I want poems when you first joined Allpoetry.
Enter as many as your old poems then enter a fresh one.
The normal rules apply:
Do not molest your shift key
i will hunt you down and do crazy kung fu on you.
left aligned
i want metaphors
i want raw emotions
i want imagery
ap name in authors notes
i will gradually add more points
You must enter a new write after you enter your prewrites, put the link in your AN so i know you did.
If i put a poem in finalist it doesnt mean itd stay there ill probably change it a couple times as i reread them.
*picture at top taken by me
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 20
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 4 people
- Final notes: Thank you all for entering.
It was extremely hard to judge so many amazing entries.
Contest Winners
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My damp, disgusting insides are like twisted molding clay.
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frogs croak in the twilight, the stars are painted on a celestial canvas,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Entries [417]
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Setting down reading a book listenig to the people talking around you.the music in the back ground playing jazz. you can feel your-self snaby blackfang4318 7 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 4 9:16 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Run, Cinderella girl, run
Before midnight takes holdby theroseofbattle 23 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 5 4:45 PM. In Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Humor, Weird, Pain, cinderella• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I watch the moon rise into my sight• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Thoughts of him in the back of my mind.
Like a wispering wind blown through the sands of time.
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Walking down the road bare-foot with no shoes on my feet
tasting sand between my feet. looking at the growing grass wondering should i do iby blackfang4318 7 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 13 2:00 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Ha.. first poem I've wrote. For Gab-za.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The coldness within a soul,
The pain that smothers the fire.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Crouching again, slashing my eyes out with each acrid tear,
for no one else than my executioner, my cruelest love,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
ODE TO A MOP Oh long, slim elegant useful implementby Maninblack 16 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 22 10:12 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I'm staring at the ceiling,
where geometrical colorsby Midori-Ayana 27 lines, 15 comments, on Dec 3 3:34 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Wake up today,
In the usual way,by sherry2 51 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 18 11:18 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
heart broken so many times
doesn't matter any moreby perfectdarkangel 13 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 23 11:02 PM 2006. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The silence of God is the silence of our hearts / When our hearts grow silent our minds become numb in its vast expanse of nothing / The siby im not broken 27 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 14 11:16 AM 2007. In Life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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What is heaven? Can we believe?
When we are there it will relieve• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The wetting
blurring veils fallby SoulfulBubbles 81 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 26 7:45 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
It's not fair that people get critisized for being in love. Here is my poem about two dark angels.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Pages whispering by, The turning of the treesby Chocoholic156 104 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 13 8:34 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A lion fed its cubs by the water at dawn.
A bok found a place for it's young to be born.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I want to change but I’m so weak
And you can’t be my strength• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Why the hell do I feel this way?
I can't pretend nothing is wrongby TheDayTimeStopped 29 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 6 10:33 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
In my heart there will always be a song for you,
Shining in the night so bright,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Generous in all his ways,
Ready to help in matters great and small,• Viewed by judge. -
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The pills in my hand
The note in my pocketby breakdown-beatdown 39 lines, 19 comments, on Dec 16 4:07 PM 2007. In Personal, True, Suicide, past• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
so sorry...heal...heal...heal
stabbing words...dig...dig...digby couldbeworse 18 lines, on Oct 22 4:00 AM 2006. In Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
(Like you said...everything burns)• Viewed by judge.
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This is a song I wrote awhile ago...
All around, the same faces as yesterday,by the masked one 42 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 13 8:26 AM 2006. In Lyrics• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You manage to twist my every words,
to fit your plans of controling me.by mountain-woman 23 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 24 7:54 AM• Viewed by judge. -
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The cobweb strands that dangle from my fingers,
Brush gingerly against the troubled stone,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
dont you know my fantasy is you?
my fairy tale consists of you and me• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Lay awake in my bed / fiddle with my sleeve / just to have the stinging / of his memory / in my head / losing him was just so hard / differ• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Feazings are the little unravelled
bits at the end of a lace• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Their scent lingers on the air we breathe
Their roots, deep veins in the earthby Rhythm Child 21 lines, 34 comments, on Jan 5 7:16 AM. In Weird, My own style, Nature, Humanity, noguest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Please hold me closer and promise me this,"
She asked of him through dying lips.by AlittleWrong 44 lines, 65 comments, on Nov 24 6:58 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Twitter, flutter
The leaves pound at the feet, touching, they whisper,by marmac 10 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 24 9:54 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
watching your skin turning pale
eyes rolling backby A. Rose 27 lines, 20 comments, on Dec 31 1:03 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
my lover is my own personal demon,
alcohol is the Satan that rules him• Viewed by judge. -
by Chaotic peaceofmind 19 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 1 10:29 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Bleeding...
Dying...by SomethingPoetic 32 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 20 11:40 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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by Fianna Black 20 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 5 10:42 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Last night was wonderful,
that, I can't deny,by Midori-Ayana 47 lines, 15 comments, on Jan 25 5:43 PM 2004. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Maybe I was made,
So nobody could posses me entirely.by Midori-Ayana 26 lines, 25 comments, on Dec 22 8:52 PM 2003. In Angst• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
In the beginning were the chords
Seven days of rataplan;by A60sMan 20 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 11 3:38 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Mr. Ivories
entertains with elan,by A60sMan 25 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 15 4:12 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I wrote this when i found out my grandfather had cancer. I was down and needed to reflect on myself.by Rizz 7 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 4 2:09 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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i saw you last night you continue to wonder in my dreamsby Dark Prince Chaos 20 lines, on Feb 17 2:04 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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written on Saturday march 17, 2007by serenity silvermoon 21 lines, 25 comments, on Mar 19 4:34 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Ticktock Ticktock.
Time is speeding up now.by SomethingPoetic 28 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 6 11:43 PM. In Contemporary, Thoughts, Love, Lyrics, Life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
One boy
Five girlsby Koromone 36 lines, 16 comments, on Aug 28 7:28 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by SomethingPoetic 28 lines, on Mar 5 1:16 AM 2007. In Adult, Life, Love, Contemporary, Fantasy, Thoughts, Sad, Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by masterblaster 13 lines, 11 comments, on Dec 16 12:51 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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..how old do the poems have to be?
cause my first like 50 poems or so until around june/july were complete crap..and even a few months ago i sucked.. i still do aha.
so ya, basically im wondering how not-old my old PW's can be?
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Maybe at least a year old i just dont want people entering poems that they only wrote like 4 monthes ago and i dont think any of your poems suck enter them and ill check them out.
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mine were all wrote in august, but that is when i joined AP, so is that alright?
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yes that is fine
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I'll see if I can find something to enter. I've only been writing less than two years and I'm not too fond of my oldest poems.
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I still would love if you can enter them I just dont want poems that were only written a couple monthes ago.
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I'm rereading some of my old poems and my style of writing was sooo different. I'll find some to enter but don't be too harsh if you think they're horrible
lol
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When I put in the onlynew one that i have I did not notice that It was compleatly under 20 lines. I am not sure how to get it out of the contest.
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i put that rule there by accident i will remove it
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i haven't been on AP for years. Just about a year or so.. so you won't find any from me older than say April or May of last year. Sorry but can't get any older.
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I just want some of the first poems you put on AP.
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ugh...I can't remember how long ago i wrote some of these. some of them should at least be a year...but i'm not sure. just delete them if they don't fit what you are looking for.
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For some reason I can't enter any of my poems. I don't understand what's going on. I will be back on tomorrow and try again. Michele
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wow. i was looking for a contest to try and win my 20th trophy. then, i found your 20th contest. weird
this looks like fun.
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I only joined in may of 2008. I submitted three poems. Not sure they are what your looking for but they are from my heart.
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Hi I wrote this probably 5 years ago. Hope you like
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I clicked on to the feature but the contest was already closed! Sorry you've wasted your points - I delete my poems when they've been on for a month or so anyway, so you wouldn't have liked my entry, if I had been in time to make one. blah.
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i reopened this contest it will most likely be open til the 9th.
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Merry meet,
I am slightly confused (a state I am usually in) about this rule:
You must enter a new write after you enter your prewrites, put the link in your AN so i know you did.
Exactly where in the AN are we suppose to put it? In the older poems we submitted or a link to the older poems in our new poem? Here is a link to my new poem for your contest.

