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My Baby

no haiku, if it's prose, it has to be really good, mostly rhyming is what I want but if it's extraordinary, include it anyway.
Most people at some point in their lives have a baby, i would like you to remember what you felt when you had your first baby. Your circumstances, etc. You can say, it was wonderful or talk about not being able to love it. Just what was it like? Your personal experience.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on December 25, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    As no more entries were forthcoming, I have judges sooner than I thought I would. All the poems had something interesting in them and were driven with love. I wish everyone could have an award, but these are my choices.

Contest Winners

  1. My Precious Angel
    My precious angel
    All that is right in me
    by ceno da ghost 15 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 15 3:21 PM 2008
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Your First Tear.
    Ever time you move around,
    My heart longs for you more...
    by PureAmethyst 17 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 12 7:06 AM 2007. In Life, Love, Personal
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Destin
    She came into this world Radiant
    by filledwithstardust 28 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 24 9:51 AM 2007
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4872153, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. Natalie's lullaby
    by Icarus 21 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 15 5:34 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [6]

1 - 6 of 6
  • Oh! The Joys of Motherhood!
    Sore parts,
    Stretchmarks,
    by Onionducks 53 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 12 8:20 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Baby's first smile
    There’s nought so welcome as a summer breeze
    In the heat of the day to put you at ease
    by judmc 6 lines, 34 comments, on Jan 31 9:05 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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  • Onionducks
    December 15, 2008
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    I have quite a few poems I have written for my baby girl, one even has pictures in it! It's on the Lily list if any of you feel like taking a stroll down baby lane. she'll be 5 months old tomorrow


  • PureAmethyst
    December 26, 2008
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    thank you so much for silver

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