It's new year and I've become a slight bit drunk! not to say I can't comment on some wonderful poems! I want something wonderful... Whatever you have to offer as long as pertains to the rules.
Rules.
*Spell check, it helps
*Label entries correctly
*No more than 100 lines
*Ask if you have problems
Up to 20 entries each.
24 hours open. It's to aid the HUGE contest I'll be holding.
If my comments don't make sense, they are drunken! I will explain if confused.
Love & merry new years
~ Stef ~
Note: I may or may not comment on them all. Honestly, I don't know. All I know is that I'm stressed and upset at the moment, for no real good reason. So I guess I'm an idiot >-<. But anyways, that's not the point. Thanks all for entering your poems in. They will all be read, IF not all commented on.
Loves x Stef x
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 20
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Well done everyone. Sorry too me FOREVER to judge.
Basically I have commented on a fair few, but I WILL carry on commenting on them even after contest closes.
Well done to everyone. xxx
Contest Winners
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [281]
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by lowercase prelude 12 lines, 18 comments, on Dec 29 4:58 PM 2008. In Contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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you'll understand soon, they say.
liars.by AllThatRemains 33 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 14 4:16 PM 2008. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
a fractured spirit lying in all its lonely pieces— broken because it doesn't matter.
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Swirling brown perfection suspended in liquid form
Worshipped by the feeble cup it deigns to make its temporary homeby AllThatRemains 11 lines, 11 comments, on Dec 4 1:02 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
you are truly talented, darling; you can do in a second what took others months.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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your wings flutter as you lie in crimson, stabbed to death with your own arrows.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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i knew it all along. why did i bother hoping?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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the moment i first saw you was the moment i first died.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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your obsession with her is toxic
you follow herby songstress80 14 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 13 11:37 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
so alone
poisoned with the scent of your skin and a single split-second touchby AllThatRemains 33 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 18 9:16 PM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
here i am
tearing my hearts to pieces
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by lowercase prelude 29 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 28 3:00 PM 2008. In Contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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flying featherless on spider-webbed wings
it seeks its next prey• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
let those petals dry and crumble into dust
for time never will stop nor ever be enough• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Cautious, she's walking the line in the sand
Succeeding until she believes that she can't• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Like lifeblood from metaphysical hurt The words flow magically across the page;• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She lays afloat a pool of midnight blue
The water is liquid crystal, its as deep as her mind and it cools her skinby Rhythm Child 44 lines, 71 comments, on Nov 28 4:18 PM 2008. In Dark, Life, Love, Spiritual, Sad, Death, Dedication, Longing, noguest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I might be no angel, my love, but I May be one again, if you wait for me.by AllThatRemains 13 lines, on May 15 3:01 PM 2008. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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If darkest night must end in bright sunrise If every cloud possess a silver rim,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Eternal strands of cruelty weave around
A fragile pair of hearts...• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Cascading imperfections revealed, I no longer bear option to cower behind what I falsely pretended to be;
Saints and sinners aren't so difby angela. 38 lines, 16 comments, on Dec 28 3:29 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It's done to relinquish earthly pain;
It's done so lives lived aren't in vain.by angela. 16 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 22 5:03 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
He's seen me at my best, and I thought that was too much for him to bear.
Now he's seeing me at my worst, and I think this is too much forby angela. 32 lines, 26 comments, on Dec 18 2:13 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
a butterfly dips
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Your words remain numbingly haunting,
your lies are easily believed;by angela. 33 lines, 18 comments, on Dec 11 9:05 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I'm inevitably your....diamond in the rough.
And your love every day....still isn't enough.by angela. 35 lines, 14 comments, on Dec 8 11:29 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You are the eraser to my pencil; you help me erase my mistakes & write something better.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You see a colorless reflection,
showing to you what you've done.by angela. 28 lines, 11 comments, on Dec 6 1:31 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
If you spend your whole life looking for true love, you're going to be lonely most of the time.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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In youth I used to walk my dog only once a week,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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a box, i wish i had one, i bet there would be more room• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Pale dissatisfactions block the truth from our minds;
We don't eagerly admit the sanity we struggle to find.by angela. 19 lines, 21 comments, on Dec 2 2:06 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'll tell you a tale of our own Devil's Island• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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accustom to the anger to the screams of one,
that is not just, if anything it shouldn't have to be that way.by I143alllpoetry 21 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 31 1:12 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Stolen kitchenware screams undaunted;
Promises broken and then forgotten.by angela. 22 lines, 20 comments, on Dec 1 3:52 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The right is always wrong, the choices always blind;
by angela. 22 lines, 20 comments, on Dec 1 12:19 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
If you'll be my sky, I'll be your star;
And though through the darkness I can't see you, I'll know you're not far.by angela. 25 lines, 15 comments, on Dec 1 12:18 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Wake me up inside,
by angela. 42 lines, 15 comments, on Dec 1 12:17 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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-takes title to heart(s)- Lol. -grins-
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... i like them ummm margariter deels ... ... peoms ???? 
yukyukyukyuk heheheh ..........................................................
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You must be drunk, Over 250 entries,, wow, I think I'll miss out there, I'd have liked to have done a fresh write for you, but hey, 250?
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I hope you get to actually view all the poems before the contest is judged...
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250 entries..
have fun with that
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Wow - gold trophy! Really?
Thank you so much. I am much obliged.
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Thanaks for the HM Stef. Congrats to the other winners.
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Thank you for the HM and congrats to the others!
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