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Oops, I forgot to add a newer one. Bummer, I think I like my older ones better! My muse has been fighting with me lately, haha.
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I have join this community about two months ago , i am sending all the poems which i have written in these two months . is that ok.
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most of the poems haven't been viewed by the judge, so how is she going to be able to read over 400 poems in just 2 days!?
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I am judging on the weekend so I have plenty of time to read that much I am avid reader I've read 200 books in 2 months i think i can read 400 poems in 2 days.
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Aren't you expecting a little too much when you are asking for the oldest poem one has to offer and asking for metaphors and imagery in it? What you'd get from most people are more recent mature pieces bluffing their way through for the trophy... The one I submit is a poem I wrote at the age of 9. How would you expect that to compete against poems submitted by 20 odd year olds? I mean there has to be a standard evaluating scale...
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oh, I don't envy you, you have a lot of reading to do...! Unless you took the week off, you might have to judge on the first impression of the first skim-over (an important feature of any poem)...
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Instead of making us put our name in author notes why don't use just uncheck the anonymous box so it is not an anonymous contest?
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yesterday I spent atleast a half an hour entering my poems into your contest and I don't see a single one here. Did you delete them all?
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To answer both your questions I do not have an gold account so i cannot uncheck the anonymous box and no i didn't delete any poems from here there are at least 8 pages your poems are most likely on the last page.
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thanks so much for silver & HM

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Thank you so much!!!
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You deserved it you have an amazing way with words.

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I'm glad =]
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