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and bless me...

Oh God ! please open your door and bless me with your love...Unknown.

This quote is a prompt.
Please write a poem inspired by this quote.
Around 20 lines.
No rules... But If you have already won more than 200 Gold Trophies, then, Sorry this contest is not for you.

Thank you so much

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on January 10
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you so much for the wonderful entries in my contest...You all were amazing and my congrats to the winners...

Contest Winners

  1. The Finding
    When the world was a stormy anguish,
    the love of my father demanded a perfection
    by tomisb 50 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 4 12:45 PM. In Spiritual, Hope, Life
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Our Choice
    by Debbysmiles 34 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 27 4:08 PM 2008. In Contemporary, Spiritual, Thoughts, Society, Personal, Life, Contest
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Reins
    I hold on.
    My hands bleed,
    by SandhyaSuri 19 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 9 11:03 AM. In Hope, Life, Pain, Spiritual, Thoughts
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Rescue Me!
    Outside the thresh hold looking in,
    hearing his voice calling out to me.
    by Rovingone 13 lines, 14 comments, on Dec 27 8:10 PM 2008. In Hope, Spiritual, Contest
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Where does he live?
    mommy,
    does he live in the skies?
    by jenadyleigh 39 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 9 11:33 AM. In Love, Life, Spiritual
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • Cant force beloved
    December 27, 2008
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    Did you mean 'bless me with your love?'


  • tomisb
    January 4
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    I have the poem on the tip of my pen and it will not spill across the page. I am glad I still have a few days. So far the blank page is winning. Thanks for the contest it has stirred a still pool and now I must catch one of the lightening fishes within it.
    Peace & Light,
    Tom B.


    • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
      January 4
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      Indeed you are welcome

      • tomisb
        January 4
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        May this year be one where the true gifts you are given are shared with the gifts of others. The joy of recognition, opportunity and the feast of togetherness increase the size and wonder of your own life. Love only shows up in the sharing. All that is worthy having is not given away. No, it is simply discovered in each soul who will see how you find it in them. Seek joy often and may your new year blossom with its Light.
        Love, Tom B.

  • -lk-
    January 11
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    Congratulations!

    Thank you for hosting such an inspiring contest and congrats to the winners!


  • Debbysmiles gold member
    January 11
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    Thank you !!

    I truly enjoyed this contest and the entries. Congrats to all. Praise God !! In Christ. Love Debby

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