Contest Make Me Cry by SeptemberFaith at All poetry

It is simple. My heart is breaking and I just want to let it all go. Make me cry. I want true, real, horrid pain. Whoever makes my heart ACHE the most, wins.

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on January 9
Rewards: Gold: 800
Final notes:
I almost cried on the winners poem, but still no tears. So since it came the close it gets gold. All these poems were good in their own way. Thank you for your time.

Criss

Contest Winners

Now And Forever

My tears are endless, watching you
So weak, so pale, but beautiful forever

by Peachy 23 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 23 4:53 AM 2008. In Sad, Pain, Hope, Death
Gold trophy winner

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[ Go ahead. ]

Go ahead.
Lean against harsh brick-

by Livingemptyspaces 20 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 22 10:38 PM 2008
Bronze trophy winner

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Entries [24]

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Parting

i almost cried well writting this....

by SimplyNoodle 19 lines, 23 comments, on Nov 22 9:29 PM 2008

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The Wolf

the wolf is knocking at my door
I am doing my best to dematerialize

by IrishGypsyRose 19 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 22 10:29 PM 2008. In Personal, Pain, Angst, Fear, Dark

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Traumatized

My mom is relaxing in the Lay-Z-Boy,
My brothers and me hanging on the couch,

by The Jade Tiger 44 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 22 10:30 PM 2008. In Life, Abuse, Pain, Personal, Sad

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destroying her progress.

it was just an innocent party
that she was about to go to.

by xbeautifulxdisasterx 50 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 22 10:51 PM 2008

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i'd thought wrong

i thought it would make it easier
that it would ease the pain

by solitarytear 28 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 23 4:31 AM 2008. In Life, Sad, Pain, Contest, Death, Sadness, Lost love, Message, Loss, Goodbyes

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A day less ordinary.

A day less ordinary.
The murky mind slipping from reality.

by simonn 22 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 4 12:55 AM 2008. In Angst, Dark, Pain, Personal, Sad

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killing me softly

i'm a demon
a killer.

by HannahsDead 6 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 23 9:04 AM 2008. In Pain, Dark, Nature, Society

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Within the Sparkle Lay My Tear

If you ask a woman or a girl have you ever looked through the pain have you in your reflection seen the light as it would drain .To stop

by storiesuntold 40 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 23 12:10 PM 2008. In Dark, Pain, Personal, Sad, Society, Thoughts

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daddy take me with you

Daddy take me with you,
I promise ill be good,

by starving-to-survive 64 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 5 11:39 AM 2008. In Abuse, Pain, Sad, neglect, mistrust

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Thoughts of a horse sent away

i was there for you when no one else cared.
i helped you smile when you thought you never would again.

by laimra 33 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 23 6:46 PM 2008

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If you knew would you change your mind?

Deprived of human passion, stimulated by your rejection
Holding on by the thinnest of thread, wrapped around your finger

by damagedfaith 30 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 4 8:27 AM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Dark, Other, Anger, Depression, Thoughts, Loss

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Precious Little Stones

We live with lies in our closets
and never let them out.

by Swan song 27 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 5 5:59 PM 2008. In Sad

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Empty Places

by fatality-rhymed77 26 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 23 6:29 PM 2008. In Sad, Pain

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Tattooed

As the blackness fills my chest
My heart does die

by wflyin 34 lines, on Nov 24 12:40 AM 2008

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Children

by pain in colorado 21 lines, on Nov 24 4:27 PM 2008. In Adult, Love, Life, Angst, Sad

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to Mandy Jo

A true story of a dear friend.

by WordsDoMatter 41 lines, 43 comments, on Nov 25 7:42 AM 2008. In Sorrow, friendship, death, anguish, anorexia

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who I once was

by A63-Angel 74 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 24 8:16 PM 2008. In Contest, make me cry

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Lies Of A Loss

Going away,
I take one last look behind,

by abeautifuldisaster 35 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 2 4:12 AM 2008. In Life, Love, Lyrics, Sad

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Not forever..

I know you think we don't care
Just don't give a damn about your feelings of life

by softballa1618 22 lines, on Dec 5 7:21 PM 2008. In pain, other, personal

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The lost one

by AlwaysAloneWithoutU 2 lines, on Nov 26 9:55 PM 2008

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SimplyNoodle
November 22, 2008
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aahhhhs could you please aloow pre-written i just wrote a poem like not even 5 min ago that would work so well in this contest
SimplyNoodle
November 22, 2008
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never mind i just wrote i new one just as good lol
Ellek
November 22, 2008
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Hey I know you said no pre-writes but I have this one I did this morning and I just saw this now if you wanna read it it's my newest one.
mackereth
December 5, 2008
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i have so many Pre-writes that would work so well in this contest....
Mari Goes
December 6, 2008
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So sorry to hear you are feeling sad...
I know the contest is over, but I'd rather make you laugh than cry anyway
- SeptemberFaith
  December 6, 2008
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  Thank you my beautiful friend xoxox
She Stole My Voice
January 9
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Thank you so much for silver!
<3
- SeptemberFaith
  January 9
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  short and very good