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and the cardinal hits the window.


if you ever want me to fall in love with you, play this song.
casimir pulaski day by sufjan stevens.

i want you to write about it. it's beautiful and sad and glorious.

DIRECTIONS

listen to it live all the way thru:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CdfiXdrmXA8

listen to the recording and read the lyrics (this is VERY important if you've never heard the song)
song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KGEMx3TKxNc&feature=related
lyrics: http://www.songmeanings.net/songs/view/3530822107858541824/


free verse preferred. i just want you to feel this. it's so michigan-in-the-wintertime-sadness-of-childhood, isn't it?


Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on December 30, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 900, Silver: 300, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 1 people
  • Final notes:
    Thanks for entering everyone! there were so many great poems to read. i was extremely pleased with this contest.

    the poem that won first place caught the exact essence of the song to me, which was really quite incredible.

    second place was just moving. i was shaken in my very roots by it.

    third and onwards i felt were sufjan-esque and extremely well done as well.

    i'm glad one song could inspire such great poetry.

    please read the finalist poems.

    thank you,
    acoustical

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4876709, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. by magdelene 48 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 26 1:11 AM 2008. In pain, spiritual, na, aa, g-d
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. by photoretinas 62 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 26 5:01 AM 2008
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. by flight 12 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 17 6:01 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  5. by SoldierOfTheCross 12 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 25 10:14 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • parachute fog
    December 17, 2008
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    oh blah


    • acoustical
      December 17, 2008
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      yeah, and you're entering.

      • vertigo beat
        December 17, 2008
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        oh man, tough woman in the house, huh? if you dun listen, mike, she gon' whip yo' ass

        • vertigo beat
          December 17, 2008
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          i just realized i should have replied directly to him. i am such an idiot.


  • SoldierOfTheCross
    December 17, 2008
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    Yay, Sufjan!

    Book'd it!


  • flight
    December 17, 2008
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    i'm not sure if the poem i'm entering is really what you want,
    but i'm giving it a shot. if i write something more enteresting
    i'll enter that...

    peace to all ~flight


  • the atlantic
    December 17, 2008
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    oh i love suf


  • formless
    December 18, 2008
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    this songggggggggggggg


  • girl shaman
    December 18, 2008
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    ah those lyrics and the acoustic guitar tear at me :/ beautiful song though.. im gonna try this one out <3


  • magdelene
    December 22, 2008
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    entering one or the othe rbefore they close. no worries


  • The.Stars.Go.Blue
    December 24, 2008
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    I love Sufjan Stevens. But this song always made me want to cry.
    I might enter anyway.


  • magdelene
    December 26, 2008
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    can i just write about how this song makes me feel? or what it makes me want to write? i dont want to write about the song, so much as this song inspires something in me...

  • vertigo beat
    December 30, 2008
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    thank you

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