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round one; [&my weakness is that i care too much♥]


it is what it is,
what i need from you is some amazing prose & freeverse poetry (: think you can do that for me?

like mentioned; this IS a rounds contest, which means if you end up in the finalists, you HAVE to commit yourself to going through the next rounds. i have nooo idea how many i'm going to do, but there WILL be a lot this time. each round is different. one round you might have to collab with someone else in the contest, another round you might have to write a poem about cheese. you never know. (;
here's how it works;
round one is simple: enter your best prose/freeverse prewrite. you may enter ONE. so make sure it's your best. i will be very critical and honest with judging in this contest, because for further rounds, i'm gonna need the best poets on allpoetry.

here's how it'll work ;
you enter your poem, i grade it. i'll be grading each poem this round out of 10 . an 8.5/10 and up are automatically in the finalists; below that can either a] remove their poem and enter a new one or b]edit the places where it needs work and then message me when you've done so. i will TELL you if you're in the finalists, and i will TELL you if you're not. pretty simple, huh?

-rules
-freeverse&prose ONLY. no rhyming this time, guys.
-i'll only DQ if necessary or if it is a rhyming piece
-metaphors and imagery are a double thumbs up :]
-spellcheck is your friend (: use it .
-have fun :] & please don't take anything i say to heart.

have fun guys,
round one has now began♥

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on January 18
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 400, Bronze: 300, Honorable mention: 7 people
  • Final notes:
    sorry this took so long to judge. i've been reallyyy busy with personal shit and my art school and just school in general, but hey, i finally got it done. (: sorry if i didn't comment all the entries; the ones that are in finalists are supposed to be there. i did read every poem, thought about it, and gave it myyy personal opinion. so that's how this round worked.

    look for round 2; it'll be up sometime today. i still have to think of something for it thank you for being so patient! and congrats to everyone (:

Contest Winners

  1. Our hearts danced together,
    in a prolonged illusion I almost dared call peace.
    by xxRainbowDawnxx 65 lines, 21 comments, on Oct 29 7:08 PM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Love
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. by Never Fall in Love 72 lines, 57 comments, on Nov 2 7:04 AM 2008
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. by aanika 44 lines, 32 comments, on Nov 27 6:59 PM 2008
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. caeca invidia est.
    whoever said that love is blind has a lot to learn from envy. envy, one of the seven deadly sins with a color to match
    by etoile 30 lines, 21 comments, on Dec 6 8:18 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. by lyrebird 36 lines, 43 comments, on Dec 1 9:51 PM 2008. In Personal, Life, Contest, Angst, Pain, noguest, Eating Disorder
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. by stargazer. 58 lines, 37 comments, on Dec 14 8:35 AM 2008. In freeverse, prose-like, prose
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. by stasis 28 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 20 9:36 PM 2008. In personal, life, thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. by broken-colours 13 lines, 15 comments, on Nov 28 9:26 PM 2008. In white chocolate
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. by lowercase prelude 34 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 7 1:58 AM 2008. In Life
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  10. Mildew garnished spectacles give sight of war torn back alleys
    filled with hoboes, pot pies, horse flies,
    and vomiting clowns drunk on r
    by lunarlunacy 52 lines, 32 comments, on Sep 22 8:02 PM 2008. In Life, Spiritual, Society, Humor
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  11. It felt like I had swallowed sharp stones.
    Soon animated, they slowly slithered up my throat--
    by Hell In Harmony 35 lines, 21 comments, on Mar 27 1:39 AM 2008. In Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Life, Weird
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  12. The streetlights overhead quietly hum a never ending tune,
    While the puddles loudly splash as the rain pelts them prudently.
    by ChunkyC 39 lines, 14 comments, on Aug 19 2:19 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  13. Stepping out of darkness
    to three quarters light
    by isabellacohen 47 lines, 16 comments, on Nov 18 5:13 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  14. by CitrineSunrise 55 lines, 27 comments, on Feb 23 3:51 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  15. She lays afloat a pool of midnight blue
    The water is liquid crystal, its as deep as her mind and it cools her skin
    by Rhythm Child 44 lines, 71 comments, on Nov 28 4:18 PM 2008. In Dark, Life, Love, Spiritual, Sad, Death, Dedication, Longing, noguest
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  16. by weewatto 44 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 8 7:10 AM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  17. That Sunday Morning,
    the fresh scent of winter in the air,
    by kylierenea 47 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 28 3:24 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  18. You are a fabrication of my mind.
    You should realize that by now
    by TChaplinette 25 lines, 15 comments, on Dec 15 8:42 PM 2007. In Love, Life, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  19. by coddledsoul 30 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 26 9:02 PM 2008. In noguest
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  20. by ratkos 30 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 3 12:21 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  21. Working upon you in my first care job
    How young and naive I was; not being able to stand up for what's right
    by DinkyDiver 36 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 4 5:02 PM 2008. In Angst, Society, Life
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  22. by seraphim shock 70 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 7 10:06 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  23. "You're only bi cos you're an attention seeking bitch.
    I don't believe you."
    by letters to no one 53 lines, 10 comments, on Dec 6 10:27 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  24. Silent affections echo in his hollow soul.
    by ylova 45 lines, 20 comments, on Dec 15 12:26 AM 2008. In Music, Love, Life, Death, Sad, Thoughts, Melody, Harmony, Memory
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  25. Never ever give to charitiy
    The thought of giving to those in need is great
    by ConjurerCaptainTam 28 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 23 7:15 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  26. The roof-top wobbles and spins out of control
    like a little child's toy as it glides across
    by ccb 39 lines, 12 comments, on Apr 15 10:13 AM 2008. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  27. What's seeen in a dream is the fact of reality.
    by Deaths-Gift-My-Curse 30 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 3 7:36 PM 2008. In Contest, Dark, Personal, Sad, Pain
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  28. Thoughts are to the north
    polar ice caps, logic is
    by word20dragon 32 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 4 6:53 PM 2008. In Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  29. The room closes around me, a gentle darkness moves in
    Magnificently you walk in the doorway catching my stare
    by xBeautifulxHellx 51 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 17 8:37 PM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Love, Escape
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  30. How feeble life is,
    how easily fragmented.
    by PersuingHappyness 19 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 15 11:14 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Hope, Sad, Life
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  31. Twinkle of lights set the stage;
    by HereComesTheSun 24 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 6 11:22 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  32. And with supposed grace, you leave.
    Only to find yourself pacing the small confines of your haunted mind.
    by Candy Morphine 36 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 16 1:27 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • Immortal Obscurity gold member
    December 4, 2008
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    Yay, someone else who gives real comments


  • Never Fall in Love
    December 4, 2008
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    ...


    8.5 is a very high score


    • innocence jaded.xx
      December 4, 2008
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      i know, but i'm not judging too harshly this round;
      i'm taking all the best ones i can get to go onto the further rounds, and then the number will be set lower once the more difficult rounds start


  • stasis
    December 4, 2008
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    I'll find something worthy for you lovebug.

    ♣ Tegan


  • seraphim shock
    December 7, 2008
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    yay! contest.
    i will enter. actually, i already have.

    but i also need to email you those pictures? and i fail at finding your email address.


    • innocence jaded.xx
      December 7, 2008
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      all you have to do is send me the links;
      otherwise my email address is superstar89_2003@yahoo.com


  • letters to no one
    December 8, 2008
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    Bookmarked - I tried to enter, but my internet doesn't let me enter PWs for some reason...

    I'm updating my firefox now, so hopefully that'll fix it


  • DinkyDiver gold member
    January 19
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    so is it the 39 ppl that can enter the next round? x

    • yes, it is the people who are in the finalists or the people who are in the 'round two contestants' column on my page (:

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