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Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 5
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 90 people
- Final notes: thank you all so much for your poems if i didnt comment on your poem i will sometime tonight or tomarrow but i will comment on them
Contest Winners
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I am
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I just got word your not coming home
Now once again I'll be all alone• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I come creeping up your spine
Like the breath of a ghostby A Deer Eye 20 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 19 10:06 PM 2007. In Life, Society, Dark
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He looked at me, and said,
‘do you know, I imagine you on my bed?’• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
This takes planning, this takes time
These are the workings of the human mind• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Around the bend, I watched you go
Around the bend, you walked so slow• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Watching the world
from my half closed eyes• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Staring out the window,
I gaze at the world beyondby skye101 29 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 22 6:22 PM 2008. In Depression, Lost in thought, Personal. Honorable mention
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The wind howls against the empty house
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The River of Time
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L is for the simple seat
O is for the surprise I seeby A-muse-in-writer 9 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 28 8:44 PM 2008. In Humor, Love, Weird, My own style Honorable mention
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The black carpet up high shook and shivered frantically,
On that enraged evening, when screens got distorted,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Behind the eyelids of a dark sub-concious mind,
The fantasy world that my own heart has designed.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Every single step…
Every single leap…• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
The dark desolate hours,
I spent crying for you and what I thought was ours.by Jade.Butterfly 22 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 21 7:02 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Love, Kind of dark, Contest Honorable mention
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Detached reactions-
bruises on hips, thighs and wrists.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
what do you see when
you look in my eyes.?by Coloured Skies 21 lines, 12 comments, on Aug 12 4:12 PM 2008. In Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Depression, Depressed, Hate, Angry, Teenage thinking, My life Honorable mention
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Gone, just like every-time
My tears plunge to the groundby skye101 21 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 27 11:53 PM 2008. In Personal, Lost in thought, Escape Honorable mention
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I sit on my bedroom floor / Looking at teddy sitting on a chair / Teddy's the only one I can talk to / about feelings and emotions I cannotby ur worse nightmare 34 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 26 6:09 AM 2007. In Abuse, Angst, Pain, Sad, Thoughts Honorable mention
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Praying for help
Yet there's no way out, or so it seems.
by The-Human-Stain 17 lines, 36 comments, on Oct 22 5:26 PM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Spiritual Honorable mention
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IT ALL BEGAN WHEN SHE WAS BUT YET A TEEN,
IT WAS COOL AND MADE HER, SHE THOUGHT, LOOK LIKE A BEAUTY QUEEN,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
A vibrant joyous feeling, conveys the Love within my heart,
the pining soulful yearnings, whenever we’re apart.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Trials without sanctuary
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by Salty Hibiscus 18 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 27 8:31 PM 2008. In Dark, Abuse, Contest Honorable mention
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written words shall fall from the page
spoken words we won’t comprehend• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Rambling on and on
Hallucinations come and goneby XxYoru-OkamixX 60 lines, 14 comments, on Oct 7 7:53 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Personal, Pain, Lost in thought, My life Honorable mention
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I'm alone,
i have no one,by SilentTearsOnceMore 20 lines, 12 comments, on Jan 4 6:54 AM. In Sad, sadness, hurt, pain, life, thoughts, depression. Honorable mention
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I lay in the cold,
i lay in the snow,by SilentTearsOnceMore 18 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 19 2:26 PM 2008. In Sad, pain, hurt. Honorable mention
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Put your hand on my heart
And feel it beat strong and true,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4674865, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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I’m an ordinary rat
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Tree's whispering,
river rushing,by SilentTearsOnceMore 16 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 31 4:36 PM 2008. In Nature, thoughts. Honorable mention
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A girl standing in a crowd
No one knows she is there• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Our love a distant island,
Locked by a shimmering sea,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
You are nothing,
a mere reflection of me.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4816853, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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~Title Me Sadness. Silently• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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The funniest thing to ever happen to me
Was flying to Hollywood to appear on TV• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I watch my baby really close
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Dear Lord above,
my Saviorby trekkergirl 73 lines, 30 comments, on Nov 29 12:19 PM 2008. In contest prayer, abuse, pain, personal, spiritual, thoughts, life, angst Honorable mention
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Help me!
Can't you see me.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I made them cry just to get my way
I make a lie out of all I sayby IAmReallySomething 13 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 26 6:03 PM 2008. In Dark, Deception Honorable mention
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Under the trees As they creak and they sway• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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"What a lovely day," she said.
The sky was dull and gray.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Your words remain numbingly haunting,
your lies are easily believed;• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Cascading imperfections revealed, I no longer bear option to cower behind what I falsely pretended to be;
Saints and sinners aren't so dif• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
They say beauty is only skin deep
by evilangel311 30 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 30 1:03 AM 2008. In Dark, Hate, Eating Disorder, Sarcasam, Thoughts Honorable mention
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They see a young and pretty girl When I search for her;• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Under the full moon a spell was blessed,
upon my wrist her thoughts did place.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I care about you more than i should
More than i thought i ever would• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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Under the Cherry Blossom Tree
Is where we spent so manyby Kathraina 25 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 1 11:57 AM. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Lost love, Lost in thought, Goodbyes, Dedication Honorable mention
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [124]
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This morning I was woken
by the sound of a burstby Simone Brooklyn 33 lines, 10 comments, on Dec 13 3:57 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
after the leaves have changed
when the earth is covered in fallen cloudsby bladesrsharp 9 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 26 11:28 PM 2008. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by TheFourSeasons 21 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 28 9:33 PM 2008. In Love, Spiritual, Longing, Humanity• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It is hard to watch but I do
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Winter wind whistles through the hollow
Here she hangs high above the ground• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Even though summer is fading away,
There is indian summer which brings more hot days• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Poetry is a little confusing to me;
I first thought it needed to rhyme to pleaseby The tie guy 23 lines, 4 comments, on May 28 7:59 PM 2006. In Humor• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My fingers itch, don't scratch them, don't
If I start now, I'll scratch til they bleedby Cerberus of Acheron 41 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 4 12:11 AM. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Golden streamlets of light
Give colour to the dawn sky.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
It's a jubilation;
A killing spreeby XxYoru-OkamixX 53 lines, 12 comments, on Dec 12 5:13 PM 2008. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
unrocked cradles
unsung songs• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
But I felt you!
you bug,by superl337sauce 40 lines, 11 comments, on Oct 1 12:21 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Comments
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Thank you very much for the HM's . Congratulations to the winners
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Thank you so much for the HM's.
They are greatly appreciated!
Congratulations to all the winners.
-Mandi -
Thank you for the gold! Congratulations to all of the other winners!
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Thank you so much for the HM's!!!!!! Congrats to everyone!! ^.^
♥ Kathraina
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