prewrite contest
anything is welcome most people ask me what i like the most well i love dark poems, sad poems
more trophys will be added
I will try to comment on all of the poems not making any promices
just because i have finalist doesn't mean they will stat there
anything is welcome most people ask me what i like the most well i love dark poems, sad poems
more trophys will be added
I will try to comment on all of the poems not making any promices
just because i have finalist doesn't mean they will stat there
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 18
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 255 people
- Final notes: this where all wonderful poems sorry i couldn't coment on them all i plan to do another prewrite contest soon only its going to be a little different so i can comment on all donations are welcomed just because you didnt get a trophy doesnt mean i didnt like your poems because i loved all the poems very much
Contest Winners
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by getsbetter 40 lines, 35 comments, on Feb 26 4:17 PM 2006. In Sad, Personal, Love
Gold trophy winner
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I gaze at the grey world around me
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The way your eyes gleam
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I’m an ordinary rat
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i sit alone,
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L is for the simple seat
O is for the surprise I seeby A-muse-in-writer 9 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 28 8:44 PM 2008. In Humor, Love, Weird, My own style
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by alexandra. 5 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 1 1:03 PM 2008. In Heartbreak, Love, Upset without reason, Personal Honorable mention
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The razor slices tender skin
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Ever fair and ever bright,by A-muse-in-writer 16 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 27 9:09 PM 2008. In Contest, Inspirational, My own style Honorable mention
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The corner of Broadway
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Dear Molly, where were you?
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semi innocent girls,
take from the street,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
It's a darkness within Don't call it sin• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Raven haired angel
blue hued halo• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
In the hours of dusk between day and night
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Waking up so dazed and confused
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by LadyDementia 20 lines, 13 comments, on Nov 13 7:38 AM 2008. In Contest, Dark, Personal Honorable mention
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They are full of depression
Because of the loss of loved ones• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I sat one day in my armchair and nodded off so it seems,
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Do your words of your soul destroy you
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by ToxicSuicide 23 lines, 17 comments, on Dec 31 10:33 AM 2008. In love, happy, personal Honorable mention
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by ToxicSuicide 43 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 4 1:56 PM. In Personal, Randomness, Thoughts, Weird Honorable mention
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Take me back to the years
Where life was overflowingby Cloudwalker 91 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 29 12:11 PM 2008. In Personal, Nostalgia, Life Honorable mention
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Breaking me is like draining my insides.
My heart is emty.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
He stands next to me, but what does he see?
His best friend, his little sis, just another girl?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
shine dark down in abyss• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Words sometimes
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black sky
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by amaranthine lover 15 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 14 12:52 PM. In Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Abstract, noguest Honorable mention
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by amaranthine lover 35 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 14 9:22 PM. In Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Abstract, noguest Honorable mention
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by amaranthine lover 62 lines, 52 comments, on Jan 6 1:12 AM. In Contest, Abstract, noguest Honorable mention
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by amaranthine lover 44 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 31 9:42 PM 2008. In Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Abstract, noguest Honorable mention
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by amaranthine lover 25 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 31 9:33 PM 2008. In Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Abstract, noguest Honorable mention
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by amaranthine lover 15 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 30 7:17 PM 2008. In Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Abstract, noguest Honorable mention
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by amaranthine lover 39 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 13 1:01 PM. In Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Abstract, noguest Honorable mention
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by amaranthine lover 33 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 5 11:53 PM 2008. In Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Abstract, noguest Honorable mention
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by amaranthine lover 9 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 14 8:19 AM. In Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Abstract, noguest Honorable mention
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by amaranthine lover 63 lines, 8 comments, on May 5 11:06 PM 2008. In Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Abstract, noguest Honorable mention
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by amaranthine lover 39 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 9 10:53 PM 2008. In Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Abstract, noguest Honorable mention
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by amaranthine lover 33 lines, 48 comments, on Nov 30 11:38 PM 2008. In Contest, Abstract, noguest Honorable mention
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Look at what You've done to me.
Look at what i've done to me.by alexandra. 25 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 24 2:07 PM 2008. In Personal, Contest, and ect. Honorable mention
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don't try to fix me..
I'm already broken..by Coloured Skies 22 lines, 18 comments, on Aug 13 12:08 PM 2008. In Pain, Sad, Dark, Anger, Emo, Suicide, Teenage thinking, My life, Hate, Depression Honorable mention
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Your eyes hold a sadness within them.
