You have 3 prompts to chose from in each catergory...total of 6.
Prompt 1: Song lyrics -- write your poem(s) based on the lyrics to these songs, please don't re-write the song(s) rather use them as shall I say...inspiration!
Prompt 2: Picture prompt -- write a poem based on the inspiration you get by the picture(s) or the title of the picture(s).
Prompt 3: Poetry Prompt: Write a poem based on the inspiration you get from the poem(s) by the beloved Pablo Neruda
Rules are:
1. The darker the poem the better
2. Dirty pretty poems are a big plus, but not required
3. Any poetry style/form is acceptable
4. No chat lingo
5. Comment on each others work, make friends and encourage each other
6. Cursing is cool, just label adult
7. If you write two poems, one must be from each catergory
8. Please put the prompt you choose in your AN
9. Be creative
10. Reservations are ok...just please come back and finish
Here goes:
Demolition Lovers - my chemical romance
Hand in mine, into your icy blues
And then I'd say to you we could take to the highway
With this trunk of ammunition too
I'd end my days with you in a hail of bullets
I'm trying, I'm trying
To let you know just how much you mean to me
And after all the things we put each other through and
I would drive on to the end with you
A liquor store or two keeps the gas tank full
And I feel like there's nothing left to do
But prove myself to you and we'll keep it running
But this time, I mean it
I'll let you know just how much you mean to me
As snow falls on desert sky
Until the end of everything
I'm trying, I'm trying
To let you know how much you mean
As days fade, and nights grow
And we grow cold
Until the end, until this pool of blood
Until this, I mean this, I mean this
Until the end of...
I'm trying, I'm trying
To let you know how much you mean
As days fade, and nights grow
And we go cold
But this time, we'll show them
We'll show them all how much we mean
As snow falls on desert sky
Until the end of every...
All we are, all we are
Is bullets I mean this
All we are, all we are
Is bullets I mean this
All we are, all we are
Is bullets I mean this
All we are, all we are
Is bullets I mean this
As lead rains, will pass on through our phantoms
Forever, forever
Like scarecrows that fuel this flame we're burning
Forever, and ever
Know how much I want to show you you're the only one
Like a bed of roses there's a dozen reasons in this gun
And as we're falling down, and in this pool of blood
And as we're touching hands, and as we're falling down
And in this pool of blood, and as we're falling down
I'll see your eyes, and in this pool of blood
I'll meet your eyes, I mean this forever
Impossible Love:
Will I Ever? -- Lyfe
[Verse 1:]
Does it feel like ya
You're never gonna find it
Does it feel like ya
Always one step behind it
Does it feel like ya
Out in this world alone 'cause you been lookin and prayin for love so long
Does it feel like ya
Wishing on a falling star
Does it feel like ya
Lonely and it breaks your heart
'Cause it feels like ya
Ready to let down your guard
Finding somebody's just so hard
[Pre-Chorus:]
How do you find the one you dream about (how do u find it yeah)
If I knew I'd tell you how (swear to God swear to God)
It's kinda hard for me to figure out (and I know you're ready to settle down)
I know you're ready to settle down
If there's a God above please tell me
[Chorus:]
Tell me will I ever fall in love
Will I be alone forever
Will I ever fall in love
Or will I be alone forever
[Verse 2:]
Does it feel like ya
Moving too fast
Does it feel like ya
Want something you can't have
Does it feel like ya
Living in the past
And the thought of going home alone again makes you sad
Does it feel like ya
Feeling so bad
Does it feel like ya
Getting so mad
'Cause it feels like ya
Just want someone to call
To tell ya that you're human after all
[PreChorus]
[Chorus]
[Bridge:]
To fall in love (I would do anything, anything)
To fall in love
To fall in love, love, love, love
To fall in love
To fall in love
[Chorus x2]
Prompt 2:
TwIsTeD Love:
Impossible Love:
All Pictures courtesy of www.deviantart.com. Thanks to the artists over there!
Prompt 3:
TwIsTeD Love:
From – Twenty Poems of Love
I can write the saddest lines tonight.
Write for example: ‘The night is fractured
and they shiver, blue, those stars, in the distance’
The night wind turns in the sky and sings.
I can write the saddest lines tonight.
I loved her, sometimes she loved me too.
On nights like these I held her in my arms.
I kissed her greatly under the infinite sky.
She loved me, sometimes I loved her too.
