Can You Ever Get Enough Blood? Well, that is a question I often ask myself. And the answer is "no". I need fresh blood all the time.
Please write me a nice poem about how you long for the taste of fresh blood on your tongue. Or other parts of the body if you insist.
Please try not to make any grammatical errors unless you want your throat ripped out.
Best wishes from Count Orlok, your eco-friendly neighbourhood vampire.
Please write me a nice poem about how you long for the taste of fresh blood on your tongue. Or other parts of the body if you insist.
Please try not to make any grammatical errors unless you want your throat ripped out.
Best wishes from Count Orlok, your eco-friendly neighbourhood vampire.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 23
- Rewards: Gold: 400
- Final notes: Several quite good entries. However so many are filled with stereotypes and so many lack originality. Gold was a clear first. The others struck lucky.
Contest Winners
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"Forgive me, Father, for I have sinned."
"Come to me, Child. Condfide in me."by AngelaWilliams 33 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 22 10:18 AM. In Vampire, Fetish, Pain, Religion, Homosexuality, Society, Humour.
Gold trophy winner
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Sifting through the dreaded falls of day
The likes and unlikes tugging at me• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
I am stalking your every foot step
I am black painted onto invisibility• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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you "blood drinkers" are all fake
sip your cow blood and tomato juiceby bladesrsharp 15 lines, 10 comments, on Dec 9 2:25 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
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My vicious ruby-red eyes scan for weak
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Standing in a pool of your own blood,
You fall to your knees, tears flowing freely downward.by Calingaladha 22 lines, 15 comments, on Apr 7 7:25 PM 2007. In Dark, Weird, Flames, Apocalypse, Damned, Hell• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Bloodlust 01-01-09
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i crave your taste.
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Written in college with a friend.by songstress80 14 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 13 11:56 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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drown with me
in the flood.by KiLL ME WiTH A KiSS 23 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 15 11:17 AM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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She holds his heart in her hand
It's broken, no, shredded.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
To sharpen my teeth
would be to rule the world• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
As I approach that naked space
above your breasts your smiling face• Commented on by judge.
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Hahahahah they made a South Park episode about this.
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Possibly. However I do not watch children's television programmes, so I must have missed it.
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It's actually not a children's television program. It's rated "mature", which means it's the opposite of that.
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It's a cartoon. And is shown on children's TV in Britain. Maybe we have more mature children here. Anyway, their blood tastes very mature.
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So you're a murderer? How quaint.
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Murderer's need love too...so do the undead
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So you're saying a murderer, let's just say.. Ted Bundy, who bludgeoned, strangled, raped, performed necrophelia on, and ultimitely murdered over 30 women needs love?
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apparently so, lol, The way i see it he was just crying out for attension. Strangulation is just a different way to say "Intense Hug"
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You're pretty much saying that if someone did that to your parents, you'd just give them a hug?
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apparently sarcasm isn't picked up over the internet as easily as it is in real life
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You're saying people pretending to be vampires aren't idiots? Wow.
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Seeing as the mods deleted my original comment i'll give you this one.
I agree that someone pretending to be a vampire is dumb, but seeing as it doesn't bother me i don't bother wasting my time pointing it out, cause it has nothing to do with me
And unlike my original comment i'll refrase this comment
For you to make it a point to come after someone pretending to be a vampire when it doesn't concern you, thats a very ignorant thing for you to do
I have other choice words for your actions however the mods get heated at me everytime i defend myself or others on this site, so i'll leave it be
And to any mod reading this, READ WHAT HE SAID TO MYSELF AND ORLOC
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you misspelled "programs"
I suppose its hard to type with one hand while your decapitating a virgin in the other eh?
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It's "programmes," at least to me & other British English speakers.
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There is a reason we kicked you guys off our continent, we preffer to slaughter the english language as often as possible
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You misspelled prefer.
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hahaha, lol, whoops
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ladies and gents...please stop being immature! if you don't like something then leave it be and ignore it, especially when dealing with things online. all you are doing is yelling at a screen and typing furiously to words and letters. sometimes you gotta learn to let some things go. thanks for reading this, and extra thanks to those who actually act mature.
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Sorry If I'm Late didn't read the closing date till after I entered. Hope you will still consider my poem, Love the Idea of this contest.
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