You smile when really you want to cry.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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Snow in the air
comes down gentlyby Violinstrings 20 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 3 8:42 PM. In Thoughts, Nature, Personal Honorable mention
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Is there such a thing as darkness?
What is night, if not darkness?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by Darc Raven 42 lines, 31 comments, on Oct 30 12:25 AM 2006. In Love, Dark, Angst Honorable mention
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Demons and Devils dance in my head
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before you go
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how do you raise a child?by XxrockxXxgirlxX 54 lines, on Dec 25 3:33 PM 2008. In Personal, Life, Weird, Thoughts, Society, Oversexed, Children, Teen issues Honorable mention
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We sat together under the trees on the seat
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Falling gracefully from your face, tears of bitter diamond taste
Dew drops of sorrow and pain, without a direction no need for a nameby Rhythm Child 16 lines, 43 comments, on Oct 10 5:59 PM 2008. In Abuse, Pain, Personal, Sad, Dark, Life, Love, Sadness, Lost love, noguest Honorable mention
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follow this smile, teeth flashing in haze, watch it fade then run to catch it. wanting it fearing it, its tainted, too pure. you love it hate it want to know. the meanings the reasons the happiness gone. its not wrong you wanby ShaidinSejii 0 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 21 7:49 PM 2007. In Contest, Lost in thought, Abstract Honorable mention
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It takes great strength to be tender.
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Silently swinging in the emptiness of time
Her spirit lingers longer, still.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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This poem is all about me. It explains how i feel. Where my feeling are. Enjoy the poem.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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This moonlight maiden, elegantly dressed;
my compassionate savior, my lover,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
In a black sapphire night under velvet wings,
A serpent devours the moons being,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
he's under my skin
i can't get rid of him• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
They found her body hanging from the ceiling. Can you see her?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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For Sarah, a friend who was raped & murdered. May the angels fly you safely home,Sarah.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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A dark hallway,
a broken lamp.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
A vibrant joyous feeling, conveys the Love within my heart,
the pining soulful yearnings, whenever we’re apart.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
You were my light from above,
but then it came and took you,• Viewed by judge. [remove] -
Its such a nightmare....why does love hurt so bad !• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I am not I when you aren't by my side.
I am not me when you are not here,by Mie Silvermoon 26 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 11 1:46 AM 2008. In I am not me, Ich bin nicht ich Honorable mention
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Her hearts melting
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I have no life
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The cuts on my thigh are fresh,
Thick and sticky,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
My captain, for you I serve My love, I give my heart• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I stare into the mirror,
the reflections that looks back isnt me.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
These songs are killing me. Each one playing over and over.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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In memory of my son
by getsbetter 34 lines, 17 comments, on Nov 28 10:26 AM 2006. In Love, Personal, Other Honorable mention
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Have you ever really been in love? Your heart soars with the clouds above• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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at 00:00 am you said "i love you" to me,
at 11:00 am you said "i cant sorry" to me,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
4 O'clock shadows, burning the midnight oil,memories of the past arise, standing so loyal.by getsbetter 19 lines, 19 comments, on Jul 13 6:06 AM 2006. In Spiritual, Love, Hope Honorable mention
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by Anu-Nataraj 18 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 1 7:41 AM 2008. In Spiritual, Thoughts, Love Honorable mention
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eyes captured in a black velvet night,
Raindrops like wet crystals fall from the skies.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
From the nights he spent screaming
At us from one room to another.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Anger and torment in the dark of the night
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I find it hard to see,
That far ahead.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Fake smiles and empty laughs.
