I am allowing prewrites -
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no center align, no rhyme and no busy backgrounds. And please keep the piece a reasonable length.
If any of those rules are broken the piece will be removed and I will not answer messages or comments as to why.
Also, I may comment constructively, if you cannot handle a possible differing opinion about your piece - do NOT enter.
BUT
no center align, no rhyme and no busy backgrounds. And please keep the piece a reasonable length.
If any of those rules are broken the piece will be removed and I will not answer messages or comments as to why.
Also, I may comment constructively, if you cannot handle a possible differing opinion about your piece - do NOT enter.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 10, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes:
To most of you, thank you for taking constructive criticism well.
All the entries were interesting and I had a hard time deciding who should go where.
Thanks for your poetry.
Contest Winners
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I dont think she had any idea
of how she had moved through time• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
a picnic basket
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Entries [26]
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Like leaves falling from autumn kissed trees,
the years of my life sift slowly to the ground.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
what lies in quiet
that moment when you sense• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Heaven was kept in a mayonnaise jar
next to Mary's special teaby Twins 4 me 16 lines, 13 comments, on Nov 27 1:07 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Take a look into the distant inside
As white symmetric clouds dance in the sky• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Gear heads hunker over engine blocks
While pencil-pushing prostitutesby zombietom 18 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 10 2:18 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
"I’m not a witty heroine in bestseller novels
And I don’t save the world as the hourglass drains"by Commodore Rouge 16 lines, 24 comments, on Sep 15 7:44 PM 2008. In Contest, Hope, Life, Other, Personal, Society, Thoughts, Escape, Inspirational• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When daddy died,
mommy then became a prostitute.by Rele anmwe 66 lines, 35 comments, on Feb 8 2:20 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She lays afloat a pool of midnight blue
The water is liquid crystal, its as deep as her mind and it cools her skinby Rhythm Child 44 lines, 71 comments, on Nov 28 4:18 PM 2008. In Dark, Life, Love, Spiritual, Sad, Death, Dedication, Longing, noguest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Astonishingly courageous, you do not
Let the adversity you face• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i killed a man today. his name was johnny.by skies painted red 4 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 2 4:14 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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cool. what are we writing about?
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anything.
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"Also, I may comment constructively, if you cannot handle a possible differing opinion about your piece - do NOT enter."
It's sad that you have to say this. Constructive criticism is the greatest compliment poets can give to each other. The fact that we care enough to take the time to provide methods of improving each other.
Thanks for caring.
Blessings,
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Thanks for hosting, Melissa. Congrats, one & all.

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Thanks for the HM!
Congrats to the winners - they were fantastic
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Thank you for the comment.
And congrats to the winners!
Annie
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