write me something that i can feel. i wanna be able to relate to it. I've been having a hard time being able to trust. even though i trust too easily. i'm vulnerable and i get myself into situations i don't know how to handle. i've been crying alot lately. and i have NOBODY to talk to. if i don't feel like your going through that, then you didn't do your job.
incorporate all the feelings and emotions you can.
anything goes. sex, drugs, violence, cursing.
good luck.
incorporate all the feelings and emotions you can.
anything goes. sex, drugs, violence, cursing.
good luck.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 30, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 250, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: Very well.
- To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 4 awards but only 3 finalists.
Contest Winners
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Is the silence really worth the pain?
To make a friendship become this strained?by The Hidden Darkness 26 lines, 9 comments, on Oct 20 9:15 PM 2008. In Personal, Love, Life
Gold trophy winner
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I felt the roughness of your hands,
where I didn't want them to be.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [46]
1 - 46 of 46
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by lowercase prelude 31 lines, 23 comments, on Dec 4 8:04 PM 2008. In Life, Pain, Society, Teen issues• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I think and I try, but still I secretly cry
While you had never said goodbyeby Banana Slug Zombie 31 lines, on Dec 12 5:43 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
At home, writing from my throne,
with a pen like a sword out it's stone.
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I, / I imagine... / I, / I imagine death... / I imagine death so far... / I imagine death so far away... / (Chorus) / I imagine death so fa• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I am the blurred reflection of your soul
A cracked mirror, only part of the whole• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Let’s get down to the matter
what medications are you on• Viewed by judge. -
My toes in the sand
my guitar in hand• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Do you think its a Rhetorical question?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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As I lay my head where you once lay
I pray that the scent of youby Kim 48 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 12 8:55 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
Tomorrow with no meaning
today already gone
Not knowing where I am• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Flowing like honey
A symphony of sight• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I don,t know how to feel
How am I meant to act?• Viewed by judge. -
I can overcome your ego trip
as I work on forgetting the past,by Poetess12 35 lines, on Dec 13 8:06 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
Whistles in the dark
Don't seem too far offby jake0715 45 lines, 17 comments, on Dec 5 7:28 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You’re my delight.
Love made it and• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Based On A True Story!!!• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I want to say farewell
But I have no one to say it to.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My heart still aches in sadness and secret tears still flow.
What it meant to lose you , no one will ever know.
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As I close my eyes and feel the breeze i remember you, my last hope
my angel....i wonder if you can save me from this last ocean song.
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There’s b e a u t y in the b.r.e.a.k.d.o.w.n., every {{Miss.America}} has a meltdown, p.a.i.n is b e a u t y ;; now shut up and [lie] dowby HeartbreakHeroine-x 51 lines, 11 comments, on Jun 16 12:16 AM 2008. In Dirty pretty, personal, innocence lost• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I am the brokenhearted
Stabbed from behindby theeUnknown 28 lines, on Dec 24 9:28 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
I don't want you to feel my pain
What I have to hide• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
wind me up
you let me go• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
voices screaming for silence
footsteps circling around stillnessby BrittlesSkittles 15 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 16 4:54 PM 2008. In Life, Hope, Pain, Sadness, Depression, Longing, Suicide, Lost in thought• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I wake up early in the morning
to the stale house and things tossed about• Viewed by judge. -
I hate the subtle flattery and flirt
Luck enemies and lie brothers.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
B esides me I only see my shadow
O nly my broken heart beats its painful tune
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