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desperatly depressing

can you handle holding
depression,
sadness,
heartbreak,
that lonely feeling,
in words?
Can
you
capture
it?

try.

No sticky caps,
no bashing,
prewrites allowed.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on February 4
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    WOW!! Sorry it took so long, i have a very small attention span and could only read so many poems at once, lol.
    but there were SO MANY AMAZING POEMS!! i was like, GAH! I should just listen to what half of these poems say and just off myself! I can't choose!! Lol, (jk) um. thank you ALL for entering, everyone is soooo amazing. congrats to the winners, i just adored them (they had to be like, super duper out there, cause I had a lot of really amazing poems to judge, lol) and thanks again for everyone who entered! If i didn't comment its cause someone closed the page before I could and I haven't gotten around to finding the ones i haven't commented on and... comment on them. if that makes any sense.
    sorry this is so long, i just want to thank eveyone.... again... lol
    i'll shut up now.
    THANKS!

Contest Winners

  1. [Everything Beautiful In The World]
    youmakemehurtx♥x♥x♥x♥x
    by SarahEatsAirplane 114 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 6 10:09 PM. In Pain, Sad, Personal, Dark, Angst, Depression, Suicide
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Repetition
    by tsukiyo 46 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 11 6:09 AM. In Angst, Pain, Abuse
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. The Closet
    Some people cope in very strange ways...
    by MysteriousStrangerX 41 lines, 52 comments, on Nov 14 12:15 AM 2008. In Dark, Pain, Personal, Sad, Abuse
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Close Friends
    We were close friends,
    Though she did not know
    by Lionheart 63 lines, 91 comments, on Dec 11 8:07 PM 2007. In Love, Sad, Friendship, Lost love, unrequited
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. [ Left, right ]
    Left, right Back, forth
    by Brokentruth93 18 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 24 3:52 AM 2008. In Abuse, Dark, Other, Pain, Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. He Said, She Said...
    They delivered me out of profound darkness,
    With the kissing promise of saving light.
    by Paloszoo 46 lines, 12 comments, on Aug 29 11:33 AM 2008. In Sad, Abuse, My life, Depression, Family
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. The Leaves Changed
    Look here----->
    I wish you could see it.
    by JustGoWithIt 76 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 29 11:37 PM 2008. In Love, Depression, Suicide, Goodbyes
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. Not worth the air i breathe
    Cut, cut my last cut,
    Burn, burn Just once more,
    by starving-to-survive 37 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 2 8:49 PM. In Abuse, self harm, cutting, self loath, suicide, pain, hurt, sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. Unsuccessful Suicide
    by pain in colorado 27 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 2 4:23 PM. In Adult, Life, Pain, Sad, Spiritual, Weird, Dark
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  10. Loneliness
    A sad cold song;
    playing over in my mind
    by Hearts.That.Bleed 39 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 20 4:17 PM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Dark, Pain, My life, Sadness, Lost love, Depressed, Hate
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  11. Rooftop
    I open the attick window
    The rooftop so inviting
    by Horcrux.Breathing 49 lines, 12 comments, on Dec 26 12:35 PM 2008. In Dark, Pain, freindship, life, Depression, Emo, My life, Suicide
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  12. XxThe Midnight RailxX
    He walks along the two metal streams; Black as ebony; cold, hard, and beautiful
    -an essential pathway to an ingenious Beast that inspired
    by XxMeaganxStrangexX 50 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 9 7:15 AM. In Sad, Dark, Society, Weird, Abstract
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • Suicide Hotline
    January 2
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    does it have to be depression? or can it be another feeling? just wanted to ask.


    • frozenblackpetals
      January 2
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      it can be another similar-ish feeling. one person wrote about hate. im just not a happy-joy-joy-poetry person, ^^.


      • Suicide Hotline
        January 2
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        ok because i entered one, hope you like it, i might change it, im not sure, and im not happy joy eather, im far from that.