as long as you
take my breath away…..
-be amazing
-keep it short [[ hahah less than 50 lines?]]
-left align
take my breath away…..
-be amazing
-keep it short [[ hahah less than 50 lines?]]
-left align
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 10, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: thank you all so much for entering
and i am so sorry for not commenting on all of your poems
they were amazing
i just have been really swamped with things
sorry for taking so long to judge
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Contest Winners
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I believed that truths were just
lies in disguise and raindrops were• Viewed by judge. [remove] -
Strolling past my school, I see a ball of snow that looks like my ex girl friend’s head
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every silent whipser that brushes through
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
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Lost are so many children today in this world moving so fast and the children so pressured by their piers . What is this rush that the chby storiesuntold 39 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 27 7:48 PM 2008. In Hope• Viewed by judge.
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your lungs burn into ashes
your airway soon crashesby poet of justice 23 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 27 7:48 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
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Tomorrow i want to tell you, i love youby I143alllpoetry 16 lines, on Nov 27 10:55 PM 2008. In pain personal• Viewed by judge.
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In mood for freedom, I want to escape.
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2 be the laughing stock of a barrel
2 involve yourself in a xmas carol,by anonymousjo 53 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 28 7:41 AM 2008. In life• Viewed by judge. -
A thief with a heart
Is what I desireby vampedvixen 18 lines, on Nov 28 6:10 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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no prewrites
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i sorry
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you can send me what you thought was so amazing
and
i know you can do it
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How short is short?
Haha, I probably shouldn't even bother asking, seeing as all of my poems have been like... 12 lines long lately, but I figured I may as well ask, in case I try to enter and wind up writing something that can actually be considered a worthy poem.
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hahah
its ok
i guess short
means
hah
if your going to suck
make it bearable
hahaha
lol
but
that is fine
hahah
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i like anything..
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great lines, love =]
brilliant. hopefully i'll find something to write ! -
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kk
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thanks my love <333
and i forgive you for not commenting
ahaa
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