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The Natural World: In Honor of AsIThink

The Natural World: I am holding this contest in honor of AsIThink who has published his tale of  "Noye's Story: A Fly On The Wall". (http://www.lulu.com/content/5300818). Much of his work is about observing the natural world, and about the birds and animals (even the fly!) who share our world. So, this is the contest:

Write me a poem about the natural world, and/or the birds or animals that inhabit it. Make me smile, contemplate, weep, or rage – but make me feel something. Please keep it under 30 lines!

Contest closes Jan. 1, 2009

Rules:

1. No dirty/pretty
2. No sticky caps
3. Nothing erotic or adults-only. Kids should be able to read it.
4. Rhymes are nice, but I also like free verse.
5. Pre-writes are fine, but must meet the contest intent and rules.
6. Please keep it under 30 lines.
7. Only one entry per poet, please.
8. Please use spell check. If there are spelling or grammar errors I will IM you and you may fix. If you don’t, you will likely not win.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on January 3
  • Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 300, Bronze: 150, Honorable mention: 5 people
  • Final notes:
    This was my first contest, and as difficult to judge as everyone says it is. Each entry was so different to the others, and each deserved a trophy; unfortunately we can only give out the three trophies and five honorable mention. The Gold poem was beautifully crafted and touched on nature in an especially touching way. Silver put her judicious eye on the food chain, and suggested that after all one should learn rather than judge. Bronze personified the journey of an eaglet in a true to its nature unsentimental manner. The Honorable Mentions were also each special, and are placed in no particular order -- I couldn't possible place them. Thank you so much for entering. Each of you spoke to my muse, and I found all of your poems inspiring.

Contest Winners

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  3. The warmth of mother's love
    deep inside, it beckons me
    by Swangrnv 28 lines, 35 comments, on Dec 23 6:00 AM 2008. In Contest, Thoughts, Life, Spiritual, Love, Lyrics, Fantasy, Nature, Other
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. How can starlings make such lovely patterns up on high
    Those ever changing movements as they weave across the sky
    by judmc 31 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 28 4:47 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. by crystaldust 10 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 23 5:43 AM 2008. In Contest, Nature, Sad, Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. A footstep upon the forest branch
    Causes a minaiture thunder clap
    by A-muse-in-writer 17 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 24 5:25 AM 2008. In Nature, Contest, Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. the moth died as moths die:
    soundless and unnoticed
    by myrataal 33 lines, 22 comments, on Aug 9 6:22 PM 2002. In Thoughts, Creative, Life, Death
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2386175, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

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  • butterflywriter
    December 22, 2008
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    Hats Off to Randy!!!

    As a fellow NaNoWriMo-er I just wanted to say 'How Clever'!


    • AsIThink gold member
      December 22, 2008
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      ahhhh...thank you soooo much

      Wow...excellent. So great to hear this from you. What's the name of your novel? Did you finish the month out? I loved the experience so much. I will be by to see your work...thank you again.

      AsIThink...

      • butterflywriter
        December 23, 2008
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        This year was only a gleam in my eye...

        Was in a very bad situation at work and never could get past the opening. This would have been my fourth year,and although I haven't gotten to the end I have increased the previous three years with 7,000, 11,000, and 17,000 respectively. Last year some of my eighth graders participated and one girl wrote 25,000 during November then finished her 50k by March. It was WAY COOL!!!

        • AsIThink gold member
          December 23, 2008
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          BRAVO!!! What a wonderful, wonderful story. Thank you so, so much for sharing this with me. KUDOS to you AND your students...big compliments to the finisher especially! (Huge smiles here). Bravo. Bravo...and lots of claps.

          AsIThink...

  • mmook
    December 24, 2008
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    i love them all.. great... they all make you think...

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