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New! Truly Original Poetry Wanted :)

I'm sick of emo bullshit. I just want you to PUT YOUR GUTS IN IT.

I want to read something other than trash. Something, gutsy, & uplifting- if it's dark make it satirical or experimental. If it's sad, make it gushy and full of emotion.

I want empowerment, I want your TRUE FEELINGS. How do you feel about George Bush, The War In Iraq, make it rebellious! Make it revolutionary! Pour your every fiber into writing something that works. For YOU, not just for me to enjoy...and I know that you people can do it.

Oh and the limit has been one entry per person. I couldn't fix it, it was originally 6 but now it's stuck at one. So enter your best! And I truly appreciate all the entries.


I want to read something new for a change. I am sick of the same poetry, it's getting pretty lamo.

write songs, jumble words- call it anything! Call it fun! Just have fun! Good luck!

:::NO RULES::::

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on December 6, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 20, Bronze: 20, Honorable mention: 6 people
  • Final notes:
    I appreciate all the entries so much, and thank you all. I am closing this a little early because I have so many entries, and it's tough to judge. I think all the poems were amazing. The winner though, was in my opinion worth the trophy. We need to see more poems like this. Everyone is a fnalist!!! And I really enjoyed every one of your entries, the decision was tough, so don't feel your entry was bad if u didn't win.

    Peace,

    SweetJane

Contest Winners

  1. Under a leafless green zone tree the curdled hangman stands the Kurd, a narrow man is he, with Halliburton hands; his captive's Chaineyed i
    by Jonathan ROBIN 183 lines, 7 comments, on May 9 3:32 PM 2008. In Society, Parody, Humor, ...one is tempted to add Abuse
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Born free and taxed to death
    Tears of dust are cried
    by BluesMan 38 lines, 27 comments, on Jul 11 3:25 PM 2008
    Silver trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. by Fritz O skennick 47 lines, 33 comments, on Jun 24 6:49 AM 2008. In Dark, Sad, Thoughts, Weird, Love, Old English.
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Turn up you're music, Turn it up loud, It's time to break free, It's time to get out.
    by Kage-saumas-girl 83 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 15 8:49 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. I am a parent,
    One who is torn
    by Simone Brooklyn 33 lines, 26 comments, on Dec 3 12:19 AM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. I take a walk, and look around me
    all these pretty darlings wander
    by ladyhelenaofsorrows 29 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 11 2:42 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Sad, Pain
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. I thought this
    To think this
    by zombietom 70 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 23 10:37 AM 2008. In Thoughts, Spiritual, Hope
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. by leander 35 lines, 29 comments, on Nov 3 5:38 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Anger [remove]
  9. Born in the hills of the
    Dirty South,
    by broncotwister 54 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 2 6:08 PM 2008. In Lyrics, Other
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  10. and yet I breath.... / / / / / / Death from depression / a dreamers disease / that muddles the mind / and weakens the knees / A type o
    by Rakerman1 36 lines, 13 comments, on May 9 1:09 PM 2007. In Dark, Personal, Sad, Pain
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  11. because i don't know how to tell you i love you, i've tried to write you words that only lessen the fact that my words are inadequate and i
    by edit my world. 8 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 2 5:52 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  12. by writeroftoast 0 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 30 1:00 AM 2008. In Society, Sad, Pain, Abuse
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  13. The surrounding grey suffocates her daily,
    And it slowly consumes her,
    by butchbec 29 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 18 4:39 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  14. The day was much too hot for October, I remember
    Biting the inside of my cheek and thinking
    by suddenly-there 7 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 2 6:18 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  15. by stargazer. 15 lines, 12 comments, on Dec 3 4:43 PM 2008. In Love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  16. I expect nothing.
    And [everything].
    by thegirlsafaultline. 16 lines, 24 comments, on Nov 28 6:43 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Love, Lyrics, Other
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  17. My God! These crazy Greeks!
    Build their gods high and their mountains higher
    by Cassandra Gemini 17 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 31 8:16 PM 2008
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  18. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4655647, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  19. by HisFavoriteMistake 19 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 2 7:29 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  20. ~ What then could be,
    if hate saw and felt the evidence,
    by everyone1 200 lines, 55 comments, on Jan 13 11:32 PM. In Contest, Thoughts, Life, Hate, Pain, Sadness, Depression, Spiritual, Inspirat [remove]
  21. by SaviDropKick.Oi. 32 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 28 4:39 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  22. I'm on an intermission and I'm on a writers strike A war against the King of pens, I'd prefer a sword but I would like to fight this fairly. Staring in-between the lines I'm hidden behing grains and grimes, the sea of ink
    by sixxstringlove 6 lines, on Mar 24 12:23 PM 2008
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  23. Forget the standards,
    Forget what they say,
    by Sticks-And-Stones 30 lines, 11 comments, on Oct 4 7:45 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  24. you go walking the streets with hollowed cheeks
    pulling on doors to find a place to sleep
    by Elenaliz 63 lines, 20 comments, on Feb 3 7:27 PM 2008. In Sad
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  25. by lowercase prelude 32 lines, 68 comments, on Sep 11 9:58 PM 2008. In Society, Life
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  26. "Sunsets the world over
    washed under that glowing land"
    by TobiasBathory 26 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 28 6:17 PM 2008. In A celebration by a kingdom, of a lords sister who is carring his baby.
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  27. As[h]es are covering me by the second.
    I look up.
    by thegirlsafaultline. 15 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 28 8:37 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Hope, Life, Love, Other
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  28. this end of the red string is tied on my finger
    by I143alllpoetry 32 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 2 10:00 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  29. {}[] anon o mouths
    (use the lisp in tend ed)
    and yes, u are more elegant than i {}[]
    by delayedscreening 44 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 9 10:39 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  30. Bliss is waking up in the groggy afternoon;
    Sticky thighs and fingers gripping,
    by Julianne Michelle 21 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 29 2:15 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  31. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4824235, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  32. by femurlee 29 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 23 9:42 PM 2007. In Society, Thoughts, Contest, Culture
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  33. by funnybone 33 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 17 6:57 PM 2008. In Humor, Nature, Adult
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  34. At the foot of destiny
    Staring into the future
    by vampedvixen 11 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 2 8:42 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  35. Difting away,
    our childhood fades,
    by Coffer 27 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 22 7:17 PM 2008. In Contest, Personal, Life, Sad
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  36. Why trust him
    So many blind spots
    by loves fading fast4me 19 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 2 7:57 PM 2008. In Love, Thoughts, Sad, Pain, Personal
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  37. The c in this road wind at amazing s p e e d s.
    u
    by thegirlsafaultline. 85 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 27 3:31 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Life, Pain, Personal, Weird, Dirty Pretty, Other
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  38. Let go!
    let go of it!
    by Elenaliz 45 lines, 12 comments, on Dec 18 4:58 AM 2007
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  39. come and you comment on mine,
    and i'll go and comment on yours.
    by siqminded 19 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 2 7:28 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  40. Through poetry,
    my mind gets in touch
    by Midori-Ayana 23 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 6 7:40 PM 2004. In Personal
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  41. I take a seat
    amid the weeds & dead flowers~
    by Floorboards 59 lines, 121 comments, on Feb 19 1:32 PM 2007. In Life, Thoughts, Society, Other, Nature
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  42. by Glasyalabolas 49 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 21 1:28 PM 2008. In Society, Humanity, Abstract, Weird, Freewrite
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  43. by Vagabond Samurai 93 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 3 11:26 AM 2008. In Society
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  44. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4829931, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  45. Tape your scars back together.
    Don’t rush boy you’ve got time.
    by greenheart4 28 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 2 12:33 PM 2008. In dark, angst, lyrics, pain, personal, sad, thoughts, other
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  46. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4636749, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  47. I hate Conservatives
    but then again I can't
    by Lea- 17 lines, on Dec 3 9:43 PM 2008
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  48. by Age of Rain 29 lines, 37 comments, on May 5 7:07 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  49. I don't mind
    I don't care
    by ResplendentCloud 16 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 14 10:41 PM 2008
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  50. To hold you
    Take you by my side
    by darkchemgirl 9 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 13 12:35 PM 2008. In Hope, Despair, Love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  51. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4484893, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  52. by mackereth 15 lines, 29 comments, on Aug 31 12:34 AM 2007. In Love, Pain, Sad
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • edit my world.
    December 2, 2008
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    how many times can you enter