How could I not have loved her huge, still eyes.
I can write the saddest lines tonight.
To think I don’t have her, to feel I have lost her.
Hear the vast night, vaster without her.
Lines fall on the soul like dew on the grass.
What does it matter that I couldn’t keep her.
The night is fractured and she is not with me.
That is all. Someone sings far off. Far off,
my soul is not content to have lost her.
As though to reach her, my sight looks for her.
My heart looks for her: she is not with me
The same night whitens, in the same branches.
We, from that time, we are not the same.
I don’t love her, that’s certain, but how I loved her.
My voice tried to find the breeze to reach her.
Another’s kisses on her, like my kisses.
Her voice, her bright body, infinite eyes.
I don’t love her, that’s certain, but perhaps I love her.
Love is brief: forgetting lasts so long.
Since, on these nights, I held her in my arms,
my soul is not content to have lost her.
Though this is the last pain she will make me suffer,
and these are the last lines I will write for her.
Pablo Neruda
Impossible Love:
I Do Not Love You Except Because I Love You
I do not love you except because I love you;
I go from loving to not loving you,
From waiting to not waiting for you
My heart moves from cold to fire.
I love you only because it's you the one I love;
I hate you deeply, and hating you
Bend to you, and the measure of my changing love for you
Is that I do not see you but love you blindly.
Maybe January light will consume
My heart with its cruel
Ray, stealing my key to true calm.
In this part of the story I am the one who
Dies, the only one, and I will die of love because I love you,
Because I love you, Love, in fire and blood.
Pablo Neruda
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 9, 2009
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: WOW! The caliber of the entries for this contest was unbelivable!!! Truly!! Lunasilverstars and I have debated, cried and finally came to an amicable agreement on who should place. We even added two honorable mentions because we felt that due to the amount of creativity and passion in these writes it was only fitting. I personally would like to comment on the top three:
1. Could I Ever Find? - This touched me deeply, it was honest and really spoke to me as far as what this contest meant to me and what type of entries we were looking for. But i thank Luna for allowing me to put this at gold because it really reflected where I am in my personal life so thank you for this entry!!!!
2. The True Love Story -- Same thing here, it was an awesome peice and spoke directly to me as a reason why we wanted to have this contest. Excellent take on the prompt congrats!!!!
3. I'll be over you once I get laid -- The title had me afraid to read, but since my break up ( a little less than a month ago) I have tried this and it works!!!! So thanks for the inspiration for getting back out there and getting over that point of my life (I might still need a few lays, but hey it definatly worked for me)!! Congrats to you as well!
Overall EVERYONE did wonderful but we only had so many slots and so many points to give out. We wish we could have given everyone something but we just couldn't. Thanks for taking the time to enter our contest and please look out for more from us in the future!!! HAPPY NEW YEAR and KEEP WRITING
Contest Winners
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To have someone to hold me,
Kiss me and tell me I'm the only oneby DarkLotus4Life. 58 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 27 8:54 AM 2008. In Love, Longing for love, Contest, Sad, Hopeless, Empty, Emo
Gold trophy winner
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Wishes of false fantasies…
They leave me tatteredby RenaissanceGirl 37 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 28 9:34 AM 2008. In Thoughts, Love, Dark
Silver trophy winner
• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4906347, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Entries [11]
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Our love can not be.
Our hearts are in separate cages.by StillLovingYou 17 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 24 9:06 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Cold air on my skin
Thinking of the ever-after that never existed• Commented on by judge. -
in the shadows
the darkness cameby moonchild 23 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 28 11:43 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
My image is
pinned to yourby arafura 42 lines, 14 comments, on Dec 30 6:07 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Comments
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i love the impossible love pic but i cant seem to ryme dry
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Bookmarking it, I think this is great

I know exactly what I'd write about too -
hmmm, can't think of any strange love poems. can't think of any poems at the moment. but i might enter it. my brain has officially been thought deprived...lol...
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Intresting contest, I'll come back to it tomorrow +bookmarked
Good luck with it.
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Thank you and look forward to your entry Happy holidays.....
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You've found very interesting examples of what you are looking for, and if I get an idea like these, I'll be back. Best of luck to you and all entrants, and happy new year!
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Thank you for the HM, it was very kind to add extra points too. This was an opportune contest for me, thank you so much for holding it.

Congratulations to the top winners!







