the poems can be in any of my other Prewrite contest
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 7
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Honorable mention: 80 people
- Final notes: thank you all 4 ur wonderful poems
Contest Winners
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Father, stand before me in your fine Italian suit
Black and silver pinstripes, leather briefcase, wingtip shoesby Cajun.Lullaby 35 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 23 2:02 AM 2008. In Death, Loss, Personal
Gold trophy winner
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Here I am all alone in a crowded house.
TV's, stereos blaring yet it's quiet as a mouse.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Every night i wake up cold
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Baby, I've done all I can do.
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Dried
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A sudden lack of oxygen to the brain,
As I sense the creeping curseby PureAmethyst 13 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 26 10:53 AM 2007. In Life, Pain, Thoughts
Honorable mention
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Tonight there's something in you eyes
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I sit alone in my rocking chair, a journal in my lap
Line after line I scroll away the time, spelling out a mapby Cajun.Lullaby 40 lines, on Dec 20 10:11 PM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Overcoming Abuse, Dark Honorable mention
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She sat on the sofa, threadbare and off-white
Her countenance reflecting the Christmas tree lightsby Cajun.Lullaby 39 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 21 2:57 AM 2008. In Abuse, Christmas, Christmas Past, Dark Fiction, Ghost Honorable mention
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fire
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Tears, stranded in air, dealing a final blow;
this dark gowned goddess of death,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Such a sad thing
to look upon a swingby trekkergirl 19 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 29 5:08 PM 2008. In Contest, Dark, Sad Honorable mention
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I NEVER NEEDED UNTIL I MET YOU
by trekkergirl 46 lines, 53 comments, on Aug 28 11:39 AM 2008. In Other, Contest, Love, Thoughts, needs, Hope, Romance, Inspirational Honorable mention
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Dear Lord above,
my Saviorby trekkergirl 73 lines, 30 comments, on Nov 29 12:19 PM 2008. In contest prayer, abuse, pain, personal, spiritual, thoughts, life, angst Honorable mention
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Under the Cherry Blossom Tree
Is where we spent so manyby Kathraina 25 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 1 11:57 AM. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Lost love, Lost in thought, Goodbyes, Dedication Honorable mention
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Mirror, mirror on the wall
Reflects a lady whose beauty is like the fallby Cajun.Lullaby 39 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 4 4:30 PM. In Abuse, Depression, Pain, Personal Honorable mention
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inspired by "Don't Jump" by Tokio Hotelby rayraystingray23 18 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 18 3:57 PM 2008. In Suicide, Life, Sad, Pain, Dark, Weird, Song, Friendship, Depression Honorable mention
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his promise/ her ring,
now rests-eternally.by Antebellum 41 lines, 10 comments, on Dec 16 9:11 PM 2008. In Pain, Other, Love, Sad, random thoughts, Noguest Honorable mention
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i look in your eyes,and i see your pride for me.
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you spill out your heart
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Tonight, laying with you under the moonlight,
I wonder how we came to be,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I love you my friend
You know who you areby Kathraina 9 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 18 5:53 PM 2008. In Personal, Inspirational, Hope, Friendship, Dedication Honorable mention
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When you sleep tonight, They whisper softly in your ear,
when you pray to god, they vow to protect what you hold dear.
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My footprints led into the water,
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He tells me he loves my eyes
He says the colors swirlby Kathraina 38 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 11 8:18 AM 2008. In Love, Lost in thought, My life, Pain, Other, Teenage thinking, Teen issues, Longing Honorable mention
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by lowercase prelude 24 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 2 10:37 PM. In Life, Love, Personal Honorable mention
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Cut, cut my last cut,
Burn, burn Just once more,by starving-to-survive 37 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 2 8:49 PM. In Abuse, self harm, cutting, self loath, suicide, pain, hurt, sad Honorable mention
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i see specs of stardust in your eyes sparkling throughout the starry night skies• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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You're beautiful
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The olives are ripe,
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Into the silvering I stare.
Back from the opposite realm a beast glares.by superl337sauce 73 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 19 10:01 PM 2005. In Personal, Spiritual, Hope Honorable mention
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The way in which i look tonight? / The way in which i feel? / What is true inside my soul? / What do i truly see as real? / Love and lust?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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crave the taste you needed so / devour all that speaks / sense a pulse within their soul / as you drown out all that shreiks / blood trickles down their neck / as you long to suck them dry / erotic fantasy co• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Believe in a feeling you have never felt
Speak in a language you don’t knowby XInsanity-FairX 12 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 13 9:12 AM 2006. In hope, spritual Honorable mention
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Love is only as good as you make it
Live only as dark as you wishby XInsanity-FairX 15 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 12 9:27 AM 2006. In spiritural, sad Honorable mention
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Leaving that corpse of betrayal I fly away
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Has anyone ever sat and watched a scary video game?
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i stalk the night with greatest ease watching you through hunger• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Oh gentle touch upon my naked hand
Divine proof that alone I never standby Paloszoo 17 lines, 42 comments, on Nov 3 4:53 PM 2008. In Personal, Spiritual, Inspirational Honorable mention
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This in Memory of someone loved and lost. Warning: school friends, who know who this is about, caution if you read...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Success from failure
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Walking through
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No one knew
What in her bosom grew• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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Cold gray granite
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by Ken-Maverick 18 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 22 5:59 PM 2008. In Fantasy, Noguest, First Sonnet Attempt, Kyrielle, H.M Honorable mention
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Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [299]
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My fingers itch, don't scratch them, don't
If I start now, I'll scratch til they bleedby Banana Slug Zombie 41 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 4 12:11 AM. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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His music, / floats by my ears / in a stream of tears / like the battered violin / I have a song inside / yet today I cry at its bankby Carly Pop 35 lines, 21 comments, on May 13 7:37 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Two separate worlds
Parallel lines• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Outside the lace curtained window,
the fog hung precariouslyby Carly Pop 19 lines, 31 comments, on Oct 3 9:56 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I love you like the sun loves the moon.
I chase you day after day and never touch you.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Dashing, daring, darling
All of the above• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
light and gas streak the
sunset skyline with beauty• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Three small words
That can never suffice• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Behind her vail is a life of extravagance
Parties and masquerades at every chance• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Our memories are not in wood or in stone
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Different Crimes Against The Conscience• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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At the Rottnest Island hotel and beer-gardenby KevinDunn 52 lines, on Nov 8 3:36 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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But I felt you!
you bug,by superl337sauce 40 lines, 11 comments, on Oct 1 12:21 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She lays afloat a pool of midnight blue
The water is liquid crystal, its as deep as her mind and it cools her skinby Rhythm Child 44 lines, 71 comments, on Nov 28 4:18 PM 2008. In Dark, Life, Love, Spiritual, Sad, Death, Dedication, Longing, noguest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Once sin ruled
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I stand, in a field A field full of vibrant grasses, colorful flowers• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A sudden surprising sea of flags and faces. / Who called out and dressed these ranks / of every age and income, as far as I can tell, / gatby KevinDunn 59 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 31 4:11 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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[/u]See[/u] my standing in the rain, waiting for your kiss
Enrage a sense lost long ago, hidden in a wishby XInsanity-FairX 26 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 2 1:24 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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what do you mean it can be in any of your other contests do you mean it CANT
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