fucks do not understand about 20-40 words. It kind of does not make it fair for those of us who do know the rules! And to be blatant, at least their shit sucks. It would be more impressive work had it been done in the numerical confines of this contest. That being said.. I hope you enjoy mine and as always.. Thanks for reading

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