This is a pretty simple contest i'd say
I'm not asking for much, but lets go rules first:
Not too much swearing, sometimes there is no point.
No stickey caps, i will kick you just for that...
No slagging off other poetry or poets in the contest.
Not a rule but it would be nice to comment on at least one other poem in the contest, obviously i won't be checking this.
Two enteries per poet, first gets 600 points, second 200 points, third 100 points and i will give four honorable mentions.
Now to what i want, I know right, i should have done this bit first.
Emotion, anything, i'm not going to narrow your choices and say no cutting poems or no humor poems, if you want to share your pain go ahead, you want to make me laugh? give it your best shot.
Tell me your happiest time, your lowest point or when you felt most frustrated, but mostly i want you to make me feel exactly how you did, capture it as best you can.
That's about it, good luck and i will be reading and commenting on every poem.
I reserve the right to remove anything that I see fit. I also have the right to delete the contest if I'm not seeing what I asked for. But let's hope that doesn't happen =D
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 30, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 4 people
- Final notes: Thanks to everyone who entered, i had a lot to read and the ones i didnt get round to i made sure my co judge did and i got a reply about each poem. Maybe i'll get to read more of all your work in my next contest =D thanks again people
Contest Winners
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Each condolence becomes
a fresh fracture
to blessed Alzheimer’s.by Danna Hobart 51 lines, 21 comments, on Feb 11 1:27 AM 2007. In Contemporary, Life, Personal, Sad, Spiritual
Gold trophy winner
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A true story of a dear friend.by WordsDoMatter 41 lines, 43 comments, on Nov 25 7:42 AM 2008. In Sorrow, friendship, death, anguish, anorexia
Silver trophy winner
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Dear Santa Claus,
by Jeremy0826 7 lines, 30 comments, on Dec 20 3:54 AM 2008. In Contest, Sad, Thoughts, Hope, Life, Love, Christmas Wish
Honorable mention
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My tears still fall in secret
And my heart still saddensby fake-or-real-smile 27 lines, 20 comments, on Aug 15 5:57 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [82]
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i miss her so much....by SimplyNoodle 5 lines, 18 comments, on Nov 25 6:50 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I watch as she runs and laughs
Long hair blowing carelessly in the windby poeticcaresses 34 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 28 7:37 PM 2008. In Hope, Life, Love, Personal, Thoughts, Friendship, Dedication, Children, Happiness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Smores Girl89 76 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 6 6:19 PM 2008. In My own style, Thoughts, Personal, Escape, Longing, Adult, Light Erotica, Angst• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You would have me be your clone
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Acting like she doesn’t exist and HE didn’t HURT her
But yet, at the same time he still insists he ‘misses’ her?by fake-or-real-smile 27 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 26 11:24 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hello sweet uncertainty.
you infiltrate my every move.by Candy Morphine 39 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 1 7:44 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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The Way The Tide Turns
The Way Emotions Flipby coolkid69 26 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 30 11:29 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
stood upon the grass a chill up my spine
i stand there looking down upon the coffin thats in sightby Zannt 80 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 26 3:27 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
As I watch the last leaf from the tree float gently down to me,
I close my eyes and fall asleep, as I slowly start to dream.by SimplyNoodle 19 lines, 24 comments, on Nov 28 7:22 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
We were young and wild and we thought we were free.
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The already fine line
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He haunts me in the night,
he live only to till the morning light.by serenity silvermoon 47 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 21 1:16 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
this is what you didby Smores Girl89 25 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 7 12:26 AM 2008. In My own style, My life, Personal, Lost love, Pain, Dark, Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You beautiful soul
You inspiration of a wonderful kind• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Giving into the pain
Deafening screams take overby ley527 28 lines, 58 comments, on Dec 3 9:01 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Alone and on my knees in prayer
the overwhelming sense of hopelessness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I want my life to end tonight
On a dark stageby Andiness 73 lines, 14 comments, on Dec 14 2:15 PM 2008. In Preformance, Love, Death, Murder, pettirosso, bloodkissed, Wierd, Violence, Pain, God• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My husband as many of us do back nearly 7 years ago battles with his demons, his emotions, his thoughts, we have so many unsaved lost loved• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by edit my world. 58 lines, 17 comments, on Dec 19 5:24 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Looking in her eyes the demon within was revealed,
When all along deep inside she knew that you were killed.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The wind was excitement and cooked oats.
Expectation was a big, red circle• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by CinderellaSyndrome 28 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 27 9:25 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Two lonely souls, seeking the same
the pleasures of love, without the gameby RockSteady 9 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 20 1:55 AM 2005. In Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Praying for help
Yet there's no way out, or so it seems.
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brother any im a ap dad w/a daughterby RockSteady 17 lines, 11 comments, on Sep 20 3:26 AM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Painful memories- the struggle to move beyond the flashbacks.by Writing0Freedom 68 lines, 11 comments, on Dec 28 1:53 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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shimmer brightly to please
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I wake up in the morning and I think I'm 25.
I walk to the mirror and look and just start screaming.by lisapoet 29 lines, 21 comments, on Aug 13 3:35 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
From the depths of my heart
I have known from the startby sunnyafternoon78 27 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 14 9:35 PM 2008. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Laughter makes a fairyby ShannonMan1 9 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 27 1:46 PM 2008. In Fantasy• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Macey Muse 66 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 8 4:29 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Demington 13 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 29 1:15 AM 2008. In Betrayal ;)• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Okay Ill cover my ears and close my eyes if thats what you really want Ill believe you when you say your just with the guys It doesnt matter where you are. I need you with me baby I dont want you to lie I think though I wantby ilovemyex 14 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 10 12:13 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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He's seen me at my best, and I thought that was too much for him to bear.
Now he's seeing me at my worst, and I think this is too much forby heavenbird 32 lines, 26 comments, on Dec 18 2:13 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Changing buses at Flamingo and Decatur
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I get up in the morning.
I struggle to look in the mirror.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
swirling clouds of grey
unbreathable fumes• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Sitting tight on the cover in confident composure. Ebbed eyes, laden in power to enrapture.by nature mithya 18 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 11 6:05 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Trenches excavated by
the aimless traipses of
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show me something different,
show me something blue,by anony-mouse 15 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 25 4:14 PM 2008. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge. -
I had faith in you and you mortified me.
You stabbed my heart and I mended yours.by Nermin Nazim 17 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 20 11:58 AM 2008. In Love, Personal, Sad, Pain, My own style, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
In dust she was placed
In a cheap shroud she was draped.by Nermin Nazim 82 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 18 8:57 AM 2008. In Angst, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Dedication, my own style and my own suffering• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I long with my heart for someone to love To breath a freshness with nectars sweet,by nature mithya 13 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 1 11:02 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A contest for my attention,
Never did I think it would happenby Girl With Guitar 53 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 24 3:55 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Carve me along the dotted lines,
Hollow me out, leave me more than empty.by Girl With Guitar 32 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 16 6:25 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
They meddle and they mix, to make your life better, but little do they know, that with each and every letter; they tear down this castle made of cards so no longer can the bards, boldly sing their song, and write of heroes, lby Hypocritical Oath 5 lines, 11 comments, on Oct 31 5:49 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I'm SOOO sory thyat I Remember Way Back When is sooo long but if ANY of my poems can make you fell then its THAT one!! TRUST ME...no one reads that anddoesnt cry...I'm cold and heartless with poetry and I had to stop writing for a few hours to stop crying
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Thank you so much for the honor of the gold! I can't tell you how much it means to me. Congratulations to the other winners.
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