crying for your help...

Oh God ! I am a fallen soul crying for your help...Unknown.

Please write a poem inspired by this quote.

Around 20 lines.

No rules...But If you have already won more than 200 Gold Trophies, then, Sorry this contest is not for you.

Thank you so much.

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on January 6
Rewards: Gold: 400
Final notes:
Thank you so much for the wonderful entries in my contest..You all were amazing..my congrats to the winners...

Contest Winners

Hear My Cry Oh God

Broken down into complete despair
it seems as though life isn't fair.

by stavykm 32 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 2 8:27 PM. In Contest, Spiritual, Life, Pain, Personal, Love, Sad, Thoughts
Gold trophy winner

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Tears Of The Soul

Through the prayers from lost souls comes the greatest prayers of all .So heard by the Lord and being it is from the depths of the heart

by storiesuntold 14 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 23 5:16 PM 2008. In Hope, Life, Love
Silver trophy winner

• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Only You, Lord

If you're listening God
my need is great

by 2lullabyhaven 30 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 23 3:50 PM 2008. In Contest, Spiritual, Thoughts, Pain
Bronze trophy winner

• Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [11]

1 - 11 of 11

Please

Do you hear me,
When I cry in despair?

by chasitylee 49 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 23 11:59 AM 2008. In Spiritual, Lyrics

• Commented on by judge.
Down on my knees

Down on my knees
crying for you

by God is my reality 18 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 23 10:30 AM 2008. In God, Desperation, Love, Spiritual, Trust, Hope, Life

• Commented on by judge.
Profess

by Pamela A Lamppa 22 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 23 1:08 PM 2008. In Life

• Commented on by judge.
Help I need you!!!!!

I am on my knees
I am begging you please
forgive me my love althought you left me

by WesBreezyxxx 25 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 23 2:11 PM 2008. In love, caring, fight, help, butterfly

• Commented on by judge.
Judgement Day~ Senryu

by janejainejayne 13 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 27 7:05 AM 2008. In Pain, Spiritual, Personal

• Commented on by judge.
Spiral

Report back to God so undivied.
Their verdict to yeild,
Save the one's who've abided.

by ShadedRequiem 26 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 23 9:10 PM 2008. In Dark, Spiritual, Society, Other

• Commented on by judge.
Rollercoaster

Yeah...I just wrote this about somebody that I know...

by MysteriousStrangerX 28 lines, 13 comments, on Jan 5 12:39 AM. In Angst, Dark, Hope, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts

• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
all i want is you

by lowercase prelude 26 lines, 10 comments, on Dec 21 6:52 PM 2008. In Life, Pain, Spiritual

• Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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Griswold
December 23, 2008
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You have, in my opinion, the best contest prompts in all of AP. I love to do your contests, this is another great prompt. I'll be back to write something for this after work. (I'm gonna be bummed when I finally hit 200 Golds.) Scott
2lullabyhaven
January 6
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Thanks so much for the award of the Bronze, I shall treasure it...congrats to all of the other winners lol
stavykm
January 6
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Thank you so much for allowing me to enter your contest. It is always humbling to write for your contest. Thank you for the trophy and congradulations to all the winners and all whom entered.

Wishing everyone a increadilbe New Year
Many Blessings
Much Love,
Kelle Marie