    • Oleander
      December 2, 2008
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      Six entries!! Thanks for ur interest!

      • edit my world.
        December 2, 2008
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        wooooo
        the title really caught my eye actually lol

      • edit my world.
        December 2, 2008
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        umm its not letting me put in more entries!!

        • Oleander
          December 2, 2008
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          It should, I changed it for six entires.

          • edit my world.
            December 2, 2008
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            nuh uh it keeps replacing my earlier entries


            • Oleander
              December 2, 2008
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              hmm, I hope it gets fixed eventually. I will try to look back and see if I missed something. Other than that, just if you can submit your best for now.

  • Judith Chandler
    December 2, 2008
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    Good for you. Let's hear it for originality.


  • ladyhelenaofsorrows
    December 2, 2008
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    it's replacing my first entry.....


    • Oleander
      December 2, 2008
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      Okie dokie I hope you enter your best, I think the limit must be set to one.
      I'll try to change that though.


  • Oleander
    December 2, 2008
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    i was in the mood to read original poetry, boy was I pleasantly surprised! thanks all for your entries and by all means keep em' coming! I enjoy reading them.

    Peace


  • Oleander
    December 2, 2008
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    Ok, I may have to get back to these poems later- tomorrow hopefully. I need to be really in the receptive mood to read them. Thanks for he entries, wasn't expecting so many!!

    Peace,

    SweetJane


  • Oleander
    December 3, 2008
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    Oh, and I promise to read all your poems thouroghly. This is going ot be a tough one to judge.


  • Glasyalabolas
    December 3, 2008
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    I'm having the same problem...it's only allowing one entry per person.


    • Oleander
      December 3, 2008
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      Yeah I dont know how to fix this, myst be a bug...guess we'll have to limit them to one entry per person.


    • Oleander
      December 4, 2008
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      I changed it to one, so there'd be no confusion. It might be easier this way anways, so maaany entries. LOL.


  • Oleander
    December 3, 2008
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    Gosh this is gonna be a hard contest to judge. Each poem in its own originality spoke to me in a completely different way, good luck everyone>


    • lysdarling
      December 3, 2008
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      thanks for holding this contest! i hate judging though, especially when you have a lot of great entries!! good luck with that


      • Oleander
        December 4, 2008
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        Oh sure, your welcome! yeah, it's a toughy. But I am enjoying getting so many of these great entries! Thanks too. Did you enter?

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