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Devastatingly Depressing.

 

Ever been so angry, but at the same time so depressed that you couldn't cry?

 

 

OR

 

 

So deep into despair that you had cried all the tears out, and there weren't any left?

 

 

 

Did you lose [ someone ] you [ loved ] ?

 

 

Did they [ overdose ] ?

 

 

Where they [ murdered ] ?

 

 

Commit [ suicide ] ?

 

 

Die of [ natural causes ] ?

 

 

Were you [ confused ] ?

 

 

Couldn't [ comprehend ]  { WHY } this happened? 

 

 

{ WHY } this was happening?

 

 

 / I want to know about it. /

 

 

How did you cope [ with your pain ] ?

 

 

How [ did you get through the day ] ?

 

 

How [ did you keep going ] ?

 

 

 

 [ Rules ] :

 

1. No Profanity.

2. [ I'm 14 ] Keep it PG-14. [ In other words...No adult content. ]

3. No bashing other's poems.

 

 

I will now be accepting Pre-writes until January 2nd, 2009.

 

 

P.S. I'd like proper grammar. Punctuation. Capitalization, and Correct spelling.

 

Use "Spell Check" if you need to.

 

 

 

[ Thanks ] .

 

 

 

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on January 5
  • Rewards: Gold: 530, Silver: 350, Bronze: 250, Honorable mention: 9 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank-You all very much for entering!

    Check out the winners:

    Gold- Palace
    Silver- three letter reply.
    Bronze- Delicate Fabric of Me.



    Honorable Mentions:

    Raw Sedition.
    He Said, She Said.
    Mortal Sin.
    Parasite Forgetting.
    family nightmare.
    The Shared Light of The Souls.
    Die For You.
    I'd love to feel again.
    Strength is Only How Well You Hide the Hurt.

    I wish I could've given you all trophies, and honorable mentions.

    Please check out the winners, and those who recieved honorable mentions..do the person a favor who wrote 'family nightmare' and tell him how great it is..he labeled it 'crap'

    Great Job everyone!

Contest Winners

  1. Palace
    by Progandother 87 lines, 17 comments, on Dec 28 11:26 AM 2008. In suicide, within, mind
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. three letter reply
    I guess you couldn't tell that I was crying
    and I only answered with a three letter reply
    by Atrophya 96 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 11 6:27 PM 2008
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Delicate Fabric of Me
    My broken soul was raw with melancholy,
    Dripping from my already scarred heart.
    by Spiritual Nature 11 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 27 8:34 PM 2008. In Angst, Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Life, Nature, Pain, Personal, Sad, Society
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. He Said, She Said
    They delivered me out of profound darkness,
    With the kissing promise of saving light.
    by Paloszoo 52 lines, 33 comments, on Sep 5 5:46 PM 2008. In Sad, Pain, Angst, Depression, Sadness, My life
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. Mortal Sin.
    I want you to know what you did to me.
    I want you to come home and see me in all my pain.
    by slapyousilly 40 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 28 12:13 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Parasite Forgetting
    by Bound-In-20-Chains 30 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 27 9:59 PM 2008. In Contest
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. family nightmare.
    i dreamt this day of you
    death entering inside those lungs
    by snakebites 63 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 27 7:31 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. The Shared Light Of The Souls
    Life does have to live and die and move forward through time .This is to give the young a chance to make the world right . Will the adult
    by storiesuntold 42 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 28 5:31 AM 2008. In Hope, Life, Love
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. Die For You.
    So alone
    As you spit your words of hate
    by PureAmethyst 13 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 27 6:43 PM 2008. In Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  10. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4902515, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  11. Strength is Only How Well You Hide the Hurt
    Strength is truly no more
    Than how well you hide the hurt
    by kissjess 28 lines, 117 comments, on Jun 14 7:57 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Sad, Dark, Pain
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  12. Breathes
    by frozenblackpetals 27 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 28 1:38 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  13. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4900879, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  14. The Disorient
    by Xx parvus pupa xX 15 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 28 1:59 AM 2008. In Dark, Sad, Pain, Personal
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  15. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4903383, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  16. Aftermath---of---Dating
    Life without that person in your life,
    It seems to suck and crash,
    by Chandler 31 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 21 8:51 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • The Otep
    December 27, 2008
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    Oh, reserving! :)

    I wish to reserve a spot, please!


  • Immortal Obscurity gold member
    December 27, 2008
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    this is exactly how i feel right now; if i knew why, i'd write about it. lucky me