Cover up a blank slate.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
This year,
I told Santa that I was good, daddy.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Where be thy chilren of the night but in the darkness
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by Kia Tenshi 39 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 11 1:09 PM. In dark, love, lost, depression, broken, shattered, heartbroken, cold, seasons Honorable mention
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Seagulls fly high overhead, squawking their melancholy roar;
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I've never been like them,
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Found, comfort in pain,
All, pleasures were the same,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Laughter, / Screeching through the bowels of time, and space.... / Trapped, / Here I am, / Everything I have become, / Leaves a piece of itby Flightless Raven 37 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 6 6:13 PM 2007. In Abuse, Angst, Dark, Life, Fantasy, Love, pain, spiritual, sad Honorable mention
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I lie awake
Thinking of you• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
After 6 o'clock the fairground closes
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She sits at her vanity table
Blind, old, and worn.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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My sunset dream
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this is a specialy requested poem by my friend elle, she loves it• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I couldn’t wait to leave, to escape the clutching
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The worlds rugged beauty is yours molly, all yours,
From the rainy, wet scottish highlands,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
In the red dawns light,
A dolphin leaps out of,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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And on that high Hill, as the sun sets,
A young boy can be found, a silhouette,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Grief covers every ounce of me, this sinking abyss
of pain,I want to leave…, I step away for a momentby Rend the Veil 25 lines, 22 comments, on Aug 19 10:44 PM 2008. In life, pain, love Honorable mention
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Tables turn,
glass is smashed,shattered• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I crave the blood of others
when darkness falls
my wings spread and i fly• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Oh little child, I can never leave you. / &nbby Violinstrings 25 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 13 10:13 PM 2007. In childrens, love, nature Honorable mention
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An eternity of silence
A forever of forgottenby A-muse-in-writer 4 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 16 9:46 PM. In Dark, Sad, Personal Honorable mention
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I sleep with a gun at my head,
The sweet smell of death,by list-n-tacy 17 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 4 11:00 AM 2008. In Dark, Suicide, Death Honorable mention
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I’m always being told
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Y can't anyone feel what I feel...
And take it seriously.by XxpurplerainbowxX 10 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 12 12:29 AM. In Thoughts, Personal, Pain Honorable mention
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Stitches, the only thing holding me together.
These brilliant cuts, marvel me.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
what do you see when
you look in my eyes.?by Coloured Skies 21 lines, 12 comments, on Aug 12 4:12 PM 2008. In Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Depression, Depressed, Hate, Angry, Teenage thinking, My life Honorable mention
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I can feel my feet no more.
And wings...by Cloudwalker 64 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 6 4:51 AM 2008. In Angst, Pain, Sad, Life, Dark, Animal rights, suffering Honorable mention
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I stayed up all night
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A scared abused girl only 5,
Her dad was nasty and her mum had died,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
While my veins
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This life
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The cold metal chills my palm & fingers,
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People really like to ask the same question...
over and over...
"is this true? and is it about yourself?"by CatalinaDeNicky 30 lines, 61 comments, on Jan 25 4:34 AM. In Personal, Abuse, Angst Honorable mention
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There is said, to be a girl A very beautiful soul, rich with wonder• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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This morning they switched me on at 7 o’clock
Habitually, I began to do my daily unlock• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
My head shrieks against the cold metal of the bathroom stall,
my lungs cry out in a harsh protest against the deep sobbing.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
A wisp of cool air brushes her face,
As a girl steps out into the night,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Dedicated to a close friend-you know who you are.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Patiently she sits there, her radiance is seen• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by Darc Raven 26 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 14 12:38 PM 2007. In Other, Death, Spiritual Honorable mention
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Swimming in a world of blue
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Your glimpse comes from You
When You Yourself will come?by Freelance writer 34 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 12 12:47 AM 2006. In Spiritual, Love, Hope Honorable mention
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I’m shaking, and I’m scared.
I dont know myself.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Bitten by infatuation stalked in my dreams
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I can't hold it in anymore.
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Mark was a bright and healthy boy who was hardly ever ill,
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Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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by edit my world. 32 lines, 17 comments, on Jan 3 7:38 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Negate, please? The spawn of an age in between, Satan’s spawby Rhythm Child 24 lines, 40 comments, on Nov 1 11:58 AM 2008. In noguest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Thanks for the invite but I've read some of the entries and I don't have a snowballs chance of winning. Tell you what. I will try to comment on each one. I'll try to catch the next one. *smile*
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why wont you i hope you join if not to win but to read i love all kinds of poems so at least try i would love the chalenge
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Wow. That is a LOT of entries for a contest! Do you intend to comment on each one? I don't think I've seen many contests with more entries than this . . .
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Thank you so very much for Hosting and rewarding so many HM's....I am blessed to receive this HM out of so many entries.......Gary....congrats Bro!
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Blessings
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