Finally eighteen, so I can do this...
Says it all in the title. Seduce me. If you're female, write it from your perspective, if you're male, make it third person, or omniscient.
Homosexual sex just doesn't excite me. That goes for lesbians as well, mind you. It tends to be overplayed, and I've grown somewhat numb to it, you know?
I like detail, so make sure you're making it... hot.
You'll get points for creativity, as well. Make it zesty, and interesting to read.
Fetishes you might want to use:
BDSM, podophilia*, roleplaying, biting, switching, deprivation, sex in public...
You can try other fetishes as well, but those are my main thrills.
It can also be vanilla sex, but you gotta make it well articulated.
* Podophilia: A sexual interest in feet. Yes, feet. As in toes, ankle, sole, heel.
~Use PROPER punctuation, spelling, grammar, etc. If your piece doesn't have this, don't care how good the writing is, I'm deleting it.
~Prewrites are OK
~Be sick and disgusting as you want, but
~No scat. Not a turn on for me. Urine okay, if you wish.
~Also has to follow site rules.
~If you're able to totally turn me on, I'll be impressed.
Sorry the points are so low. I've got, like, no points. If people want to donate, the prizes will be higher
Says it all in the title. Seduce me. If you're female, write it from your perspective, if you're male, make it third person, or omniscient.
Homosexual sex just doesn't excite me. That goes for lesbians as well, mind you. It tends to be overplayed, and I've grown somewhat numb to it, you know?
I like detail, so make sure you're making it... hot.
You'll get points for creativity, as well. Make it zesty, and interesting to read.
Fetishes you might want to use:
BDSM, podophilia*, roleplaying, biting, switching, deprivation, sex in public...
You can try other fetishes as well, but those are my main thrills.
It can also be vanilla sex, but you gotta make it well articulated.
* Podophilia: A sexual interest in feet. Yes, feet. As in toes, ankle, sole, heel.
~Use PROPER punctuation, spelling, grammar, etc. If your piece doesn't have this, don't care how good the writing is, I'm deleting it.
~Prewrites are OK
~Be sick and disgusting as you want, but
~No scat. Not a turn on for me. Urine okay, if you wish.
~Also has to follow site rules.
~If you're able to totally turn me on, I'll be impressed.
Sorry the points are so low. I've got, like, no points. If people want to donate, the prizes will be higher
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 29, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 50, Bronze: 10
- Final notes: Sorry I didn't get around to commenting every poem yet....
I did read them all though, and I plan to get to commenting the ones I didn't soon. I just didn't want to run out of time for judging the contest, and I don't like leaving comments that don't say anything, ya know?
Congrats to the finalists.
Contest Winners
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pleasure from this pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by lordoftherings 75 lines, 35 comments, on Mar 18 12:57 PM 2004. In Erotica, Adult, Hope
Silver trophy winner
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Gold trophy winner
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by ThornPuppet 1 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 7 11:56 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The feel of her skin, soft like velvet
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by Innocent-Lies 22 lines, 17 comments, on Dec 7 10:55 AM 2008. In Erotica, Sensual, Escape, Lost in thought, sex, Happiness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You're so sweet, you seem so sweet.by greenheart4 26 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 15 3:41 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A bed of fragranced roses / Red, white. And sedative candlelights / A cold breeze upon my bare skin / Curtains are dancing.. / My heart is• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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We were born from porn, dirty, horny sex is in the blood
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Sorry, but it says you cannot view adult material.
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Its says you can't view it hon
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Just fixed that.
Didn't realize I had to change it manually to say I'm eighteen. -
And, by the way, anyone having a panic attack over the fetishes I listed,
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"vanilla sex" and "Urine okay, if you wish."
.....I'm laughing so hard I think I might pee my pants
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i think youll like my poem if u like fetish, even if you say you dont want lesbian erotica. (personally i think het erotica is overplayed. you see soft porn everyday with het, not with lesbian give it a chance)
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Just a small counter-argument before I say more:
I tend to actually see more girl-on-girl than I do girl-on-guy; especially in fetish porn.
I hardly watch porn at all, truly, but what I've seen, plus the constant exposure that's just out there... It gets me bored.
Fetish can work great with either orientation, but it should probably be something that focuses more around the fetish itself, than the bodies involved. (Or the rest of the bodies, if the fetish is focused around a body part.)
You need to tap into the sexuality of the fetish, not the sexuality of the persons, so much.
For a little more detail on my thoughts here, look at my response to the post below
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"Homosexual sex just doesn't excite me. That goes for lesbians as well, mind you. It tends to be overplayed, and I've grown somewhat numb to it, you know?"
I love when hosts write statements in their contests like this example to give me the chance to challenge them -- in a friendly way, not to start a war.
I am a writer and love to pen gay erotica -- and I have entered a series of poems throughout this websites in legitimate contests -- those that call for specific topics that includes gay erotica in their rules -- and the other ones I enter, are such like yours.
I always giggle to myself when I do this. Because i have been known with my gay erotica to change even the hardcore who say that they would rather not see it in their contst because it doesn't "excite" them.
Well, I think the use of the word "excite" is not the proper word here. But we can discuss that later so I don't digress too much.
I have discovered through their comments it is how the poem is penned. With just the write word usage, imagery and use of senses I have heard that in the end it doesn't even matter it was gay erotica they were reading -- thye were feeling and relating to the sensual journey that they were on. (There is a difference between
"excitement" and "sensual journey")
Now you may DQ me if you wish because I am aware of your views on it, but I ask you dear host, to give it a try and see if really after all, you may enjoy a gay erotica poem just once in awhile, there is no shame in that -- like I respond to the sensuality of lesbian and heterosexual erotic poetry, -- which is also no shame to my sexuality -- it's the hormones in the brain that are doing the reacting as I (we) am/are reading,
Hope you the best in your contest and wish you a happy season.
Gregg
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Before going any further: I truly have nothing against gays. In fact, I led my high school Gay straight alliance for three years, and a number of my friends are gay/bi/les/asexual. If that was a misperception for ANYONE, than let's hope that's cleared up.
When I wrote that, I had in mind the concept of...
basically, erotica that falls under the genre's overdosed concept, and just becomes cheesy.
You know, the stuff that appeals to guys who see girls kissing, and think it's the most awesome thing in the world. It consumes a lot of the porn out there, and though I'm hardly a porn fan, I've seen enough to get bored with it.
Looking back at it, I originally conveyed what I wanted to say in a bad light.
If it's great erotica, it'll cross the orientation bounds. But it's going to have to be really something amazing, something with expert wording, and intense sensuality.
I have a tendency to give a low estimate of people's ability, so
A) I'm rarely too disappointed, and
I can be impressed.
With that attitude, I don't expect people to show me exceptional stuff.
I will admit, there is a part of me, that comes out on rare occasions, that is pansexual. If you can tap into that, you'll probably impress me greatly. If not, your piece will bore me.
If you want to take the challenge, be my guest.
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Sorry didnt read the other comments! I personally hate what passes for "lesbian porn" its not realistic and its not raw (i like raw) and its all about two girls giggling in bed or something...that is NOT the kinda thing i write.
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damnit.
I just checked this out today,
so I missed it. =/
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i entered just for fun, i thought it would be. hehe
though my poem isn't all that seductive it has its own little spice to it. a strong sense of lust.
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