Give ME EMOTION

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on January 29
• Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
• Final notes:
  ok you guys i've finished, i'm really sorry i didn't get around to commenting everyones entry. this was by far one of the hardest i've had to judge, i know i said i wanted everything
  but in the end i preferred the painful, darker ones becuz of whats going on in my life at this time. if i could you would all be getting gold, but i did my best.
  you should check out the winners, i think they're really good, and touched me personally. thanx everyone!
  ~violent glass~

Contest Winners

1. "Inside These Walls"

   inside these walls,
   there's many secrets.

   by TexasMomma 36 lines, 36 comments, on Dec 24 4:07 AM 2007. In Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts
   Gold trophy winner

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2. Forever I Remember

   Out of sight
   Out of mind

   by AngeloCacciato 47 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 23 11:28 PM 2008. In Abuse, Hope, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Spiritual, Other
   Silver trophy winner

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3. [ She comes home from school ]

   She comes home from school
   With tears built in her eyes

   by XxRazorxXCuts 23 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 20 2:07 PM 2008. In Suicide, cutting, sad, dark, depression
   Honorable mention

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4. Silent pain

   You hear screaming
   Sobbing

   by FallenAngelWings 21 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 14 12:50 PM 2008. In Dark, Pain, Personal, Sad
   Honorable mention

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Entries [101]

• your heart is an empty room.

  by stargazer. 24 lines, 21 comments, on Jan 19 5:03 PM

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• how many babies does it take to paint a wall, just depends on how hard you throw it...

  you jokingly say you'll kill me.
  a force a smile at your playful, silly taunt.

  by skies painted red 24 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 26 8:32 PM 2008

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• i love you

  my body turns warm and he embraces me.
  a kiss and he leaves for a moment, a quick moment.

  by skies painted red 13 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 20 8:42 PM 2008

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• My Dark Ways

  I can't stop the blood it seems to flood, my mind. Im losing control of life. I quickly grab my knife. What's wrong with me, i cant seem to

  by baseball99 0 lines, 5 comments, on May 28 9:48 PM 2008

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• Hook in Mouth

  by intoothandclaw 27 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 16 11:13 PM. In Personal, Thoughts, Dark, Spiritual, Shinja

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• Forever

  Thunder erupts,
  Cracking the glass of death

  by makenzie 26 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 18 12:51 AM

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• Dance of Death

  The music is playing,
  louder and louder.

  by InsanityisAmusing 36 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 16 6:22 PM. In Dark, Fantasy, Pain, Other

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• Forbidden To Break

  currently working on this

  by delightfulmess 35 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 3 2:21 PM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Love, Life, Pain

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• kiss

  here we are
  a moment

  by bladesrsharp 3 lines, 13 comments, on Nov 24 8:54 PM 2008. In Love

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• Without~

  Nude,
  my sheets no substitute for touch.

  by delightfulmess 17 lines, 26 comments, on Oct 23 3:20 PM 2008. In Sad, Life, Personal, Pain, Thoughts, Contest, Love

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• a naive little girl

  I began to fall for you when in reality you were not as though you seemed. You made me feel as though you liked me for me but it was all just a joke. Maybe some where deep what you say is what you feel. In the end as it turns

  by pieface 0 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 12 10:40 PM 2008

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• To Whom It May Concern

  Again, I am sending you one little epitaph
  to follow when you seek my depth.

  by Romily 14 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 17 10:56 AM 2007. In Sad, Love, Pain

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• Untitled

  I cared so much for you and you left me in the dust.
  I showed you how I felt and still I got nothing.

  by pieface 8 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 10 1:35 AM

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• An Earnest Plea

  Take my hand
  And please oh please

  by A-muse-in-writer 16 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 18 1:53 AM. In Contest, Sad, Pain

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• The hourglass

  It sits on the mantle
  gathering dust

  by csmmoms2 61 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 18 1:48 AM

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• Imagination from Dusk to Dawn

  Till dusk to dawn, till the last wind flow between the wood
  Let our heart flow like the sudden cascade of sparks.

  by Romily 23 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 10 12:32 AM 2008. In Love, Fantasy

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• Conscious Hemo-(triggering)

  by Girl-Interrupted 34 lines, 21 comments, on Oct 19 9:17 PM 2008. In Abuse, Adult, Angst, Dark, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, My own style, My life, Sadness

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• The Day the Laughter Cried

  Yeah...this one's a really personal one...if you've ever been the class clown you'll know what I'm talking about.

  by MysteriousStrangerX 31 lines, 33 comments, on Nov 19 1:17 AM 2008. In Angst, Dark, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Weird

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• Insubstantial

  Brittle, Breakable
  Like walking on egg shells

  by LaVieSansCouleur 36 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 15 11:59 PM. In Teen issues, Personal., Depressed, Hate, Emo, Depression, Sadness, Friendship, Angst

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• Chalk

  there is a taste in my mouth
  bitter

  by LaVieSansCouleur 17 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 8 10:45 PM. In Pain, Death, My life, Anger, Hate, Escape, Angry

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• I so detest the smile that sneaks...

