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These Feelings I Feel

Show me feelings of all types. Bombard me with emotion.
I want to see them all!!!

You can write it however you like. The catch is I have to be able to understand it, and it can't be more than 25 lines.

So curse, rant, rave or sing, sooth, and lave. I don't care... you show me your emotions and I'll give you my points.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on December 7, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 100, Bronze: 63, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    These five writes touched a special place in my heart and I want to thank the writers for sharing them with me. The other entries gaving me more to think about and for that I am thankful. Congrats to our winners and I look forward to the next contest.

Contest Winners

  1. Ecstasy 2 (original)
    My fingers touch your empty heart
    Unspoken words of who thou art
    by stella187 36 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 14 8:59 PM 2008. In Love, Life, Thoughts
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. The Strongest Emotion
    Roaring flames consume all guilt,
    no regrets.
    by CMartin 13 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 1 10:24 PM 2008. In Dark, Pain, Other, Sad, Anger, Hate, Angry
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. The Beautiful Letdown.
    You pushed your heart against my chest, and my forces
    equalized with yours like magnets, so I had no choice
    by innocence jaded.xx 26 lines, 15 comments, on Nov 16 3:58 PM 2008
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. She doesn't notice me
    Sunshine is always found
    Whenever she comes around
    by jamesbliss 22 lines, 20 comments, on Nov 24 4:10 PM 2008. In Love, Hope, Angst, Romance, Happiness
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. Love For The Wicked
    When faith in myself
    Was crashing to Hell's gate
    by vampedvixen 9 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 2 8:36 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • Lagrimas
    December 2, 2008
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    Not reading the intro

    Hey Folks, little bit of a problem. A few of your pieces are over the 25 line limit. I love that you want to enter but that was one of only two rules I set for this. I'm sorry but those over the limit will be removed.


    • Paloszoo gold member
      December 2, 2008
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      Mine was removed and it was only 20 lines, although with the picture and the picture credit line, it displayed that it was 29 lines. Oh well.


  • FAH faithandhope
    December 3, 2008
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    My poem is 24 lines however, AP shows it as being 29 lines. They seem to do this on quite a few of the poems I have noticed.

  • Lagrimas
    December 3, 2008
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    Line count issues

    My apologies, I have been going by the line count given and didn't realize that it was inaccurate. Please feel free to resubmit your entries if they've been removed so long as they meet the 25 line limit.

    • Paloszoo gold member
      December 3, 2008
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      Thank you I took the picture credit out of the poem text area and put it in the notes instead. Now with the picture it shows as being 24 lines (although it's only 20), which meets your criterium. Thanks again.

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