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,words disappear .words once so clear

,only echos ;passing through the night


♥ Welcome poets!
(5 points to anyone who recognizes that lyric)

I'm a bit of a quirk myself, so I'm looking for uniqueness... Yes, I know it's true that individuality is dead. Whatever you're thinking--it's been done before! But, It would be brilliant to witness something I haven't already seen.

♥ RULES :

* Use your shift key properly please. It's just common courtesy.
* Cussing is for dramatic effect, use it sparingly if you must.
* No erotic, or sensual poetry. I can find that at the local drugstore.
* Language barriers are difficult, sorry, I can only read English. Not Latin, Gaelic, or Text Speech.
* Spelling and grammar are creative co-dependents. Use them, don't use them. Be clever.
* Bashing is better left for arcades and disco techs. You're human, understand.
* I always love these "make sure you read the rules" additions, so, to make sure you read the rules, please follow them? It's not too much trouble.


♥ SUGGESTIONS :

* Find the song from the lyric used above, name the poem as such, and seek refuge in the beauty.
* Use the photo above, make its honest feel bring you something full of life.
* I am a friend of punctuation before poetry. Run with it, it's new and rather unique I find; just the kind of thing to bring that creativity back.
* Go outside. Pen, paper, barefoot if the weather permits. Walk. Write.
* Write anything you want, disregard the rules, disregard yourself.

;photo by me
,you can find more at my gallery .link on my page

***Hey everyone, the contest is closing soon! I'm sorry that I've been AWOL, but come tomorrow I'll make a day and give you all mad props for entering. Nothing is set in stone, the grand prize is up for any of you. I haven't been on in a while and I'm surprised to see so many have entered! Happy Hanukkah everyone!***

* * *
,places
.places to dream of
,i can only
.dream of

,my western eyes
.have never seen
,my northern ears
.have not yet heard

,though
,when a little bird
,tells me so
.i'm seeing eastern skies

* * *

Enjoy, and love,
I look forward to your entry.
♥k.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on December 25, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 450, Silver: 175, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you.

    I am;
    my heart is pounding. I'm suspiciously torn between each and every poem that you, brilliant writers, have entered. Thank you for showing me such creativity, hope, and kindness.

    It was unexpectedly, but not surprisingly difficult to judge this contest, I've had to rework the point system over and over in an attempt to honour more and more great poems. It's depressing that I can't give everyone a golden trophy and a multitude of points, however, I can give every entry a gold star and thumbs up from afar.

    To the trophy winners I wish you the best of luck, and I hope you all pay it forward =]. To the rest, expect a gold star in the mail, you guys deserve so much more.

    ♥k.

Contest Winners

  1. Narrowing down the cause of sleep,
    down the somber passage to disquieting dreams,
    by Doldrums 31 lines, 19 comments, on Feb 23 2:22 AM. In Thoughts, Dark, Sad, Pain, Weird, Contemporary, My own style, Abstract
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. wide eyed and wet
    i watch
    by righteousme 28 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 9 1:07 PM 2008
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. by amaranthine lover 14 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 18 8:30 AM 2008. In Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Abstract, noguest
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Riding a thread of thought
    along the corridors
    by penman 27 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 9 11:48 AM 2008. In Other
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. You said you couldn’t hold me,
    that no-one ever could,
    by aboomer 28 lines, 22 comments, on Dec 9 1:48 PM 2008. In life, thoughts, memories, love, other
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Beware, escape the constant dangers of acceptance and of settlement / let no walls restrain you on the endless path you walk / The hall is
    by billpoet 21 lines, 196 comments, on Jul 27 9:02 AM 2007. In Thoughts, Lost in thought, Philosophy
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. by SoundofMadness 9 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 12 1:26 AM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3677536, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

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  • Manda-Lou
    December 9, 2008
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    Wonderful

    I love it haha


  • TransparentOpacity
    December 9, 2008
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    can we enter poetry on any subject ???????


    • Kirs
      December 9, 2008
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      Subject?

      Anything you wish! Just be creative--it's all I ask


  • TransparentOpacity
    December 9, 2008
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    creative ... as in i have taken a subject which is quite different ..... will tat work for you ??


    • Kirs
      December 9, 2008
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      =D

      Whatever you see fit!
      Enter and be merry.


  • Paloszoo gold member
    December 22, 2008
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    Lyrics:

    THERE IS AN END - The Greenhornes

  • Doldrums
    December 24, 2008
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    Wow, I wasn’t expecting that kind of reaction! I’m very pleased you found my piece to be so rejuvenating. I should explain that the “punctuated” title is referring to the final draft. The “unpunctuated” version is simply that, unpunctuated. Given the odd nature of the poem, I decided to relearn the rules of sentence structure and parenthetical phrasing. I do have many other works; however, they are also in the process of revision.

    I should also mention that, I’m taking the time now to really restructure my writing into a new format that’s just as innovative and articulate as all my previous works. Admittedly, I’ve been working on a particular poem since 2004! Its just been over the course of the past year that I’ve managed to grow enough as a writer to make any significant progress on it. After all, patience is the most important tool of any writer.


    • Kirs
      December 28, 2008
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      I look forward to seeing more of your work, congrats.
      ♥.


  • aboomer silver member
    December 26, 2008
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    Thank you so much for the HM and the wonderful song inspiration. Congrats to all the winners

    • Kirs
      December 28, 2008
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      Thank YOU so much for your great write I hope you enjoyed the contest as much as I had, I'd seen you'd paid close attention to the other entries.
      ♥.

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