  I don't like the sunny days,
  nor rainbows nor birds nor trees,

  by arnica karuna 27 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 3 12:17 PM. In Dark, Thoughts, Sad, Personal, Pain, Love

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• Addicted

  Your kind words and grandest love,
  affection so pure and true;

  by arnica karuna 48 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 3 10:17 AM 2008

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• I am Who I am

  I am my own person
  And this is a fact

  by Dawn Bon 44 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 18 3:16 AM

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• Dreams

  A tunnel of light surrounds me
  A peace one only feels when dead

  by Night Terrors 16 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 28 5:10 PM 2008. In Dark, Hope, Love, Spiritual, Thoughts

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• The dim lights

  Beneath each folded fabric
  laid a bruised soul

  by Koromone 24 lines, 34 comments, on Sep 1 2:56 AM 2008. In Sad, Thoughts

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• Valley Of Poplars

  The woods hide a secret
  No one remembers,

  by Justin3 53 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 18 8:04 AM. In Other

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• You left me

  You had to have it all; you had to break me apart
  You thought you played it smart but instead you stabbed my heart.

  by bexy 34 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 28 3:44 PM 2008. In Dark, Love, Life, Thoughts, Sad

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• Broken Smile

  I stare at the shattered picture of our broken smiles
  You gave me your hand and I pushed it away,

  by bexy 33 lines, 20 comments, on Jul 18 11:06 AM 2008. In Pain, Dark, Sad, Personal, Depressed, Death, Suicide, Blood, Escape

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• Bottle And A Gun

  by serenity silvermoon 12 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 11 10:08 AM

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• Suicide Lock

  I know that gun against your head
  Feels so cool

  by mickey94 25 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 7 7:22 AM 2008. In suicide, love, light, death, gun, razor blade, pills, whiskey

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• Wanting To Cry

  by Dreaming.of.reality 25 lines, 13 comments, on Jan 10 9:00 PM. In Pain, Sad, Dark, Weird

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• A school day.

  Her school uniform
  is out on the floor,

  by Coloured Skies 60 lines, 29 comments, on Jan 3 2:18 PM. In Emo, Anger, Depressed, Hate, Angry, Life, Sad, Pain, Dark, Sadness

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• Listen

  I hope you suffocate on your wise words
  Cause right now all I need is to screaming

  by mickey94 11 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 19 2:24 PM 2008

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• Disappear

  Torn and broken,
  With Nothing left in life

  by Coloured Skies 75 lines, 22 comments, on Jan 17 6:12 AM. In Sad, Life, Pain, Dark, Hate, Depressed, Teen issues, Sadness, Depression, Emo

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• Black Rose

  You'd think she'd be there...
  But, she never cared.

  by Silent Wayfarer 20 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 18 2:32 PM. In Sad, Thoughts, Angst, Dark, Pain, Personal, Love

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• one septemember day

  one septemember day
  school was in,

  by serenity silvermoon 67 lines, 15 comments, on Jan 18 9:12 AM

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• Phantom Wars Interplay

  Phantom wars plague my clustered head space
  pulsating battles into such chaos thrown

  by spideracer 74 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 18 9:35 AM. In Dark, Pain, Sad, Abuse, Emo

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• The Odd One

  Waiting silently in lonely remorse
  Holding on to a sunny day once known

  by JustinReid 15 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 11 11:13 PM. In Thoughts, Sad, Hope, Spiritual, Friendship

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• [face to face]

  by risewiththesmoke 15 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 18 10:56 AM. In Personal, Love, Dark, Hope

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• Love Ever After

  Love Ever After
  

  by Kathraina 20 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 11 7:47 PM. In Contest

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• I miss you.

  by Mister Monday 16 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 8 8:59 PM

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• Life's Story

  life can be hurtful

  by wonderingthoughts 68 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 8 11:52 PM. In Dark, Life, Personal, Pain, Thoughts, Sad

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• I'm still in love with who I thought you were

  One look from you and I can’t help but smile.
  One kind word and I’ll be yours.

  by Winged Unicorn 48 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 18 8:20 PM

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• And as you and us

  Wandering silence, who are you really?
  Why would I want to enter your heart?

  by JustinReid 23 lines, on Jan 12 3:24 PM. In Society, Contemporary, Thoughts, Anti-Conformism

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• Master of strings

  You stand at my door,
  asking me for forgiveness

  by Welcome-To-Hell 36 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 7 9:08 PM. In Personal, Life, Thoughts, Angst

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• Hes dead

  Its getting harder to explain
  Death has surrounded me i surrender & remain

  by NeverRegret 52 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 18 10:59 PM. In Sad, Personal, Pain, death

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• "Inner Most Pain"

  In Need Of A New Heart…Blood…New Love…To Flow Through These Pained Veins…Because Acid Rain Is What Now Rein and Resides…Eyes Drained…Dried

  by Brian12 0 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 16 11:38 AM 2008. In Relationships (Bad)

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• love letters

  today as i was cleaning
  your letters i did find

  by earthangel33 78 lines, 19 comments, on Jun 2 9:15 AM 2008. In Love, Life, Sad, Hope

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• You lost the only thing you thought you didn't have. (A heart.)

  Hands parted, he leaped into the murky water.
  Plummeting, he dove.

  by Candy Morphine 76 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 9 5:45 PM

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• Can you be lost in your own heart?

  This malcontent haunts her with nerving presence.
  Ghosting her footsteps in the light warmth of morning.

  by Candy Morphine 63 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 2 4:37 PM

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• Spin

  You are not a friend
  and you are not an enemy.

  by Zebulon41689 32 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 18 8:33 PM. In Personal, Dark, Life

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• Fidget.

  There’s nothing I can do.
  I want to make everything change.

  by AudreyEvans 28 lines, on Jan 19 3:55 AM. In Sexual Sensum, Love, Saddness, Personal, Pain

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• Painted in Blood

  Face painted in blood
  I cannot see through

  by Kathraina 17 lines, 15 comments, on Jan 19 12:47 AM. In Contest, Dark

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• forgive me sweetheart

  I still remember the first time I saw you
  Although the memories have faded and frayed

  by earthangel33 78 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 22 8:59 AM 2008. In Love, Life, Sad, Pain, Death, Lost in thought, Longing, Sadness, Lost love, Anger

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• It's so sad

  It's so sad
  That we all have to go through this

  by Isolatedsouls17 90 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 29 2:52 PM 2008. In Life, Thoughts, Society, Sad, Personal, Pain, Other

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• Let Me...

  Darkness overshadows me.
  I hate You!

  by Silent Wayfarer 48 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 18 4:42 PM. In Dark, Angst, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Spiritual, Contest, Suicide, Cutting

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• Soul In Despair

  One soul in the pit of despair
  Reaching and gasping for air

  by shaun101 9 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 18 4:38 AM. In life, sad, dark

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• Sky and earth checkers

  You've gone somewhere I can not find you,
  you've gone beyond the stars.

  by The Tmnts Sister 17 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 15 5:41 PM 2008. In Sad

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• Nobody's Perfect

  Nobody's perfect I hear you say.
  Everyone has their own special way.

  by Winged Unicorn 28 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 18 8:17 PM

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• Beyond the Horizon

  by bookworm987 14 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 12 7:53 PM. In Life, Nature, Spiritual, Thoughts

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• Untitled Jibberish

  i wrote this a very long time ago, when i had a few problems with different people in certain stages of my life.

  by wonderingthoughts 156 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 6 6:39 AM. In Angst, Dark, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Weird

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• Liar

  in your mouth
  you fold your paper-thin words up

  by slapyousilly 10 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 5 8:39 PM

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• Caged

  by WednesdayJade 37 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 12 1:01 AM. In Personal, Thoughts, Pain, Desperation, Depression, Anger, Noguest

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• Frame Of Brass

  You are nothing,
  a mere reflection of me.

  by slapyousilly 34 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 30 9:03 PM 2008

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• I'm [Not] Different Than All The Rest.

  x♥x♥x♥x♥x

  by SarahEatsAirplane 69 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 20 10:21 PM. In Personal, Thoughts, Sad, Life, Pain, Angst, Depression, Emo, Escape

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• [Everything Beautiful In The World]

  youmakemehurtx♥x♥x♥x♥x

  by SarahEatsAirplane 114 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 6 10:09 PM. In Pain, Sad, Personal, Dark, Angst, Depression, Suicide

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• Mother.

  by Mister Monday 23 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 17 1:17 PM

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• Do you follow your head or your heart?

  Can someone love you
  And love someone else

  by fake-or-real-smile 24 lines, 27 comments, on Jan 17 10:17 AM. In Personal, Pain, Love

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• "trying to forget someone you loved is like trying to remember someone you never knew"

  Reading the quote
  "Trying to forget

  by fake-or-real-smile 23 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 27 8:26 AM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Love

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• Frankly my dear...

  by WednesdayJade 46 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 16 12:15 AM. In Personal, Pain, Anger, Hurt, Noguest, Angry

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• Eyes of Midnight suffering

  Isolation slumbers behind these eyes
  eyes of midnight suffering ; beautiful are they not ?

  by Rhythm Child 28 lines, 53 comments, on Oct 27 8:11 PM 2008. In Pain, Sad, Dark, Sadness, Suicide, Depressed, Longing, Family, noguest

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• My God, my God, why have you forsaken me?

  Thou foresaken me to torture and scrutiny, When i blindly followed thee
  

  by Rhythm Child 29 lines, 40 comments, on Oct 14 8:27 AM 2008. In noguest

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• Winter's Spirit

  Doesn't it seem oddly fitting,
  That a horse faster than the rest...

  by ShiningNShadows 29 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 19 1:14 PM. In Love, Sad, Personal, Pain, Other, Loss

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• mmook
  January 26
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  they are well done! all winner

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